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I would've loved a back story to this in greater depth. Even this would be more interesting than the fantasy kidnapping angle.
This was definitely underdeveloped. I wanted to know more about Johnny's family and his relationship with them. The must have been a way to incorporate them more into the story considering that we get so much about Sage and Lucy.
The story just scratched the surface. If he'd been able to recount just one situation, either in his own musings or directly to Sage, it would have given more dimension to the character.



