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Haunted House
The Haunted House
The night was dark and dreary, The wind was howling strong, The trees were swaying eerily, As I walked along.
I saw a house in the distance, It looked so old and grey,
I wondered what secrets it held; What horrors lay within its walls.
I walked up to the door, And pushed it open wide, The creaking sound it made, Sent shivers down my spine.
The hallway was dark and cold, The air was thick with fear, I felt a presence near me, And knew that death was near.
I heard a whisper in my ear, A voice so cold and clear, It said “You should not be here, You should not have come here.”
I turned to run away, But the door was locked tight, I was trapped in this haunted house, With no escape in sight.
The ghosts of the past, were all around me now, Their moans and groans, Filled the air somehow.
I knew that I was doomed, That I would never leave, This haunted house of horrors, This place of endless grief.
So if you ever see that house, Just turn and walk away, For if you enter there, You’ll never see the light of day.

Enchanted Forest
In the Enchanted Forest were all the trees are tall, the leaves rustle gently and the baby falcons call.
Sunbeams dance and flowers sway, Natures symphony in full display.
the forest is alive with creatures big and small, Rabbits hop, bears roar, and the silly wild boar. Squirrels scamper and deer’s prance, while the foxes play and owls perch and glance. The Enchanted forest is a magic place where birds fly and animals race. You will never find a better place the Enchanted Forest with style and grace.

For a past lover, cheers to what we had

The Lonely Heart

The heart that beats within my chest, Is heavy with a weight of woe. It longs for love, but finds no rest, And sinks beneath the undertow.

The world is dark, and full of pain, And hope is but a distant dream. The tears that fall like summer rain, Are all that’s left, or so it seems.

The sun has set, the night is long, And shadows dance upon the wall. The heart that once was full of song, Is silent now, and feels so small.

The stars above, they twinkle bright, But bring no comfort to my soul. The darkness of the endless night, Is all that’s left to make me whole.

So here I sit, alone and sad, With nothing left to call my own. The heart that once was full and glad, Is now a heart that’s turned to stone.

My Dog

Dogs are the most loyal of friends,
Their love for us never ends.
They greet us with wagging tails,
And their love never fails.

They're always there when we need them,
And they never judge or condemn.
They're always happy to see us,
And they never make a fuss.

They're always ready to play,
And they brighten up our day.
They're always by our side,
And they fill our hearts with pride.

Dogs are amazing creatures,
And their love is one of life's great features.
They're always there to lend a paw,
And they never break the law.

They're always there to comfort us,
And they never make a fuss.
They're always there to make us smile,
And they do it with style.

Dogs are the best companions,
And they never ask for opinions.
They're always there to listen,
And they never need permission.

Dogs are amazing creatures,
And their love is one of life's great features.
So let's cherish our furry friends,
And love them until the very end.

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Myles wrote: "For a past lover, cheers to what we had

The Lonely Heart

The heart that beats within my chest, Is heavy with a weight of woe. It longs for love, but finds no rest, And sinks beneath the undertow...."

tbh this is...

SO GOOD OMG I LOVE IT

LITERALLY GIMMe MORE

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i PrAnKeD u ik u thought it was bad :) but it was actually good ;D

ღ『ℂℂ』ও wrote: "LITERALLY GIMMe MORE"

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ღ『ℂℂ』ও wrote: "i PrAnKeD u ik u thought it was bad :) but it was actually good ;D"

got me shivering

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seeing myles in another habitat 👁️👄👁️ (i literally only ever see u trying to destroy me on the counting game)

layla✧ wrote: "seeing myles in another habitat 👁️👄👁️ (i literally only ever see u trying to destroy me on the counting game)"

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In the depths of my heart, a sorrow does dwell
A pain so sharp, it cuts through my shell
The memories of you, they linger and cling
Like a shadow that refuses to fling

Your touch, it was like a ray of sun
Warming my soul, and making me whole
But now, your absence has undone
Leaving me with a heart that's a hole

The tears I've cried, they fall like rain
Drowning me in a sea of pain
The thought of you, it haunts my brain
A constant reminder of what I've gained

I thought our love would last forever
But forever's come and gone, it's over
Now I'm left with just a memory
A memory that I can't forget, it's a misery

The saddest heartbreak, it's a weight
That presses down, making it hard to breathe
The ache in my heart, it never fades
A constant reminder of what I've made

Myles wrote: "In the depths of my heart, a sorrow does dwell
A pain so sharp, it cuts through my shell
The memories of you, they linger and cling
Like a shadow that refuses to fling

Your touch, it was like a ra..."

i love this one!!!!!

Addie🦕 wrote: "Myles wrote: "In the depths of my heart, a sorrow does dwell
A pain so sharp, it cuts through my shell
The memories of you, they linger and cling
Like a shadow that refuses to fling

Your touch, it..."


thanks!

Lonely Heart Part 2
Heartbreak, a pain so true,
A wound that cuts through and through,
A feeling that's hard to bear,
A burden that's heavy to share.

