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message 1: by 📚 Alana (professional book nerd), Director of Dorms 3, 4, and 8, Head MOD (last edited Apr 08, 2024 10:54AM) (new)

📚 Alana (professional book nerd) | 166 comments Mod
۞→Dorm 1 is for the writers! If you are a currently published author or have a wip, this is a great place for discussions and help. There will be someone appointed to be a helper and keep Dorm 1 safe, happy, and running smoothly.


message 2: by 📚 Alana (professional book nerd), Director of Dorms 3, 4, and 8, Head MOD (new)

📚 Alana (professional book nerd) | 166 comments Mod
Hey Liv! I’ll make you director of dorm 1!


message 3: by Jillian B. (School Hiatus), Director of Dorm 6 (new)

Jillian B. (School Hiatus) | 102 comments Mod
Hola!! I have a wip that I’m working on!


message 4: by Jillian B. (School Hiatus), Director of Dorm 6 (new)

Jillian B. (School Hiatus) | 102 comments Mod
Twinssss!! I don’t feel like getting into details rn lol but it’s about twins


message 5: by Jillian B. (School Hiatus), Director of Dorm 6 (new)

Jillian B. (School Hiatus) | 102 comments Mod
Ahhhh!! I love twin stories!! 😂


Anika (GFB 1000 MEMBERS ~ semi hiatus ♥) Hi! Am I the only one in this dorm so far? (other than directors?)


Anika (GFB 1000 MEMBERS ~ semi hiatus ♥) Sweet, a whole dorm to myself


Serenity F. Helzerman | 4 comments Hi! I have seeveral WIPs 😂 I think up new stories all the time and it’s hard to keep it in one…but it’s also confusing sometimes!


Serenity F. Helzerman | 4 comments Ooh! @May! Future writers! Yes I would love that!


Anika (GFB 1000 MEMBERS ~ semi hiatus ♥) Serenity F. Helzerman (Bibliophile) 🇮🇱 wrote: "Hi! I have seeveral WIPs 😂 I think up new stories all the time and it’s hard to keep it in one…but it’s also confusing sometimes!"

Hi and welcome! :)


message 11: by Carrot (new)

Carrot | 3 comments Hey! I'm working on a book as well! It's a Middle-Grade fantasy, and a fairytale retelling of The Snow Queen :D


Anika (GFB 1000 MEMBERS ~ semi hiatus ♥) Carrot wrote: "Hey! I'm working on a book as well! It's a Middle-Grade fantasy, and a fairytale retelling of The Snow Queen :D"

That's so cool! Is fantasy the main genre you write?


message 13: by Carrot (new)

Carrot | 3 comments Anika wrote: "Carrot wrote: "Hey! I'm working on a book as well! It's a Middle-Grade fantasy, and a fairytale retelling of The Snow Queen :D"

That's so cool! Is fantasy the main genre you write?"


Thanks Anika! Yup, it is! I adore fantasy stories so much ;)) How about you?


Anika (GFB 1000 MEMBERS ~ semi hiatus ♥) I write fantasy too! (and romance)
I tried writing a more contemporary story once, but it was not as enjoyable. So now I stick to fantasy


message 15: by Carrot (new)

Carrot | 3 comments That's awesome! :D

I tried writing a realistic fiction short story as well, but I too needed at least something fantasy-like, haha. Perhaps I'll try once more someday, but for now fantasy is my comfort zone!


message 16: by Bella(✨❤️Hopeful Romantic❤️✨) (last edited Apr 21, 2024 09:07AM) (new)

Bella(✨❤️Hopeful Romantic❤️✨) Hi!


Anika (GFB 1000 MEMBERS ~ semi hiatus ♥) Hi Bella!

That sounds so cool, May! I'm writing a enemies to lovers fantasy novel where the hero falls in love with the villain


message 18: by Bella(✨❤️Hopeful Romantic❤️✨) (last edited Apr 21, 2024 02:08PM) (new)

Bella(✨❤️Hopeful Romantic❤️✨) @May
I write in a lot of different genres. I’m writing a book that’s a dystopian with a lil bit of romance. I’m also writing one that’s a pure romance and another book that is a romantasy and ANOTHER that is an action-romance. All my books have romance because I LIVE for romance. 👌❤️😅😁


message 19: by Jillian B. (School Hiatus), Director of Dorm 6 (new)

Jillian B. (School Hiatus) | 102 comments Mod
@May, Can I PLEASE read that?? It’s sounds SO good!! I love Peter Pan stuff!!


message 20: by Rylan (new)

Rylan | 20 comments Bella wrote: "@May
I write in a lot of different genres. I’m writing a book that’s a dystopian with a lil bit of romance. I’m also writing one that’s a pure romance and another book that is a romantasy and ANOTH..."



