Beta Reader Group discussion

Hi everyone,

I am looking for readers for the second completed draft of my low fantasy vampire/human story.



Crispin has been made new. A life he didn't want, with no answers to guide him from his maker. After a chance encounter with a human girl who escapes a feeding, more questions grow as he considers what it means to be a vampire.
Ophelia has been on the run since her escape from the devil himself. With no one but herself to rely on, she must find her own way as she grapples with the memory of that night. When she finds a book detailing Creatures of the Night, she finds her purpose: to write what she knows, and learn what she can about the evil that had tried to claim her. Entwined since that fateful night, the pair find there's no escaping what fate has determined.



Looking for general feedback, with an emphasis on:
what worked/didn't work
what areas need more added
what areas were weak
how the narration and flow felt

Thank you!