The ache in my chest, so real,
A longing that's hard to conceal,
The tears that fall like the rain,
A sorrow that's hard to restrain.

The memories of what we had,
A love that was strong and so glad,
But now it's just a memory,
A pain that's hard to see.

The heart that was once so full,
Now feels so empty and hollow,
The love that was once so bright,
Now just a distant, faded light.

The world outside, so cold,
A reality that's hard to hold,
The heart that's been broken,
A pain that's hard to spoken.

But still, I hold on to hope,
A glimmer of light in the scope,
The chance that someday, somehow,
I'll find love again, and it will glow.

Storm Fear


In the dead of night, when all is still,
I feel a presence, chilling and cold,
A shadow lurks, my heart does fill,
With fear and dread, my soul does unfold.

The wind it howls, like a mournful sigh,
As if the spirits of the dead do cry,
The trees they creak, with a haunting moan,
Their branches sway, like a ghostly tune.

The moon it hides, behind a veil,
Afraid to show its face, it fails,
For in its light, the shadows play,
And bring to life, a fearful day.

The darkness closes in, all around,
A prison of fear, without a sound,
I tremble with each passing breath,
As death itself, my soul doth death.

The scariest poem, that would make me shiver,
A tale of fear, that would make me quiver,
A world of darkness, where hope does die,
A place where fear, does never die.

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Myles wrote: "Lonely Heart Part 2
Heartbreak, a pain so true,
A wound that cuts through and through,
A feeling that's hard to bear,
A burden that's heavy to share.

The ache in my chest, so real,
A longing that'..."

i am in love with this one!!!!

Storm fear is my fav i think

Addie 🦕 wrote: "Myles wrote: "Lonely Heart Part 2
Heartbreak, a pain so true,
A wound that cuts through and through,
A feeling that's hard to bear,
A burden that's heavy to share.

The ache in my chest, so real,
A..."
Thanks!!!

~Supreme Edge Lord~ wrote: "Storm fear is my fav i think"

Thanks

Old Poem Hope You Like It!
Early Days


In days of youth, when life was new,
A time of wonder, a time of dew,
The world was full of magic and glee,
A place where dreams were born and set free.

The sun would shine with gentle grace,
And light up the world with a smile on its face,
The trees would sway with a soothing breeze,
And the flowers would bloom with vibrant ease.

The children would play with joyful shouts,
Their laughter echoing through the streets,
Their innocence and pure delight,
A treasure to behold, a pure delight.

Their imaginations would soar high,
With stories of dragons in the sky,
And adventures in far-off lands,
Where magic was real, with wondrous hands.

Their hearts were full of hope and cheer,
Their spirits free from fear and doubt,
For in childhood, the world was bright,
A place where love and joy were shout.

But as the years went by, and they grew,
The world began to lose its hue,
The magic faded, the wonder fled,
And the innocence was lost in dread.

The children grew up, and life became,
A complex web of trials and strife,
But oh, the memories of childhood's grace,
Will forever be etched in their face.

The Lonely Heart Part....?


Heartbreak, a pain so true,
A feeling that seeps through,
A wound that's deep and blue,
A sorrow that's new.

The shards of love that shatter,
Leave scars that never matter,
The memories that linger,
A longing that's a stinger.

The tears that fall like rain,
The sobs that choke like pain,
The emptiness that remains,
A heart that's lost its gain.

The weight of every breath,
The ache that never leaves,
The longing for a love,
That's now but a memory to grasp.

The shards of heart that break,
The pieces that we make,
The memories that we take,
A love that we can't take.

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A Heartbreak's Deepest Cut

In the depths of my soul, a pain resides
A heartbreak that cuts like a knife
It pierces my heart, with a cruel might
Leaving scars that won't subside

The memories we shared, now in disgrace
The love we had, reduced to a trace
The tears I cry, they never cease
A heartbreak that hits me with such ease

The weight of your absence, I can't bear
The longing for you, my heart's despair
The thought of moving on, I can't dare
For your love, my heart is still there

In the darkness of night, I weep
For the love that could have been, a sweet sleep
But alas, it's just a dream, a fleeting dream
A heartbreak that hits me so deep

In twilight's hush, my heart doth break
Like shards of glass, my dreams now make
A bitter draught, my soul to take
Leaving naught but sorrow's ache

The stars above, they twinkle bright
But bring no light to my plight
The moon, a silver crescent smile
Doth mock my heart's deepest mile

The wind doth howl, a mournful sigh
As I wander, lost in thought, nigh
The trees, they whisper, "Why so blue?"
But I, a heart, now broken through

The sun, it rises, day's new light
Yet brings no warmth to my heart's sight
The world, it spins, a merry dance
But I, a soul, now lost in trance

The waves, they crash, a soothing sound
But my heart, it doth still resound
The memories, they linger near
A love, now lost, my heart to fear

The breeze, it whispers, "Time will heal"
But my heart, it doth not feel
The pain, it lingers, a constant ache
A heartbreak, now my soul to break

A Start


A poem to inspire and ignite,
To motivate and excite,
To push you to reach your heights,
And make your dreams take flight.

