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kell.
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Dec 14, 2024 10:58PM
share your poetry or talk about poetry you like here! (suggested by ella)
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Ragdoll "Do this -- feel that --
House? Who needs it?
Dog? Who needs it?
Parents? Who needs them?
Childhood? Oh, grow up!
Money? You'll make it!
Dreams? Let's be real.
Love? You've got to settle sometime.
Rent? Where is it?
Job? Why don't you have it?
Ring? Why haven't you gotten it?
Question? Why haven't you asked it?
Kids? Why don't you want them?
You need to grow up.
You need to get help.
You need to commit.
You need to try harder.
You need to get over it.
You need to be realistic."
(Maybe today by S.K Williams pg 38)
this poem has great meaning. people expect so many things from each other but we can't do it all. we can't live up to their expectations and it gets overwhelming. all the noise can be too much sometimes.
it’s so good tho!! i haven’t checked in on all the channels. i am just horrible at writing poetry but people who do are so special. this one was really amazing!!
okay so the author S.K Williams they have 3 books out and they're all really good. first book is maybe today. then I've read 3 books from Yung pueblo he has a trilogy I read (not in order tho cus it doesn't really matter) the first book is inward.

