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Storm The Tiny Hooman ~hiatus~ (asherbookreviews) This is where we can show either writing we did for school or writing we did in our free time


Storm The Tiny Hooman ~hiatus~ (asherbookreviews) What does Denzel mean when he speaks about “Falling Forward”?
He means that when you fall forward what I got from it is that you fall into something either great or bad.


Do you agree with his statement: “If you do not fail you are not even trying”?
I agree with his statement. If you succeed at everything then you are cheating. If you fail it shows that you were trying super hard and that you just need more work at it.


What does Denzel mean by his saying “You never see a U-Haul attached to a hearse”?
Denzel means with the saying “You never see a U-Haul attached to a hearse” that no matter how many adventures you took or what you did when you were alive you cannot take that into your afterlife.


Overall, what are your thoughts on Denzel Washington’s speech? Do you agree or disagree with some of his key points?
I do agree with Denzel Washington’s speech. My thoughts are that he spoke amazingly even though he got off topic he did get straight to the point and was brutally honest. That’s something I feel like more people should do in their speeches instead of just talking about random things during the majority of the speech.


little bit I did


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kinda long- there's swearing and stuff

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the rest i have so far-

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Storm The Tiny Hooman ~hiatus~ (asherbookreviews) Thats really good. I would just use the spoilers for anything really romancy or smut


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true- idk people don't like swearing sometimes
plus its kinda long so idk if people wanna scroll through all that just comment


Rouh || رُوح Wooooooooowwwww! Love that so far!!
The swearing wasn't that tough, was involved to help the plot as i understood. Overall you're talanted!<3


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Rouh || رُوح Asher ~semi haitus~ wrote: "What does Denzel mean when he speaks about “Falling Forward”?
He means that when you fall forward what I got from it is that you fall into something either great or bad.


Do you agree with his st..."


Didn't heard the speech and unfortunately i have a less knowledge about him. But if he said so i agree with him.
Life is short. I believe it's a passage to the afterlife. The real heaven or hell. Only you decide where you deserve to be in! There isn't any success came with no pain involved. Actually the most successful people, the more pain they have. Life is hard afterall.


Storm The Tiny Hooman ~hiatus~ (asherbookreviews) Ya ty I don't have the video sadly or I would of posted it along with it


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Rouh || رُوح It's okay! It doesn't matter. I like it that you shared your opinion on such subject. I'll google him nevermind.


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Rouh | رُوُح wrote: "Wooooooooowwwww! Love that so far!!
The swearing wasn't that tough, was involved to help the plot as i understood. Overall you're talanted!<3"


thank you!


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awwww thank you! that means a lot, i put a ton of effort into my writings, so thank you so much! I'm glad you like it <33


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maybe-
i have so much i want to do with my life
today i realized i want to keep bees
but i also want to start a farm
and be in the FBI
and start a bird sanctuary
and own chickens
and own crows

im sure i can squeeze part time author and artist in there too though ;)


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I think you do! The FBI/CIA are such wonderful positions, you get to deal with the bad parts of the world and seek to fix them


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Oooooo I remember that Project!!!! i ended up doing the 9th grade level passage about butterflies i think


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Yuh!


message 19: by [Smiles] is trying to return, Waltuh (last edited Mar 30, 2023 04:06AM) (new)

[Smiles] is trying to return (grunebohne) | 419 comments Mod
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Continued...

Beastly things they are. Their leader, Alcatraz, is the worst. She’s made herself from the bodies of those she’s slain. It’s terrifying.

“Of course, we h..."


CONTINUEDDDDD

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[Smiles] is trying to return (grunebohne) | 419 comments Mod
god im so excited to introduce Anubis! I've rewritten his personality, but he's still the same-old manipulative little shit!
But now he introduces himself as a kind, caring, and flirty king~~~


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Pochi | 3 comments Yessss!! I’m so glad this has been made 😫


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[Smiles] is trying to return (grunebohne) | 419 comments Mod
I HAVE MORE~~~


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GRR JUST WAIT UNTIL HE TRIES TO KILL YOU PASHA MUAHAHA


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[Smiles] is trying to return (grunebohne) | 419 comments Mod
i also have no idea where I'm going, or what I'm going to write
I have no plot and no plan
it just exists
and this is fun


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Riley Eh, I like that! Like it is dark but I think it is good! :D
I can see what you mean about seeming like you have depression or some trauma going on there xD

AMAZING JOB! Keep up the good work!!


