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POETRY!!!!!!!
Thank you it is still in the makes but you got the gist of it
Here is my second song not really good as the first but tell me if I am wrong.Love Hurts
What does this emptiness feel like
Why do I feel like I have been stabbed
So many times
Why do I let my fears control me
Why do I look deep but fear to fall
For Love is nothing but knife
Love will only leave you
Love is nothing but pain
I have lost the true meaning of love in my vocabualry
For what is love but nothing
For why must I endure this hate
Love is hurt and nothing more
Love will only kill you
Love is something I dreamt as a kid
For love is what Poets dream
Why was I so naive
Why did i care
Why did i let the dagger wound me
Why do I always give it another chance, chance
Why do I always let it in
Why do I always feel this hurt
Why do I see the true meaning of what love is
For love is nothing more than a assassin at night
Love just is a dagger that will kill me
Love is the forbidden fruit
Love are those who died for those they loved
OKAY SO I PLAY GUITAR AND WHENEVER I SIT DOWN A VERSION OF THIS ENDS UP COMING OUT BIT THE START IS ALWAYS MORE-OR-LESS THE SAME AND ITS THISthe sugar turns to honey
and the honey likes the bees
but the bees don't like the sugar
'less it, comes from trees
but it ain't
though it's great
cause the bees like the trees
even when they get cut down
and the trees need the love
they don't get from this town
they're fuckin mean
you go unseen
she likes the mean
and shes a fiend
she loves those goddamn trees
she's a bee
Thank you so much!!!! I never knew my poetry was good tbh
This is a song/poemLove is a Mystery
Love is a Mystery
Love is a passion
Love is what people do when they care for you
But Love can stab you in the back
So what will I do to secure my heart
I dream of Lovers who have died for each others
I dream of books and there romance
Why is Love a cruel Fate
Why does History hate Lovers
Why does our society make women into spectacular of passion and sin
Men can't have
Love is the traitorous vows
Love is the forbidden fruit on the tree
Love is a battle I cannot win
Love is pain that must guide me through Life
Love can be so many things pain or lust
Why do I feel alone
Why do people always leave me
When I need them
Love is the Battle Cry
Love is the White flag
Love is the Broken Shards of glass from the broken mirror
After a fight with someone you love
Love is the mighty roar of the trumpets sound
Love is what
Lovers have died on this hill of emotions
Love has created beautiful people
Love can either make us strong or make us weak
You can find my Poems Published here: https://quizini.com/story/65982b23220...
“i dream of lovers who have died for each others i dream of books and their romance
why is love a cruel fate
why does history hate lovers”
THAT IS SO GOOD
ella wrote: "“i dream of lovers who have died for each others i dream of books and their romance
why is love a cruel fate
why does history hate lovers”
THAT IS SO GOOD"
YOU ARE TO KIND!!!!!!!
that’s so beautiful!it reminds me of the cardigan music video by taylor swift
You all are way better at poetry than me😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
David (the first poem i ever wrote-- i think i put it in another group but not here so wompomp)snakes meet eachother in the dark
but if their feet are too sore
then they cant start an arc
if their tongues don't work
their love cant make a mark
so they tell her a story
the story of a whore
and the glory
of skin on skin
but it was too gory
fish get love like air they need
i gasped in the dark
for the air you feed
me as our teeth tend to meet
in the light that we lead
so she told her story
of gasping and grabbing
but sorely
it was said to be a lie
a story
you lead me to believe
that you were no more
than the snake was to eve
but eve loved nature and didn't like to run
so she learned to grieve
Hey this is one of my poems/song hope you like it!!!Title: Broken Heart
By: London
You break my heart Once I break you twice
Why did you betray my trust and Love
You are nothing to me anymore
You are nothing more but a Horrible person
Why are you still in my mind
Why do I still think of you
You put me on displayed
To show to your friends
I was just your trophy
I was nothing but a object to you to ooh
I will never love you
I will never care for you
I can never trust you
You put a glass cage around me
Why did you put me through this pain this guilt
Why did you care for me like you should
Why tap on this pedestal for your friends to see
I feel so naked without your care and love
So why, so why
did you do it to me
You break my heart, you break my heart
into a million pieces
Now I cannot trust you, now I can't love anymore
So now am going to be alone forever, forever, forever
I LOVE ITTTT
Background knowledge of the Broken Heart:So this was after my second relationship and I was young and I thought it was going to last forever. And he was really toxic but I didn't even know at the time. And he only wanted me cause of my looks and popularity to show to his friends. And after I said I was sick and tired of it he broke up with me...
Sage (Wanda's Version) wrote: "I LOVE ITTTT"thanks!!!