That sounds REALLY good! I love dystopian, and I also LIVE for romance!


message 21: by Bella(✨❤️Hopeful Romantic❤️✨) (last edited Apr 22, 2024 01:10PM) (new)

Bella(✨❤️Hopeful Romantic❤️✨) Thx!! And frfr, romance is the best(in my opinion)!


message 22: by Rylan (new)

Rylan | 20 comments Bella wrote: "Thx!! And frfr, romance is the best(in my opinion)!"

Absolutely!


Anika (GFB 1000 MEMBERS ~ semi hiatus ♥) Bella wrote: "Thx!! And frfr, romance is the best(in my opinion)!"

Facts


message 24: by [deleted user] (new)

this is the first chronological fluff scene 🤭

The rain comes down heavy around me, soaking my uniform and chilling my bones. The air smells thickly of wet dirt and grass. I close my eyes and breathe in the smell. When I open them a figure stands in front of me. The royal crest glints brightly from his finger. I quickly bow to the prince. “Your Highness, please forgive my incompetence.”
He stalks toward me, lifting my gaze with a gentle touch. “What’s there to forgive?”
I back away, my composure faltering as a blush rises on my cheeks. “Y-Your Highness-“ I start, but he doesn’t let me finish the sentence. Placing a careful finger to my lips, the prince glances around. When satisfied that we are completely alone, he closes the distance between us. “Shhhhh,” he whispers, taking my hand in his. He holds it up to his mouth and my skin burns where his lips touch it.
“Why?” I manage to say, breath coming in short gasps, heart racing in a way that feels so inherently right.
He looks at me as if I had asked if the sky is blue. His green eyes pierce my own. I find myself unable to turn away. “Have you never noticed? The way I look at you, Amily, I have never looked at anyone else that way.” He turns his head away, breaking our eye contact. “You make me feel like there’s fire in my soul.”
“But— I’m just a guard. And your…”
He sighs. “A prince. I know. But Amily, I can’t quell my feelings anymore. I can’t help but love you.” The prince rakes a hand through his chocolate hair, embarrassment lacing his features. The corners of his mouth turned down in a frown.
My breath leaves my lungs, the way he said those words made my heart feel like it was going to stop. “Your Highness…”
“No, call me Carter. I can’t stand hearing those words come from your mouth.” His gaze meets mine again, this time it slowly slides along to my lips. Rainwater drips down his strong nose.
“Carter,” I try, his name feels good on my tongue.
“Yes?” He smiles, as if the sound of his name on my lips is the best thing he’s ever heard.
I blush and look away. Carter pushes me back against the wall. My throat makes a weird sound in surprise. He laughs, “Amily, you sound like a dove.”
“No I don’t!” My composure completely cracking in my compromised position. Carter leans closer still. “My little dove,” His lips are mere inches from mine. “Can I kiss you?”
All I can do is nod.

We stroll through the garden, the moonlight turning the world silvery.
“Carter, why are you staring at me like that?” I give him a funny look.
“Well, you are the most beautiful thing in the world. The stars have nothing on you, my little dove.” He takes my hand and places a kiss on my knuckles.
I blush a deep pink. “Why are you always like this?”
“I love you, Amily.” He says simply. “I could tell you how much, but I’m afraid there just aren’t enough words to describe this feeling.” His green gaze pierces me, and I find it impossible to turn away from him. I lean my head on his shoulder. “You are mine, little dove.”


message 25: by [deleted user] (new)

🤦‍♀️ it posted the second scene too. i didn’t mean to copy that one. but i guess you get a bonus 😉😅


Kayleigh(GFB 1,000 MEMBERS🕺) I’m not in this dorm but that was so good Omgosh!


message 27: by [deleted user] (new)

i’m not in this dorm either lol

but thank you 🥹


Anika (GFB 1000 MEMBERS ~ semi hiatus ♥) Oh my gosh, that's adorable! 🥰
I love how he calls her a little dove