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Ꞩȼⱥɍ  (g3n_z_killer) | 33 comments I love writing dark poems, twisted versions of lullabies/nursery rhymes and horror stories so I decided to write a horror story using my twisted poems/lullabies

Here is the prologue of the story called Your Worst Lullaby

TW: there was some gore and death in it



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Gieooo:DD | 2 comments

By; Gieo =”3
Date; 10-22-22
Class; ELA
Subject; Halloween Scary Story

The Scp-6789
9:59 pm, Monday night, Lixin’s family cabin wood house;
Lixin and his friends were in the living room enjoying their favorite scary movie. One of Lixin’s friends, Finter, stood up to go towards the kitchen to make more popcorn for everyone. Lixin forgot to close the window next to the main door. At that moment, he stood up quickly and started walking towards the window. He then realized that there was a shadow staring back at him.

“Uhm, guys. . .” he says.
There was a short moment of silence.
“What is that?. . .”
Lixin stopped a few feet from the window and pointed towards the open window. At that moment, everyone turned their focus towards the window. Ryker, Lila and Nyra all stood up. Lila quickly ran and turned the light on and she started walking towards Lixin. The rest of the friends didn’t know what was going on and they felt that somebody was trying to scare them. Lila started laughing and thought someone was trying to play tricks on them since it was Halloween night.

Not being the type of person that’s always scared, Lila walked past Lixin towards the window to close it herself. At an instant she was grabbed by a long boney hand, and just like that she was gone. Lixin, out of shock and fear, couldn't move or speak. It seems like it happened so fast that none of them knew that was going to happen. The two other friend’s ran towards Lixin, and tried to get him back to reality. They started to shake him constantly to get him back to his consciousness.

“Are you ok?!”
“What did you see?”
“Where did she go?” Says Nyra
Ryker screamed at Nyra “Would you stop with all the questions asking!” Ryker knew that Lixin saw something but that he was so scared he couldn’t even open his mouth to speak.
Finter came out with the popcorn he made for everyone and realized there were only three of them standing right by the dining table. Finter was wondering why they were all standing there and not moving. He wanted to ask what was really going on but then proceeded to walk towards the living room. In Finters mind they were probably scared of the movie they were watching earlier on.

11:30 pm, Unexpected Twist
Flinter sat down for a moment and realized that he only saw three of them there. He then began to wonder where his sister had gone at this time of the night without telling him. He slowly turned and asked the other’s if they saw where Lila went.
He could see on their faces that something wasn’t right and he became more worried not knowing what had happened while he was in the kitchen. Lixin started to scream that “The tall shadow creature grabbed her, the tall shadow snatched her!’ he then fell to his knees, starting to cry.

“Where is my sister?”
“If you guys are playing a prank on me it’s not funny.”
“I know it’s Halloween night and it’s not the time to scare my socks off,” said Finter.
From the look of their faces it made Finter more worried that something bad might have happened, to his little sister and their not trying to tell him because they don’t want him to panic.
“What is Lixin talking about a tall shadow creature and what does that have to do with my sister?” he asked with a panicked tone

It was making Finter really mad because none of them were responding to his questions.
He then stood up and walked towards them and was at the point of assuming that one of them might have harmed his sister.

The tall shadow creature was around 60 ft tall, very boney, with rotten flesh all around him. Shadow creature was Hideous, ugly, and had the worst smell ever.

Finter was near them and looked towards the window and saw why they were looking that way. He instantly fell to his knees and wanted to scream but Nyra quickly put her hand over his mouth to prevent him from screaming. Right outside the window, the creature which was so tall they couldn’t see its face had Lila in half, one on the left and right hand. The creature tore her apart into two which instantly killed her.

Instantly they all knew that there was no help on the way, and felt helpless and hopeless. They are in the middle of nowhere and the tall creature is going to kill them and there's nothing they can do about it. How can you escape such a creature that can see you miles and miles away. So they have to come up with a plan quickly if they want to survive and not fall prey to the giant creature.



To be continued?



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