Jesus Freaks for Writers discussion

That sounds really exciting! It's kind of all thrown together, though. Maybe you should work on organizing it a little. Just a suggestion! :D
-Albany

Thanks, Albany! Yeah I have a tough time writing back cover text and such. Suggestions are welcome. :)

Aiyana wrote: "Thanks, Albany! Yeah I have a tough time writing back cover text and such. Suggestions are welcome. :)"

Oh, I know, it's so hard! This link is really helpful: http://www.digitalbookworld.com/2013/...

Oh, I know, it's so hard! This link is really helpful: http://www.digitalbook..."

Oh thank you SOOO much! :) I will use that!

Aiyana wrote: "Oh, I know, it's so hard! This link is really helpful: http://www.digitalbook..."

Oh thank you SOOO much! :) I will use that!"

You're welcome! I found it really helpful in writing my own, so I bookmarked it. ;)

Okay here's an updated version of the blurb for Fearless I posted earlier. May still be a bit rough, but it's improved. :)

Tage Stjarna is his little sister's story-telling, game-inventing, nightmare-defeating hero. And that little sister, Mia, is the central sunshine of his world. Their neglecting parents' miserable apartment is behind them, so they are free to live their fantasy-filled life in a leaky trailer with a bug zapper for a chandelier and a rescued horse for the family pet.

But then the siblings' happily-ever-after-on-a-shoestring suddenly crumbles with a single phone call. The real-life source of Mia's many nightmares threatens to separate them and Tage is willing to do anything to keep them together, even if it means leaving everything behind and becoming homeless runaways. They are prepared for hardships, hunger and isolation, but they couldn't possibly be prepared for where an unexplainable cloud of mysterious lights is going to lead them.

That. Is. Perfect! I love it! You've really got me intrigued now, and it flows wonderfully! :D

C.B. wrote: "That. Is. Perfect! I love it! You've really got me intrigued now, and it flows wonderfully! :D"

Really?! Sweet! I better not touch it again then lol! Thanks so much! :)

Aiyana wrote: "C.B. wrote: "That. Is. Perfect! I love it! You've really got me intrigued now, and it flows wonderfully! :D"

Really?! Sweet! I better not touch it again then lol! Thanks so much! :)"

You're welcome! :D I'm so glad I could help!

Beautiful poem! I adore it!

Thank you!!! :)

I love that poem! Very well composed, short and sweet, and I love the rhythm rhyme and message. :) *thumbs up*

Nice! I want to read it! ;)