hot girls read books discussion

Hi Girls....I needed some non-professional and genuine reader feedback regarding the blurb for my second book. I am very anxious to know....whether this will catch the attention of the readers....do comment and let me know....Thank you in advance.

You can read the blurb here....A Sense of Belonging

I really like it- but I think maybe make it a bit shorter, don’t reveal so much while still trying to drag the reader in. But otherwise your story looks really interesting!!!! ☺️

bella🐆🪬🫧 wrote: "I really like it- but I think maybe make it a bit shorter, don’t reveal so much while still trying to drag the reader in. But otherwise your story looks really interesting!!!! ☺️"
Oh thank you Bella.....but don't worry....the story has a lot more to it....Glad to know that you thought it looked interesting....

I love it!

Ceyda wrote: "I love it!"

Thank you so much....means a lot...

the first paragraph could be shortened a little but overall it looks great!

Isha ☾ ⋆*･ﾟ:⋆*･ﾟ wrote: "the first paragraph could be shortened a little but overall it looks great!"

Thank you Isha...I will look into it....that's a good point you made.