Ok so I hope I don't come across as the "Please oh please read my story and legitimize it!" type, but I could use a little feedback. It's a morbidly rough draft and still very early in the story, but once I get the placenta off, and give it a good washing, and cut the umbilical cord... and shed my obsession with weird analogies, I think it'll be ok. Any comments would be much appreciated. Here's the link: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...
It's a morbidly rough draft and still very early in the story, but once I get the placenta off, and give it a good washing, and cut the umbilical cord... and shed my obsession with weird analogies, I think it'll be ok. Any comments would be much appreciated.
Here's the link: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...