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Title: The Senators Secret
Genre: Dark Romance
Word count: 100k
Status: First full draft, looking for reader impressions before professional editing


Jade — blurb

I left California with nothing. My career was gone. My bank account drained. Moving into my sister’s guesthouse wasn’t a choice, it was desperation. Brooke doesn’t want me here. Her fiancé, Senator Killian West, makes it clear he doesn’t either. The man the public applauds isn’t the one I find behind closed doors. He hides behind order, bound to a world built on secrets, violence, and dangerous circles. And once you’re inside, survival comes down to how much of yourself you’re willing to
lose.


Killian — blurb

I don’t feel guilt for the things I’ve done. They gave me power, and I don’t intend to give that up—not for my fiancé, not for anyone. In public, I’m the Senator. The one they trust to keep order. In private, that order is fragile, held together by force of will. Brooke’s sister moved into my house, and Jade is a liability I can’t afford to have. She pushes too close to what I’ve buried, and when she uncovers it, it will take her down with me.


If you like dark, psychological, character-driven romance with twisted power dynamics, I’d love for you to beta read.




Content Warnings:

Manipulation & psychological control


Consensual BDSM elements (punishment, dominance/submission dynamics)


Mentions of rape / past assault (not graphic, not romanticized)



Important Note: This is not a cheating book. There are family and engagement dynamics, but no actual cheating takes place.


What I’m looking for in a Beta: General pacing/flow feedback. Character voice consistency (especially Jade’s defiance vs. vulnerability) Clarity—any confusing scenes, places where you wanted more/less details

Meghan wrote: "Title: The Senators Secret
Genre: Dark Romance
Word count: 100k
Status: First full draft, looking for reader impressions before professional editing


Jade — blurb

I left California with nothing..."

Hello Meghan,

I've just read the blurb for your manuscript, and I must say, the concept you've created sounds really interesting.


As a beta reader and editor with a couple years of experience across multiple genres, I can provide a detailed analysis of your manuscript.

I offer:
- Feedback on characters, pacing, plot, tension, and suspense.
- Honest in-line comments and reactions in your manuscript.
- A detailed report summarizing your story’s strengths and areas to improve.
- Typos corrected (if you’re okay with it!).
- Actionable suggestions to enhance your work.
- Ongoing support—I’m always here to answer your questions.

My rate is $1.00 per 1,000 words with a 7-day turnaround. You can view testimonials and detailed service information on my website: https://thebookconn.wordpress.com/

If you're interested, please contact me at ikthebeardman@gmail.com

I'm excited about the possibility of working with you to bring your vision to life.

Best regards,
Ik

Hi Meghan,
Im a new beta Reader and I do so as apart of my reading hobby.
I LOVE a dark romance and would be happy to read your book, offer feedback and review for you if youre interested let me know
😊

Hi Jade, I’m interested!

I have nearly five years of experience as a beta reader, having worked with around 300 clients so far.

My service includes:
✅️ Thorough feedback report addressimg elements such as: plot and character development, narration and writing style, plot holes and inconsistencies, worldbuilding and magic system, pacing, dull and confusing moments, etc.
✅️ Inline comments on the manuscript with my reactions and specific suggestions.
✅️ The option to answer up to 20 specific questions, which you can submit either before or after receiving my feedback.

My rate is $1 per 1000 words and I still have a couple openings for October.

Here is my page in case you'd like to take a look at my info and testimonials: https://bellerosereads.wordpress.com/...

If you'd like to work with me, you can contact me via email: cielobellerose@gmail.com

Thank you for your time and consideration!

Hey meg!
wanted to reach out and say i read for absolutely FREE!
you’ll receive honest opinions on things that bothered me and a review on goodreads.
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