aspiring author discusions discussion

what are your best fiction ideas? post them and we'll give you feedback! no stealing of stories allowed: if you do, we have proof with this chat, and will hold you acountable for plagerism.

alright! i have one.
Title: The Angel Experiment
Characters: Angel,Tetsura,sakura,Paul,Crystal,Hitosomisan

Plot: Angel,16, is part vampire due to Tetsura,23,because she wanted to be with Paul,18. Angel was supposed to keep her "secret" to herself but she told her friend Crystal,17, who is human.Sakura,21, is Tetsura's sister and Paul's girlfriend. Hitosomisan broke away from the vampiric clan called the Sacred Winds to form Deathclaw: a terrorist kinds of vampire group who kill humans. but as a sacred code no vampire is allowed to carry any bullet projectile of any kind. All of the 5 people are told of an acient prophcy about that one will break away (hitisomisan) and they were supposed to destroy him and Deathclaw to restore balance to vampire and human once again. So armed with Swords, Shurikans, spells & hope, the 5 friends set off to vanquish the evil that has torn this world apart