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message 1: by ray ౨ৎ, ˚✩ co-mod ⋆。˚ (new)

ray ౨ৎ | 12 comments Mod
Bea, tell me if you want this deleted and I will !! 🫶🏻


message 2: by ray ౨ৎ, ˚✩ co-mod ⋆。˚ (new)

ray ౨ৎ | 12 comments Mod
Here’s some of mine!!

used to be comfort
calming after a bad dream
now she’s a nightmare

mom missed old me
I also miss old me too
gone because of her

said does not favor
scolds me right after, for what?
she said just a joke

she acts like a saint
slips on the mask for her friends
off, an enemy

Pls do not judge what I wrote !! 🫶🏻


Belle₊˚⊹♡ (Book slump💔) | 1 comments ☆ lingering screams. 𓇢𓆸

Even when you fall
I’ll still be there for when your tall
I’ll be by your side through it all
Let your dazzling starlight shine through the cracks on the wall
Your past isn’t by which your perceived
Whispers that linger in your head turning into screams
It doesn’t decode you
nor will ever paint your image how you don’t want it to
Move on from the specters who try to paint out your portrait
Use your own colors let the shadows forfeit
And if I need to tell you a million times I will
I won’t forget


message 4: by lyd (new)

lyd (jesuslovesyouuu) | 1 comments i wrote this poem for school. pls don't judge! :)

Harriet Tubman: The Black Moses

Who was Harriet Tubman?
A child born into slavery,
A girl abused,
A woman unwanted.

But no one could stop her;
She was braver than most.
She fled,
But didn’t abandon the captives.

No, she returned,
For those who couldn’t save themselves,
Risked her own life for them.
And she never lost a soul,
Or backed down.

She would yell “You’ll be free or die,”
Not accepting failure.
They called her Moses,
Knowing she was a leader.

Determined and strong,
Smart and stubborn,
Harriet was a hero.
And she will never not be.


message 5: by ray ౨ৎ, ˚✩ co-mod ⋆。˚ (new)

ray ౨ৎ | 12 comments Mod
@lydia beautiful !!


message 6: by syren (new)

syren | 1 comments haikus are three lines, right? 5 syllables then 7 then 5 again?? (correct me if wrong)

could i write something to make up on the spot?


i look to that woman
for all my validation
not good enough

my heart hurts so much
but not as deep as those aches
where is all the meat?

i'm reduced to skin
but my stomach will rumble
silenced by my fear

oh mother, my love
why won't it just be alright?
if you look at me

finally think that
"the body of hers is right"
her words will leave with

the hunger i felt
my only parent is here
and i look to her

i then ask again
"mummy, do you love me?"
i want to make sure

to suck it all in
always looking to my right
please let this be it

i wait her reply
please let her think i'm skinny
and never eating

oh, again i check
its all for validation
that validation


message 7: by emory (new)

emory | 1 comments wait these are all so good


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