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This is just the right length to get the message over. But it is quite dark and hard to see what's going on in places, and some of the blurb just appears on the screen at the transitions, in capital letters, with the rest floating up later. This isn't something I've seen before, and I'm not sure that it works as well as the more usual way of floating everything up together - it felt as if it had been left behind by the last short scene. But overall, I liked the wordings of the blurb and it was very clear to read (I am dyslexic and had no trouble reading it at all). Well done you! <3

Quite moving, really conveys a lot of action, danger and adventure. Good job on the trailer. www.colleenbooks.com