Short Story Connect discussion

Just put up a few of my short stories over at mattantoniades.com. Anyone, please lend me your thoughts. Not bad? Pure junk? Let me know!

I noticed a few errors in your story One That Never Knocks, so I recommend taking another look through. I've read your story all the way through , but it never caught my interest. Since it didn't realty catch my interest, I wasn't able to fully understand the meaning of the story. Randy , your main character, he didn't get the job, after he was suppose to be the next boss?

I could take another look at it, if you want.

Thanks for taking the time to read it. What errors did you find?

Feel free to peruse any of my other stories there too. I'll take all the feedback I can get.

I saw a few grammar and spelling issues