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🌀 Mood Poems — Write What You Feel
This thread is for poems born from emotion. Whether you're feeling joy, sadness, anger, peace, confusion, or something you can't quite name—let it flow here.
You don’t need to explain your mood. Just let the words speak for you.
💭 You can:
- Post a poem that reflects your current mood
- Respond to someone else’s with empathy or encouragement
- Use a single word as a prompt (e.g., lonely, hopeful, restless) and build from there
This is a space to feel, to write, and to be heard—without judgment.

How I feel: Unsettled

Poem Title: Unsettled weather

I woke beneath clear skies
My blanket hugging me
The birds singing my name
The air smelt of morning dew

Then afternoon came
I was a fog, a mist
I didn't know where i was going
there was no sun nor moon

I heard thunder
though there was no rain
I heard lightning
but the skies was blue

Here I am
watching
the thunder set
while the stars alight

I love that sm! it’s such and interesting view that seem to move through the time of day as well and express feeling through weather!

thanks 😁😁😁

That’s lovely!

The mirror bends, it twists my face, A stranger stares, takes up my place. Each curve, each line, a battlefield, Where truth is lost, and lies revealed.
The eyes I see are not my own, They whisper flaws in undertone. A chorus sings of broken skin, Of battles fought but never win.
Yet somewhere deep beneath the glass, A softer voice begins to pass. It hums of strength, of hidden light, Of shadows yielding to the fight.
Though body’s shape may warp, disguise, The soul remains, unscarred, and wise. And one day soon, the mirror’s song, Will fade to silence, prove it wrong.

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Sadness drifts in like a tide, Soft but heavy, nowhere to hide. It stains the air, it dims the light, A shadowed cloak through endless night.
It hums in silence, low and deep, A lullaby that will not sleep. It bends the spine, it slows the breath, A quiet echo close to death.
Yet in its depth, a seed is sown, A fragile truth, a strength unknown. For even sorrow, sharp and vast, Is not a storm that always lasts.
The weight of blue may press the heart, But still it teaches, still imparts: That broken skies can heal with rain, And even sadness births new flame.

this is really beautifull😭😭😭

thank yoi

ur welcome

Reminds me of a phoenix 🐦‍🔥

feeling like shit

I spoke with fire, my words were cold,
A sharpened tongue, a heart too bold.
I turned away, left hurt behind,
A storm that raged without a mind.

But silence came, the echoes stayed,
Regret grew heavy, sharp as blade.
I see the pain my anger made,
And long to heal the scars displayed.

My eyes now soften, tears confess,
A wish to mend, to ease distress.
For though my voice once cut and scarred,
My heart now aches, my soul is marred.

Goodbye to the old me, hello to the new,
Nothing is left of the person you knew.
I spoke, but my voice fell into the void,
Each word dismissed, each hope destroyed.

I reached for your eyes, but you turned away,
My presence erased, like night hides the day.
Ignored, unseen, I fade from sight,
A shadow that lingers in endless night.

Yet silence carves me, sharp and deep,
A secret the world will never keep.
Goodbye to the old me, hello to the new,
Born from the pain of being ignored by you.

My thumb types out the words again,
"I miss you," "r we still friends"
"Are you even seeing this?"
it's emotional suicide
a special kind of hell
that I can't even tell

I love you, I think, even if you hurt me,
But you can't love a boy who won't let you see
That he's there at all. So I guess this is goodbye.
Another message
Not answered
Another stab at my chest

I type a question, then delete it, then type it again,
"Did you mean it? Or was I just your game?"
"Did any of it mean anything at all?"
I feel hurt and shamed
You have my secrets, the ones I don't tell,
The stories that make my living hell
A little bit lighter, or so I thought.
Now I just feel caught

I gave you the map to every single scar,
I thought you were different, I thought you were my star.
Now the sky is empty and so is my chest,

I called it love.
And it failed. I failed.

Ava (matching with the BAAAM fam) wrote: "feeling like shit

I spoke with fire, my words were cold,
A sharpened tongue, a heart too bold.
I turned away, left hurt behind,
A storm that raged without a mind.

But silence came, the echoes..."

It's reallly wonderful😭😭👏👏, I like the words you used in the poem

Ava (matching with the BAAAM fam) wrote: "Goodbye to the old me, hello to the new,
Nothing is left of the person you knew.
I spoke, but my voice fell into the void,
Each word dismissed, each hope destroyed.

I reached for your eyes, bu..."

Woww!!!!, It's raw and emotional😭😭😭👏👏👏

Katherine wrote: "I type a question, then delete it, then type it again,
"Did you mean it? Or was I just your game?"
"Did any of it mean anything at all?"
I feel hurt and shamed
You have my secrets, the ones I don't..."

😭😭This poem touched my heart, it has a good rhythm

feeling ignorned by the persom who “loves me”
I speak, but no one hears my name,
My voice dissolves, a fleeting flame.
The world moves on, I stand aside,
A shadow lost where I once tried.

Eyes pass through me, cold and blind,
No trace remains, no ties to bind.
Each day I shrink, I slip, I sway,
Ignored, unseen, I fade away.

Once I was whole, with light to give,
Now just a ghost who longs to live.
The silence grows, it takes its toll,
And leaves an echo where was a soul.

feeling betrayed and ignored by the one who claims to love me

You all pass by me, and no one cares,
To ask a question no one dares.
My voice is drowned, my soul erased,
A hollow shell in empty space.

I scream inside, but none will hear,
My presence fades, I disappear.
The world looks through me, cold, unkind,
And leaves my broken shell behind.

Each step I take dissolves to dust,
My heart corrodes, betrayed by trust.
Ignored, forgotten, I waste away,
A shadow cursed to rot and stay.

No hand will reach, no eyes will see,
The pain that slowly buries me.
You all pass by, I’m not alive,
Just grief that lingers, can’t survive.

These are all so beautiful 🥹

feeling-exhausted couse of nightmares

I lie awake, the night won’t end,
The voices rise, they twist, they bend.
They echo truths I cannot face,
And leave me trapped in this dark place.

The clock ticks on, the hours bleed,
Each whisper plants a poisoned seed.
I close my eyes, but still they stay,
A chorus I can’t turn away.

No peace, no rest, no gentle dream,
Just endless noise, a broken stream.
The voices haunt, they will not cease,
And steal from me my chance of peace.

i feel claustrophobic

The walls press in, they steal my breath,
A tightening grip, a living death.
No window wide, no open door,
Just endless panic at the core.

The air grows thick, it will not move,
My trembling hands have naught to prove.
Each heartbeat pounds against my chest,
A prison built that knows no rest.

I claw at silence, plead for space,
But shadows close, they leave no trace.
A cage of dread, where hope has fled,
Where light is strangled, and dreams lie dead.