Kayleigh(GFB 1,000 MEMBERS🕺) You’re welcome girly!🩷


Kayleigh(GFB 1,000 MEMBERS🕺) Literally though!


message 31: by [deleted user] (new)

@Anika it’s probably my favorite thing abt him tbh 😅 that nickname just makes my insides melty 🤭🤭


message 32: by Rylan (new)

Rylan | 20 comments i'm also not in this dorm, but that was so good!!!!!!


message 33: by Jillian B. (School Hiatus), Director of Dorm 6 (new)

Jillian B. (School Hiatus) | 102 comments Mod
Iwnekwshiwajgwwijagsiwbsvjddbvsj 😍🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😍🥰😍🥰🥰🥰🥰


Bella(✨❤️Hopeful Romantic❤️✨) Oh my freaking gosh!!! 😆😆😆❤️❤️❤️❤️😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 I LOVE IT SO MUCH I NEED MORE AHHHHHH


message 35: by [deleted user] (new)

and i’m still waiting on chapter two 😌


Anika (GFB 1000 MEMBERS ~ semi hiatus ♥) May wrote: "Ok I’ve posted this on all my different writing groups lol but here is a twist on HG I wrote in Gale’s pov…

“I volunteer as tribute!”
Terror pulsed through every inch of my body as I heard the voi..."


Oh my gosh, that is so cool! I would totally read this book!


message 37: by Jillian B. (School Hiatus), Director of Dorm 6 (new)

Jillian B. (School Hiatus) | 102 comments Mod
OOOMMGGGGG I LOVE ITTTT!!!


Kayleigh(GFB 1,000 MEMBERS🕺) I’m not in this group but That was so good!!


message 39: by •Amelia (Elizabeth Taylor’s version)•, ♥️ Director of Dorms 2 & 7 ♥️ (new)

•Amelia (Elizabeth Taylor’s version)• | 98 comments Mod
Y’all the stories are slayinggg

Also, don’t come for me, but I think Gale’s pov would be AWESOME 😎


message 40: by Rylan (new)

Rylan | 20 comments it totally would!!!


message 41: by Rylan (new)

Rylan | 20 comments are you team Gale, or do you think it would just be interesting? btw I'm Team Gale


message 42: by Jillian B. (School Hiatus), Director of Dorm 6 (new)

Jillian B. (School Hiatus) | 102 comments Mod
I had that question too, except I’m team PEETA


message 43: by Bella(✨❤️Hopeful Romantic❤️✨) (last edited May 13, 2024 09:33AM) (new)

Bella(✨❤️Hopeful Romantic❤️✨) I’m team Peeta too, even though he’s way shorter than her 😐


message 44: by •Amelia (Elizabeth Taylor’s version)•, ♥️ Director of Dorms 2 & 7 ♥️ (new)

•Amelia (Elizabeth Taylor’s version)• | 98 comments Mod
@Rylan
YES FINALLY I FIND ANOTHER TEAM GALE PERSON! Yes, I love Gale, especially in the movies because Liam is so cute 🥺


Bella(✨❤️Hopeful Romantic❤️✨) Well, of course I’m team Gale based off of looks. He’s an absolute hottie


message 46: by 📚 Alana (professional book nerd), Director of Dorms 3, 4, and 8, Head MOD (new)

📚 Alana (professional book nerd) | 166 comments Mod
Ooooo don’t mind me randomly checking in here- I’m also team Gale!!!


message 47: by Jillian B. (School Hiatus), Director of Dorm 6 (new)

Jillian B. (School Hiatus) | 102 comments Mod
Gale is way hotter, but I’ve Peeta is just better for Katniss. To be fair, Katniss doesn’t deserve either of them. I don’t like Katniss. A meh Mc.


message 48: by Rylan (new)

Rylan | 20 comments I definitely liked Gale better than Peeta in the books, and when I saw the movie, I was VERY team Gale, because he's like way hotter.


message 49: by Rylan (new)

Rylan | 20 comments best friends to lovers is also my fav trope by far


message 50: by [deleted user] (new)

i like gale in the movies bc he’s hot 🤭

but i’m team peeta in the books.

it just saddens me that gale invented that bomb (YES IK HE DIDNT PURPOSELY KILL HER.) but it was still intended to be used on children. and that is just disgusting 😃


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