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message 1: by Tom (new)

Tom | 2 comments Hello, everyone! I'm an author seeking beta readers for my translated novel, a 300-page espionage thriller in British English with an unconventional, poetic style. Written originally in Polish, I need feedback on language clarity and how the narrative resonates with English-speaking readers. If you're intrigued by a tale of spies, secrets, and time-twisting mysteries, please DM me to read a sample and share your thoughts!


message 2: by IK (new)

IK | 25 comments Hello Tom,

Congratulations on translating your manuscript. I really love a proper espionage story. The thrill of uncovering secrets and the twists that throw me off balance always gets me.

I am a beta reader and line editor with a couple years of experience across multiple genres, I can provide a detailed analysis of your manuscript.

I offer:
- Feedback on characters, pacing, plot, tension, and suspense.
- Honest in-line comments and reactions in your manuscript.
- A detailed report summarizing your story’s strengths and areas to improve.
- Typos corrected (if you’re okay with it!).
- Actionable suggestions to enhance your work.
- Ongoing support—I’m always here to answer your questions.

My rate is $1.00 per 1,000 words with a 7-day turnaround. You can view testimonials and detailed service information on my website: https://thebookconn.wordpress.com/

If you're interested, please contact me at ikthebeardman@gmail.com

I'm excited about the possibility of working with you to bring your vision to life.

Best regards,
Ik


message 3: by Bassey (new)

Bassey Blessing (bhee_august) | 21 comments Tom wrote: "Hello, everyone! I'm an author seeking beta readers for my translated novel, a 300-page espionage thriller in British English with an unconventional, poetic style. Written originally in Polish, I n..."

Hi Tom,
Congratulations on completing your book. I'm Bassey and I offer experienced beta reading services. I have tried sending a dm but it seems you can’t accept messages on good reads. I really love spy and triller novels. My favorite at the moment is The Girl Who Kicked the Hornet's Nest and you manuscript seems like something of that nature. I am running a free first chapter read and $0.0008 per word for the remaining chapters. I have a fast turnaround time of 2 weeks. 

My deliverables includes;
- Chapterly review
- feedback on your characters, pace, plot, tension, and suspense
- Honest in-line comments and reactions in the manuscript
- Full and detailed report of the full story
- I'll always answer any questions you have.
- I'll make corrections on any typos if you won't be offended by it
- I'll give opinions on how to improve your work if needed.
- We can also hop on a call if it's needed

You can check the link below for my testimonials

https://penandreads.wordpress.com/

If this feels like something you want to try please send me an email to basseyblessing118@gmail.com


message 4: by Tom (new)

Tom | 2 comments Hello
Sorry, I didn't write it in the previous post.
I don't make money from writing, so I'm asking for free help. If the end result will be good, I will might publish it.


message 5: by Thanima (new)

Thanima | 2 comments Hi,
I'm willing to offer free beta reader assistance for your book. This is the first book I'm reading in espionage, so I look forward to seeing what the genre can offer.


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