the writer's room discussion

121 views
general > reading you guys story’s! (feedback +light editing)

Comments Showing 1-29 of 29 (29 new)    post a comment »
dateUp arrow    newest »

message 1: by ana ༺♡༻ (new)

ana ༺♡༻ | 7 comments hello everyone! i am ana and i would love to read some of the story’s you have written, or in the process of. if you are writing in google docs share it will me via my gmail (analiseh2021@gmail.com) make sure to make me a commenter or viewer! i can give you feedback or make slight edits. please attach your goodreads username and if you want feedback or slight editing! cant wait to read!!!


message 2: by Tianna (new)

Tianna | 34 comments Hey all! I can also do beta reading for anyone who wants feedback! I can help with the grammar and flow of your story, and I can also help with anyone who wants some feedback about their characters or plot! If there is anything you want to discuss about your story, I am your girl. Feel free to PM me and I can share my email if you want some feedback and to send me your story!


message 3: by Ellie (new)

Ellie Kremer (levisquad888) | 18 comments Hey! Same here. My mom is an editor and she’s helped me with a lot of my works and I’ve learned so much from her already. If you would like anyone to do some editing for a book you plan on publishing, I would love to help❤️❤️ I also enjoy getting to read works like aspiring writers like me. It makes me feel a little less alone😅


message 4: by Macee (new)

Macee Manzz | 9 comments I would love feed back on one of my wips.. I haven't worked on it for months but I would love your opinions! Should I attach a link to the docs here or email them to you separately?


message 5: by ana ༺♡༻ (new)

ana ༺♡༻ | 7 comments Macee wrote: "I would love feed back on one of my wips.. I haven't worked on it for months but I would love your opinions! Should I attach a link to the docs here or email them to you separately?"

hey! you can email it to me (analiseh2021@gmail.com) make sure to make me a viewer (only seeing the writing) or a commenter (i can make comments on your writing that you have to approve) cant wait to read!!


message 6: by Ellie (last edited Apr 20, 2023 07:12AM) (new)

Ellie Kremer (levisquad888) | 18 comments Ellie wrote: "Hey! Same here. My mom is an editor and she’s helped me with a lot of my works and I’ve learned so much from her already. If you would like anyone to do some editing for a book you plan on publishi..."

Same here if you wanted a second opinion! My email is (Eli.kremer8@gmail.com)


message 7: by gabby ୨୧ (new)

gabby ୨୧ (g4bby_8) | 35 comments Mod
Macee wrote: "I would love feed back on one of my wips.. I haven't worked on it for months but I would love your opinions! Should I attach a link to the docs here or email them to you separately?"

my email is gabbyc4488@gmail.com <3


summer (semi-hiatus) | 4 comments hi everyone! if you’d like me to read your story, you can pm me and i’ll give you my email. i’ll give feedback!


message 9: by gabby ୨୧ (new)

gabby ୨୧ (g4bby_8) | 35 comments Mod
hi guys! i'm currently in the process of editing one of my old stories. a lot of it is being restructured, so i'll be slowly adding things to this link. if you're interested in reading this, that would be great, and i would really appreciate it!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1u...


message 10: by Dahlia (new)

Dahlia Tanner-Gauspohl (dahliadanger) | 1 comments hello! i wrote a script and i'd love some feedback!

https://www.icloud.com/iclouddrive/05...

not sure if that'll work, i'm not great with technology.

Thanks!!!


message 11: by Tianna (new)

Tianna | 34 comments ‧͙⁺˚*・༓☾ gabby the certified simp ☽༓・*˚⁺‧͙ wrote: "hi guys! i'm currently in the process of editing one of my old stories. a lot of it is being restructured, so i'll be slowly adding things to this link. if you're interested in reading this, that w..."

Heyy, I'll take a look at it and give you some feedback!


message 12: by gabby ୨୧ (new)

gabby ୨୧ (g4bby_8) | 35 comments Mod
thank you, that would be great!