With every line and every verse,
I hope to stir your soul and purse,
To chase your goals with heart and might,
And make your spirit whole.

In the depths of every word,
I pour my hope and every cord,
To help you find your inner strength,
And never let you go.

So let my words be your guide,
As you embark on your ride,
And may they fill your heart with cheer,
And drive your doubts away.

For with each step you take,
You move one step closer to the make,
Of your dreams and your desires,
And all that you aspire.

So keep on pushing, keep on striving,
And never let your spirit die,
For with each line and every rhyme,
I'll be here, by your side.

This is for Harry Potter Lovers!


In the halls of Hogwarts, a darkness did stray
A presence so sinister, it made the students pray
Slytherin's power, it did unfold
A tale of a boy, with a heart of gold

Harry Potter, the chosen one, so brave and true
But the slytherins, they had other plans, oh so sleek and new
Their cunning and deceit, it did astound
As they whispered in the shadows, with a wicked sound

Their eyes, they gleamed with a sinister light
As they plotted and schemed, through the day and night
Their hearts, they were black as coal
As they sought to bring down, the Boy Who Lived

But Harry, he was not afraid, no fear in his eyes
For he knew the power of love, and the strength of the light
He stood tall and proud, with a fierce determination
To vanquish the darkness, and bring peace to the nation

The slytherins, they sneered and they jeered
But Harry, he ignored them, and held firm
For he knew that the power of good, would always prevail
And the slytherins, they would never prevail

So let this be a lesson, to all who can hear
That the power of love, will always bring cheer
And the slytherins, they will never win
For the power of good, will always triumph in the end.

all of these are my old poems

I love Percy Jackson


In the world of demigods, where monsters roam and might reigns,
Two heroes stood tall, their bond like a shining light,
Percy Jackson, son of Poseidon, strong and brave,
Annabeth Chase, daughter of Athena, wise and brave.

Their adventures took them far and wide,
From the depths of the sea to the heights of the sky,
They battled monsters and gods, with courage in their hearts,
Their love for each other, a beacon that never parts.

In the Labyrinth, they faced the Minotaur's might,
With courage and wit, they fought for what was right,
Their bond grew stronger, as they stood side by side,
Together they conquered, their love their guide.

Their journey took them to the lands of the gods,
Where they faced challenges, and their love was put to the test,
But through it all, their love remained true and strong,
A love that could conquer even the gods themselves.

In the end, they emerged victorious, their love unbroken,
Their bond a shining beacon, a love that was unspoken,
For in the world of demigods, their love was a rare find,
A love that would last a lifetime, a love of the mind.

For anybody that has read Eragon
In the land of Inheritance, where games are played,
A tale of magic and might, a world displayed.
The first book of the series, a story unfolds,
Of Eragon, a young boy, with a destiny to hold.

He finds a dragon egg, in a cave so dark,
A symbol of power, a future to embark.
Saphira, the dragon, a bond so strong,
Together they soar, their journey so long.

The Empire, with evil intent,
Seeks to destroy, their will to invent.
But Eragon and Saphira, with courage so true,
Will fight to the end, their destiny to pursue.

The inheritance games, a test of might,
A challenge to prove, their worth in sight.
With magic and strength, they'll face the day,
And bring hope to the land, in a brighter way.

Their journey begins, with a heart so pure,
A tale of adventure, a story so sure.
The inheritance games, a test of might,
A bond so strong, a future so bright.

In the quiet corridors of love, a symphony played,
Notes of joy, of passion, in the heart, they stayed.
Yet, as fate weaves its tapestry, threads start to fray,
The melody now a haunting echo of a distant day.

Words unsaid echo in the silent night,
A tender touch turned into a fading light.
Whispers of promises dance in the breeze,
But love, like autumn leaves, falls with such ease.

The once-shared smiles, a vibrant hue,
Now paint a canvas of a melancholy blue.
In the album of memories, pages now worn,
Pictures of happiness, forever torn.

As the moon reflects on a tear-stained sea,
Loneliness lingers, a silent plea.
Yet, within the ruins of what once was,
Hope resides, like a gentle buzz.

Sometimes, love is a fragile glass,
Shattered by moments that swiftly pass.
Pieces scattered, a puzzle unsolved,
Yet, in the chaos, strength evolved.

A non-rhyming verse, a tale of woe,
Of love's departure, a bitter undertow.
Yet, within the pain, resilience grows,
A heartbreak story, the universe knows.

Let the tears fall, let the wounds mend,
For every ending, a new chapter to attend.
In the tapestry of time, wounds may heal,
As new stories within the heart reveal.

Would like some feedback

I love "Enchanted Forest". I love poems about nature! They are so calming and relaxing.