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Johnnelle
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May 22, 2023 10:56PM
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“I thought m safe,” doesn’t fit the first stanza as well as other word choices may. I love the sentiment and overall feel and subject of this🥰 You’re talented. There aren’t many modern poet that are worth a shit…other than a handful of songwriters🤷🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️🥰


