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John (jdourg) | 324 comments I

The moving sun-shapes on the spray,
The sparkles where the brook was flowing,
Pink faces, plightings, moonlit May,
These were the things we wished would stay;
But they were going.

II

Seasons of blankness as of snow,
The silent bleed of a world decaying,
The moan of multitudes in woe,
These were the things we wished would go;
But they were staying.

III

Then we looked closelier at Time,
And saw his ghostly arms revolving
To sweep off woeful things with prime,
Things sinister with things sublime
Alike dissolving.


message 2: by John (last edited Oct 03, 2025 02:28PM) (new)

John (jdourg) | 324 comments This remarkable poem was published in 1922 in Hardy’s Late Lyrics and Earlier.

He thought it would be his last book because he was 82 years old. But he did go on to publish two more collections in the six years he had remaining.

Of all of his poetry collections, he wrote the longest preface for this one and entitled it Apology. I have read it several times and it is not easy to understand. He seems to want to write his theory of poetry, but I must say it was not easy to decipher. He seems to be meditating on the fact that there are poems old and new, somber and joyous, and it is just the way he goes about writing and then collecting it all for one book. He also writes of a necessary nexus of poetry, literature, religion, and rationality. Whew, he draws in a huge sphere that hardly has bounds.

Here is a nice quote from it: I believe that those readers who care for my poems at all — readers to whom no passport is required — will care for this new installment of them, perhaps the last, as much as for any that have preceded them.

Although he entitled this preface Apology, no apology was needed. This poem is a superb meditation on things good and bad, sublime and ugly — and they all are treated the same way by Time. We may get caught up in the sublime, recoil at ugliness, but in the end Time sweeps them away just the same.


message 3: by Bionic Jean, Moderator (last edited Oct 03, 2025 02:27PM) (new)

Bionic Jean (bionicjean) | 1995 comments Mod
John wrote: "He thought it would be his last book because he was 82 years old. But he did go on to publish two more collections in the six years he had remaining ..."

That is amazing isn't it? Thanks for this one, John, and the information. It's now linked to our list.


message 4: by Bionic Jean, Moderator (last edited Oct 03, 2025 02:30PM) (new)

Bionic Jean (bionicjean) | 1995 comments Mod
You're right, it's not a simple poem to decipher, although it is very elegant. I think Thomas Hardy is exploring one of his favourite themes here: the fleeting nature of joy and the enduring presence of sorrow. We recognise this in both Tess of the D’Urbervilles (view spoiler) and The Mayor of Casterbridge, where he examines (view spoiler).

I do like the simple and evocative imagery. The "moving sun-shapes" and "sparkles" of the first stanza contrast with the "blankness" and "bleeding" of the second. But it is sad that at 82 years old, Thomas Hardy was so pessimistic. I also wonder if the title was partly self-reflective, and referring to his own existence as part of nature.


message 5: by Greg (last edited Oct 03, 2025 02:49PM) (new)

Greg | 150 comments I guess there is a tiny bit of optimism in the last stanza that time sweeps away both the sinister and the sublime things?

It reminds me a little of that line in An Elegy In A Country Churchyard: And Ode On A Distant Prospect Of Eton College where the humility of the people's lives "Their lot forbade: nor circumscrib'd alone / Their growing virtues, but their crimes confin'd." Yes, their obscurity and poverty checked what great deeds they might have done, but it also checked their wicked deeds.

Here as John says, time is an impartial check on mankind.

Things sinister with things sublime
Alike dissolving


What is sublime must pass, but thankfully, what is sinister must pass too. So time restricts the scope of both. I suppose that during bad times or during catastrophies enacted by human folly, that might be a comfort. At least the cruel cannot go on doing harm forever.

At the moment, I find that comforting.


message 6: by John (last edited Oct 03, 2025 03:24PM) (new)

John (jdourg) | 324 comments If you have a copy of Late Lyrics and read the Apology, you can tell that he believed this was his last work. I’m sure it was natural to him to feel this way — he even remarks that he was writing in the Victorian Age and now has been around long enough to be able to quote Albert Einstein.

Hardy’s creative longevity itself is remarkable, but even more so, he had an innate understanding of the eras in which he wrote. One only has to look at the sardonic Great War poems to realize he comprehended Modernism as well as Philip Larkin or Ted Hughes.

As Greg did, I do find some level of comfort with this poem.


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Sara (phantomswife) | 78 comments I also can see the comforting side of this poem. I also think he is talking about perception. Good times seem to speed by us, hard and sorrowful times seem to linger indefinitely. We can almost miss the daily joys, but when we experience loss or great sorrow, it seems to stay with us tainting our days.

Although he entitled this preface Apology, no apology was needed.

I wonder if he had in mind the Greek meaning for apology. A defense, rather than an acknowledgement of guilt; a kind of justification of his beliefs or his methods of writing poetry. I might not be explaining my thoughts very well, so this might not make sense to anyone except me.


message 8: by Werner (new)

Werner | 153 comments Sara, when I read that Apology, I took the word in its original Greek sense also!


message 9: by John (last edited Oct 04, 2025 02:02AM) (new)

John (jdourg) | 324 comments I think you both are correct. The original Greek meaning aligns apology with “explanation.”

Though I must admit when I read it — several times now — it sounds rather defensive. Almost like half an apology and half an explanation.


message 10: by Connie (last edited Oct 04, 2025 07:44AM) (new)

Connie  G (connie_g) | 708 comments This is a beautiful poem, John. In the first stanza, Hardy is mentioning things we associate with youth as well as happiness with the line "Pink faces, plightings, moonlit May." Youth is fleeting and we can never return to that young age. Our joys do not last forever.

The second stanza spoke to me with all the craziness in our present world. Hardy may have had World War I and its aftermath on his mind since the poem was published in 1922. Hardy has a reputation for being pessimistic, but he was looking at some grim times in reality that he wished would go away.

Time is personified in the third stanza with his sweeping arms of a clock, sweeping away the sinister and the sublime. But it's all part of an endless cycle with more joys and more problems replacing the old since Time marches on forever.


message 11: by Bionic Jean, Moderator (new)

Bionic Jean (bionicjean) | 1995 comments Mod
I haven't got the preface, but from what you are all saying I would have thought he would title it "Apologia". He had taught himself Greek, and after all we use this word in common English parlance.


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Bridget | 867 comments Mod
Bionic Jean wrote: "I haven't got the preface, but from what you are all saying I would have thought he would title it "Apologia". He had taught himself Greek, and after all we use this word in common English parlance."

I had that same thought about Apologia, Jean. Hardy is known to choose words with care, so now I'm wondering if he purposefully did not use "apologia" because he wanted to leave his intention vague. Maybe take the sting out of any negative reviews by "apologizing" ahead of time. Even though it sounds like what he wrote is more of a defense argument, then a mea culpa; there was a deep insecurity in Hardy that could consume him so a pre-apology from him is not surprising. Well, it's all conjecture on my part, I have no idea what the great man was thinking.

I did love this poem. Thank you so much John. Like many of you, the message of the poem resonates with me right now, with the world as it is. I think I might try to commit this poem to memory and keep it around for comfort on a sad day.

I am reminded of the adage "time heals all wounds", which I have experienced as true more than once in my life. I've never thought about Time also sweeping away the good as it dissolves the bad. I've just always been grateful for the emotional relief Time brings. But now I will think of Time doing both.


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