⁺˚⋆｡°✩London⁺✩°｡⋆˚⁺ wrote: "Background knowledge of the Broken Heart:So this was after my second relationship and I was young and I thought it was going to last forever. And he was really toxic but I didn't even know at the ..."
im sorry, thats awful. but the song is amazing
Sage (Wanda's Version) wrote: "⁺˚⋆｡°✩London⁺✩°｡⋆˚⁺ wrote: "Background knowledge of the Broken Heart:So this was after my second relationship and I was young and I thought it was going to last forever. And he was really toxic bu..."
Thanks yeah a lot of my songs are either my break ups or my sibs expirience with break up
⁺˚⋆｡°✩London⁺✩°｡⋆˚⁺ wrote: "Sage (Wanda's Version) wrote: "⁺˚⋆｡°✩London⁺✩°｡⋆˚⁺ wrote: "Background knowledge of the Broken Heart:So this was after my second relationship and I was young and I thought it was going to last fore..."
theyre really good
i love how brutally honest your poems are, this one is so good
thanks it just comes to me and now I realized why I need a guidance councilor rn....
Just thought about this on the spot:Title: Liar
By: London
inspo: my brother's break up
You lie to me about your intentions
you lied to me cause you were scared
you lied to me, you to my family and friends
You never gave thought what I wanted you made me go through hell for you
You scorched my pride to a million pieces
You destroy my love of food
you told me to eat less
but then told to eat more
why was i so blind to see your true intentions
Why did I need to wait 3 years to realized you were toxic
You deceived my family into loving you
you hurt me in so many ways, so many ways
You didn't care what I wanted in the relationship
You only thought about yourself about yourself!
So why did it take me so long to realized your intentions
Why was I so blind in the first place
in the first place
Why did I not care for myself
I lost myself in this love
I cannot even remember who i was,
who I was before you trapped me in this place of guilt,
place of shame
Place of mistrust
you broke my heart to many times
I have enough of your lies
I had enough of this shame
I have enough of this guilt
I am done with you forevermore
oooooh i love that one too!
Thanks it was so tragic for him and I just put myself in his shoes and here it is a perfect revenge song I want to release and make her listen to it!!!!!!!!
⁺˚⋆｡°✩London⁺✩°｡⋆˚⁺ wrote: "Thanks it was so tragic for him and I just put myself in his shoes and here it is a perfect revenge song I want to release and make her listen to it!!!!!!!!"that would be epic for her to hear it
Sage (Wanda's Version) wrote: "⁺˚⋆｡°✩London⁺✩°｡⋆˚⁺ wrote: "Thanks it was so tragic for him and I just put myself in his shoes and here it is a perfect revenge song I want to release and make her listen to it!!!!!!!!"that would..."
Yes!!! i might show it to my brother... And plus like I love these kind of revenge songs!!! But I feel like I went to much on this one I don't know tbh.
⁺˚⋆｡°✩London⁺✩°｡⋆˚⁺ wrote: "Sage (Wanda's Version) wrote: "⁺˚⋆｡°✩London⁺✩°｡⋆˚⁺ wrote: "Thanks it was so tragic for him and I just put myself in his shoes and here it is a perfect revenge song I want to release and make her li..."no, i dont think its too much
"i like you a lot" said the sun to the moon,but the moon liked the stars
who knew the sun would die soon.
and the stars liked nobody how they liked the clouds
the cushion that held tight as it cried above mounds
of mountains, all snowed on
snow only sticks to the pure like the fawns
but the fawns stick with grass who just wants the sun,
though the sun likes the moon, so the story goes on
Kamar this is my song!!!!Title: Double Deceiver
By: London
Inspo: a Book
Verse 1:
I thought you were my knight in shining armor,
But you turned out to be the ultimate charmer.
Fancy cars, fancy clothes, you thought you were hot,
But your heart was as cold as an ice-cold shot.
Pre-Chorus:
Caught you whispering sweet nothings in her ear,
While pretending that you hold me oh so dear.
I'm tired of this game that you keep on playing,
You'll soon realize that my heart's done staying.
Chorus:
Double deceiver, your lies can't disguise,
You think you're so smooth, but it's all just a disguise.
Double deceiver, shots have been fired,
You better watch out, the truth will transpire.
Verse 2:
Late-night texts, secret rendezvous under the moon,
You thought I'd never catch on to your sneaky tune.
But these eyes have seen the evidence, the proof,
Your web of lies, babe, you're a troubling goof.
Pre-Chorus:
Remember when we danced in the pouring rain,
You whispered forever, said you'd ease my pain.