♬¯·♪·♫¸ kane ¸♫¯·♪¸♩·♬ | 7 comments Hey, guys. I'm starting a story, and I'd like to send it to someone for feedback- it's dark, and bloody, so if you have any triggers related to violence, or if you just can't stomach it, then this wouldn't be a good read for you. My main focus is imagery, and I'm trying to make a story that will really pull a reader in.
I would prefer to send it over PM's, rather than give out my email, if that's alright.


message 14: by ana ༺♡༻ (new)

ana ༺♡༻ | 7 comments eden "hostile but quite harmless" ~ Semi-Active wrote: "Hey, guys. I'm starting a story, and I'd like to send it to someone for feedback- it's dark, and bloody, so if you have any triggers related to violence, or if you just can't stomach it, then this ..."

hey! you can pm it to me. i’d love to read it!


message 15: by Tianna (new)

Tianna | 34 comments eden "hostile but quite harmless" ~ Semi-Active wrote: "Hey, guys. I'm starting a story, and I'd like to send it to someone for feedback- it's dark, and bloody, so if you have any triggers related to violence, or if you just can't stomach it, then this ..."

I'd love to read it! I'm always down for a darker read. Feel free to PM me.


vyn targaryen ˖˚⊹ ꣑ৎ‎ (vyntargaryen) hey guys! if anybody would like to be a beta reader for my WIP, that would be amazing, it’s on google docs so just place your preferred email in the replies and i can totally send it to you! ☺️


vyn targaryen ˖˚⊹ ꣑ৎ‎ (vyntargaryen) actually it’d probably be better if you PM’d me, huh? totally feel free to! 😊


vyn targaryen ˖˚⊹ ꣑ৎ‎ (vyntargaryen) it’s a fantasy novel about an assassin and there are a few triggers so don’t offer unless your comfortable with mentions of suicide and abuse.


message 20: by isabelle ♡ (last edited Jun 06, 2023 04:50AM) (new)

isabelle ♡ evelyn wrote: "hey guys! if anybody would like to be a beta reader for my WIP, that would be amazing, it’s on google docs so just place your preferred email in the replies and i can totally send it to you! ☺️"

Hi! I'm happy to! :D


message 21: by [deleted user] (new)

evelyn wrote: "it’s a fantasy novel about an assassin and there are a few triggers so don’t offer unless your comfortable with mentions of suicide and abuse."

I don't know if this is still up for grabs, but I would love to! I tried PMing you, but it said you weren't accepting messages.


an ungraceful swan evelyn wrote: "hey guys! if anybody would like to be a beta reader for my WIP, that would be amazing, it’s on google docs so just place your preferred email in the replies and i can totally send it to you! ☺️"

I would love to!!


vyn targaryen ˖˚⊹ ꣑ৎ‎ (vyntargaryen) yay! would you mind pming me your email? :))


message 24: by erinlecountluvr (new)

erinlecountluvr (clairecottrilsgf) i have a WIP and it’s not written fully yet, but I’m working on it in Microsoft word! would love any beta readers to share it with later on in the process :)


MINDLESSAMBITION. | 6 comments Currently there are about 4 1/2 chapters of my book (~10k words) ready for review. It’s sort of rough, so I’m only looking for early feedback at the moment; things like pacing, characters, and general impressions.
It does come with a list of content warnings, so if you’d like to inquire further, please send me a private message :)


vyn targaryen ˖˚⊹ ꣑ৎ‎ (vyntargaryen) id love to beta read it! :)


vyn targaryen ˖˚⊹ ꣑ৎ‎ (vyntargaryen) (to both of you ;) )


message 28: by erinlecountluvr (new)

erinlecountluvr (clairecottrilsgf) hi popping on here to put my email (zluvsreading@gmail.com) in case anyone needs light editing or a full on beta read with comments! :)


vyn targaryen ˖˚⊹ ꣑ৎ‎ (vyntargaryen) hey guys, I'd love some feedback on my story so far! I'm on draft three of my novel and I'm almost at thirty pages. it has four seperate POVs, two female and two male, and the main character, sophronia, is an anti-hero/villain.

would any of you mind reading it? <3

it's a high political fantasy with a bit of romance (but very little spice) and here are the trigger warnings:

descriptions of violence, suicide, abuse, addiction, narcissistic behavior and manipulation

if you'd like to, lmk and pm/dm me your email so i can send it! it's on google docs :) thanks!! xoxo


back to top