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message 1: by 。・:*˚:✧。Carolyn✧˖*°࿐ (last edited Jan 30, 2024 08:40PM) (new)

。・:*˚:✧。Carolyn✧˖*°࿐ (carolynandsomedragons) gold on her head
shes practically dead
A glimmering crown
She has to drown


~The Curse Of Queens

(uhh this iss uh yeaa i like js wrote this down)


message 2: by avi ౨ৎ (new)

avi ౨ৎ (london__ava-joy) It is beautiful!!!


message 3: by 。・:*˚:✧。Carolyn✧˖*°࿐ (last edited Jan 30, 2024 08:51PM) (new)

。・:*˚:✧。Carolyn✧˖*°࿐ (carolynandsomedragons) I try to kiss you
You pull away
I peck your cheek
You retreat
I kiss your knuckles
You pull back
I hold your hand
You shake it off
I cradle your face
You shake your head
I touch your har
You shove my hands

I slap your face
You look abashed
I run away
You run too
I slap you again, harder
You kiss me
I shove you back
You put your hands on my waist
I stop fighting
You now cradle my face
I pull your face to mine

We kiss


~Loath To Love You

(ok this is actually *ss yalll soooooo uh yea :) gimme actual feedback i wont be hurt )


layla✧ (semi-hiatus) | 10 comments honestly i do love it but the first part almost gave my whiplash while i read it. BUT SLAY I WANT THIS RELATIONSHIP 😍


。・:*˚:✧。Carolyn✧˖*°࿐ (carolynandsomedragons) real the first part ws ughhh


message 6: by 。・:*˚:✧。Carolyn✧˖*°࿐ (last edited Feb 01, 2024 07:28PM) (new)

。・:*˚:✧。Carolyn✧˖*°࿐ (carolynandsomedragons) A crown upon your head
Will only mean im dead
If i fall
You must withdraw
If i stutter
You throw me into a sutter

But since i'm falling
You keep stalling
My heart breaks
But you were always fake

A crown upon your head
You order me dead
I fall to the floor
You slam the door
You dont stall
You just watch me fall
Im held by a guard
Yet you disregard

As he slits my throat
All you do is gloat
Ive fallen to riches
Just like one of your-


(this has no name


message 7: by 。・:*˚:✧。Carolyn✧˖*°࿐ (last edited Feb 02, 2024 09:52PM) (new)

。・:*˚:✧。Carolyn✧˖*°࿐ (carolynandsomedragons) First my fingers
Then my hands
Gone are my arms
How colorless i am

No silky shadows
Fallen from my body
Slipping through the floor
Out through the door
How glass-like i have become

My feet turn to clouds
Legs numb
Face wet
I reach up
feel my face
Invisible are my hands
Gone is my body

Looking down
I have vanished
Sipping into nothingness
Translucent


~Slipping Away


。・:*˚:✧。Carolyn✧˖*°࿐ (carolynandsomedragons) ( YAWLLL I NEED 100% HONEST FEEDBACKK PLEASE COMMENT I WANNA IMPROVEEE)


。・:*˚:✧。Carolyn✧˖*°࿐ (carolynandsomedragons) You.

You hold me oh so near
But i have much to fear
Power radiating from your aura
Adorning a halo of flora
Yet you continue to leer


my first limerick :)


ADDIE [Let Us Live Since We Must Die] | 67 comments girl i love your poems!!


。・:*˚:✧。Carolyn✧˖*°࿐ (carolynandsomedragons) yours are also literally amazing :)


message 14: by ADDIE [Let Us Live Since We Must Die] (last edited Feb 03, 2024 08:48PM) (new)

ADDIE [Let Us Live Since We Must Die] | 67 comments thank youuuu
:)


。・:*˚:✧。Carolyn✧˖*°࿐ (carolynandsomedragons) 💋💋💋💋💋💋


ADDIE [Let Us Live Since We Must Die] | 67 comments 💋💋💋💋💋💋


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ADDIE [Let Us Live Since We Must Die] | 67 comments ღ『ℂℂ』ও wrote: "awwawawww"

😁🤭


。・:*˚:✧。Carolyn✧˖*°࿐ (carolynandsomedragons) i sounded a bit goooooofy


。・:*˚:✧。Carolyn✧˖*°࿐ (carolynandsomedragons) Addie🦕 wrote: "ღ『ℂℂ』ও wrote: "awwawawww"

😁🤭"


😘😋


ADDIE [Let Us Live Since We Must Die] | 67 comments ღ『ℂℂ』ও wrote: "i sounded a bit goooooofy"

yea but it okk


ADDIE [Let Us Live Since We Must Die] | 67 comments ღ『ℂℂ』ও wrote: "Addie🦕 wrote: "ღ『ℂℂ』ও wrote: "awwawawww"

😁🤭"

😘😋"


😘 🤪


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ღ『ℂℂ』ও wrote: "
First my fingers
Then my hands
Gone are my arms
How colorless i am

No silky shadows
Fallen from my body
Slipping through the floor
Out through the door
How glass-like i have become

My feet tur..."


I love this onee! 😁


。・:*˚:✧。Carolyn✧˖*°࿐ (carolynandsomedragons) thankss bestieeee ;)))


message 26: by [deleted user] (new)

oop-
i'm a bestie now


Myles (semi hiatus)  | 53 comments your poems are amazing!!


。・:*˚:✧。Carolyn✧˖*°࿐ (carolynandsomedragons) "Why'd you del..?" [K+S's Version] wrote: "oop-
i'm a bestie now"


everyone is a bestie >;)

well ofc except my BESTIES


。・:*˚:✧。Carolyn✧˖*°࿐ (carolynandsomedragons) Myles wrote: "your poems are amazing!!"

thanksssss <3333 omg yall this means so much haha


ADDIE [Let Us Live Since We Must Die] | 67 comments ღ『ℂℂ』ও wrote: ""Why'd you del..?" [K+S's Version] wrote: "oop-
i'm a bestie now"

everyone is a bestie >;)

well ofc except my BESTIES"


lol slay


message 31: by 。・:*˚:✧。Carolyn✧˖*°࿐ (last edited Feb 03, 2024 09:52PM) (new)

。・:*˚:✧。Carolyn✧˖*°࿐ (carolynandsomedragons) Her Fantasies

She dreams of you at night
Though she sees you on tv
She thinks of you all day
Though she reads about your wife

Why is she drawn you
Why is she wanting what she cannot have
You dance on the screen
In love with someone perfect
You share your thoughts with her
As she sees you through a page

In love with another
So perfect
So sweet
Their all she could never be

Nights spent crying in bed
Damp face on soft pillow
Face quivering with disgrace
Will she always be too young
Will she ever find love


100% true eek


。・:*˚:✧。Carolyn✧˖*°࿐ (carolynandsomedragons) (tell me yalls celeb crooshies and boook bfs 😭)


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