But now your true colors have come shining through,
I see the double life you've been leading, too.
Chorus:
Double deceiver, your lies can't disguise,
You think you're so smooth, but it's all just a guise.
Double deceiver, shots have been fired,
You better watch out, the truth will transpire.
Bridge:
I've had enough of your endless deception,
No more will I fall for your shallow affection.
You may think you're cool, juggling hearts around,
But soon you'll find yourself standing alone, unbound.
Chorus:
Double deceiver, your lies can't disguise,
You think you're so smooth, but it's all just a guise.
Double deceiver, shots have been fired,
You better watch out, the truth will transpire.
Outro:
No more will I be fooled by your wicked games,
I'm stronger and smarter; I won't carry the blames.
Double deceiver, you're done with your play,
The curtain has fallen, it's time for me to say... goodbye.
Roses are red violets are blue,Im sorry to tell I cheated on you
Thank you so much Kamar. This was inspired by my friend who dated a player.
Wait Link did somebody cheated on you?
Undying Hope
By: Sophia C
Clearly I haven't had the courage
Obviously, like Mike and Arnold.
Clearly I wasn't giving you enough.
Obviously, like L and Light.
Clearly I didn't want to hurt you when you picked me up
Obviously, like Ben and Erica.
I didn't want you to get too sober.
Like Zoe and Mike.
I didn't want you to fall down those steps
Like Murray and Warren
I didn't want you to be in the darkness
Like Alexander and Catherine
But I misstepped
Like me.
Clearly I didn't mean to
I didn't want to
but I did...
By: Sophia C
Clearly I haven't had the courage
Obviously, like Mike and Arnold.
Clearly I wasn't giving you enough.
Obviously, like L and Light.
Clearly I didn't want to hurt you when you picked me up
Obviously, like Ben and Erica.
I didn't want you to get too sober.
Like Zoe and Mike.
I didn't want you to fall down those steps
Like Murray and Warren
I didn't want you to be in the darkness
Like Alexander and Catherine
But I misstepped
Like me.
Clearly I didn't mean to
I didn't want to
but I did...
Birds
Flying with anticipation.
Excited and nervous
Wanting to search through and plan out
And also wanting to just give it a push.
Drive through, and explore
Or stay with a planned time..
But it won't work...
Flying with anticipation.
Excited and nervous
Wanting to search through and plan out
And also wanting to just give it a push.
Drive through, and explore
Or stay with a planned time..
But it won't work...
Charms
"Works like a charm"
They said.
He said.
She said.
Her teeth formed a small smile.
His formed a sort of smirk that felt real.
They sought to form a team..
A powerful, yet deadly one.
One that sought revenge.
And here I was
Just there.
Standing in front, and thinking...
"Why aren't they...here..."
Cold sweats, and blank stares awakened me.
I was alone.
Like always
But the pain wasn't there...
It'd been gone, for a while..
While I sat in the cold, dark, numbness.
"Works like a charm"
They said.
He said.
She said.
Her teeth formed a small smile.
His formed a sort of smirk that felt real.
They sought to form a team..
A powerful, yet deadly one.
One that sought revenge.
And here I was
Just there.
Standing in front, and thinking...
"Why aren't they...here..."
Cold sweats, and blank stares awakened me.
I was alone.
Like always
But the pain wasn't there...
It'd been gone, for a while..
While I sat in the cold, dark, numbness.
THE TALENT IN THIS GROUP--
INDESCRIBABLY AMAZING
Love is a Tragedy
Isn't tragic
that you left me for her
isn't it tragic that you promise the world
so why did I believe such foolish thoughts
so why did I believe in the sweet whispers of lies
I was young naive stupid to ever thought you loved
so why am i still crying on the floor
I burned all of your memories
i burned the love I had for you
and I burned the love that was a lie
but why, why was i so stupid
why, oh why did i thought it might work
Love is a knife coming to you
Love is such a tragedy
Love will leave when you need it most, when you need it
Love is nothing but a lie
Love foolish us kids of
we dream of a prince charming
When the night is cold we wish we had that ember of love
of love
we wish we were strong to withstand the hurt of love's lies
But what can i do now, when i am crying on the cold hard ground
love is fake an allusion we dream as young foolish lovers
Love will hurt me in the end so now i don't know who to trust
Love is a assassin at night
Love is the forbidden fruit
love is the venom of a snake
Love will always a dagger in the night
Love is the lovers died
Love is something dreamt as a kid
but now i know the weapon of love
is for those who have loss so much in the past
Love is nothing but a lie
Love is something only I wanted but now I don't
Love will always leave you
Love will always leave me