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message 1: by Bhuku (new)

Bhuku | 1 comments Hello! I'm an agented, unpublished writer. I'd love to get some beta reads of my current manuscript, EATERS, as I work on the third draft/before I send it to my agent to ready for sub to publishers!

EATERS is complete at 78k words, written in the first person present tense POV with an accessible, women's fiction style and slow-burn tension.

Tropes:
- cannibalism
- rich people behaving badly
- 20-something messy female protagonist
- remote luxury island resort (Nine Perfect Strangers and White Lotus vibes)

I'd be happy to share the first two chapters to assess style fit before sending the full manuscript!


message 2: by Bassey (new)

Bassey Blessing (bhee_august) | 21 comments Bhuku wrote: "Hello! I'm an agented, unpublished writer. I'd love to get some beta reads of my current manuscript, EATERS, as I work on the third draft/before I send it to my agent to ready for sub to publishers..."

Hi Bhuku,

Congratulations on completing your book. I'm Bassey and I offer experienced beta reading services. I interested in reading your manuscript. I am running a free first chapter read and $0.0008 per word for the remaining chapters. I have a fast turnaround time of 2 weeks. 

My deliverables includes;
- Chapterly review
- feedback on your characters, pace, plot, tension, and suspense
- Honest in-line comments and reactions in the manuscript
- Full and detailed report of the full story
- I'll always answer any questions you have.
- I'll make corrections on any typos if you won't be offended by it
- I'll give opinions on how to improve your work if needed.

You can check the link below for my testimonials
https://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/...
or my website
https://penandreads.wordpress.com/

Please let me know if this is something that interests you. Looking forward to hearing from you 

You can reach me at basseyblessing118@gmail.com or reply under this thread, let's work together


message 3: by Jane (new)

Jane Hartsock | 6 comments Hi Bhuku,

I'd be happy to take a look at your manuscript. Here is some information about me and about what I offer. https://janehartsock.com/beta-and-cri...

Feel free to reach out if you think I'd be a good fit for your project.

Jane


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