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message 1: by kell. (new)

kell. (kellstick) share your poetry or talk about poetry you like here! (suggested by ella)


message 2: by ella (new)

ella Ragdoll

"Do this -- feel that --
House? Who needs it?
Dog? Who needs it?
Parents? Who needs them?
Childhood? Oh, grow up!
Money? You'll make it!
Dreams? Let's be real.
Love? You've got to settle sometime.

Rent? Where is it?
Job? Why don't you have it?
Ring? Why haven't you gotten it?
Question? Why haven't you asked it?
Kids? Why don't you want them?

You need to grow up.
You need to get help.
You need to commit.
You need to try harder.
You need to get over it.
You need to be realistic."

(Maybe today by S.K Williams pg 38)

this poem has great meaning. people expect so many things from each other but we can't do it all. we can't live up to their expectations and it gets overwhelming. all the noise can be too much sometimes.


message 3: by ella (new)

ella oof I knew this was gonna go nowhere I feel like no one likes poetry


message 4: by kell. (new)

kell. (kellstick) it’s so good tho!! i haven’t checked in on all the channels. i am just horrible at writing poetry but people who do are so special. this one was really amazing!!


message 5: by kell. (new)

kell. (kellstick) it would also help if i actually knew where to look for poetry i just don’t branch out fr


message 6: by ella (new)

ella well that one was in a book. I just like to go to Barnes & Noble and pick a random poetry book


message 7: by ella (new)

ella I can recommend ones for you if you want


message 8: by kell. (new)

kell. (kellstick) honestly that’d be cool if you would!


message 9: by ella (new)

ella okay so the author S.K Williams they have 3 books out and they're all really good. first book is maybe today. then I've read 3 books from Yung pueblo he has a trilogy I read (not in order tho cus it doesn't really matter) the first book is inward.


message 10: by ella (new)

ella maybe today he talks about loneliness, loss, trauma, and grief and how it grows and leans from that


message 11: by kell. (new)

kell. (kellstick) okay i'll look into them thanks:)


message 12: by ella (new)

ella inward is about self love and letting go :)


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