Reading in English Group 5 Term 1 2015 discussion

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message 1: by Joseph (new)

Joseph (jcurrannz) | 29 comments Mod
Here is the place where you should publish your short stories that you write in class.


message 2: by Joseph (new)

Joseph (jcurrannz) | 29 comments Mod
One day, there was a very, very, very handsome teacher who taught Group 5. His class was very, very, very, shy and quiet. He did not know what to do, so he asked his very, very, very, pretty friend what to do. She told him that he should be very, very, very mean to them and shout at them and hit them until they talk.
The next day, he was very, very, very bad, and he shouted at his students and hit his students.
Finally, he was in very, very, very big trouble, and the students kicked him out of the class and never let him come back.


message 3: by Ai (new)

Ai Tatsukawa | 9 comments There was a boy who is a very kind and brave. His friend has a bad cold. So he went to neighboring town to buy medicine. There are rugged mountains on the way to the town. But He went the town without any problems, but when he back to his town, he met a monster. The monster attacked him and robbed the medicine. He injured. But he fought the monster to help his friend. Forest animals helped him, so he caught win the monster. He said them ‘Thank you’ and got down the mountain. He gave the medicine to his friend.
After then, his friend got better.


message 4: by Joseph (new)

Joseph (jcurrannz) | 29 comments Mod
Awesome story Ai! Well done :)


message 5: by Jose (new)

Jose | 16 comments There was a beautiful day when my parents visited me at IPC in New Zealand. After that we had a memorable trip in Wellington for 3 days. We discovered Tepapa museum and saw many amazing things that we haven't seen it before. I saw the fossil, mineral and gaint squid and so on. I also went to sunday market and bought some fruit and vegetables, they were cheaper than Palmerston North. We went to Cuba Street for buying some stuff as well, my mom was happy and bought many clothes. My father really likes army fashion, suddenly, we found a big shop that sold army clothes while we were walking on the sidewalk. And now my parents are staying in Viet Nam and I miss them so much. I cherish this memory.


message 6: by Hina (new)

Hina Shiode | 15 comments One day, there was a girl’s high school student.
She was very shy.
She thought she wanted to change her personal.
She belonged to marching band club for changed her personal.
She met Saki and Nozomi there.
Marching band club is extremely hard.
She thought she quit the marching band club.
But, Saki and Nozomi supported me thought the most difficult time of my life.
So, she doesn’t quit the marching band for three years.
And, she was changed her personal.
She became friendly.
She thought she could change herself.


message 7: by Sari (new)

Sari Ota | 11 comments Sulley's hide and go seek♪

There was a big monster called Sulley. His big body makes him conspicuous. And he can't hide. He was in trouble to it.
One day, he met a small monster called Mike. Mike was very friendly and so funny and he makes Sulley happy.
Mike gave Sulley some pieces of advice to hide and go seek. Mike said "Example, you paint your body and you will try to be like the wall or the tree or the grass."
On the 'Hide and Go Seek Meeting' day, Sulley tried Mike's advice. Sulley could hide brilliantly. Anyone cannot find him till the last. Sully was championship!!
It was thanks to Mike all.
After, Sulley and Mike were best friend like brothers.


message 8: by Shota (new)

Shota MARUI | 17 comments There was the dog.
The dog was invited a boy to eat a dumpling.
But a boy didn't give the dog.
The dog was angry.So he vents his angry on an ogre.
An ogre was killed by the dog.
A boy was fearful and ran away.
The results don't tell a lie.


message 9: by Mika (last edited May 14, 2015 12:44AM) (new)

Mika | 9 comments Once upon a time,there was a big bear names BonBon who lived in the forest.He looks like scary,so people was afraid him,but he is very kind and he wants to be friends with people.

One day,a boy whose names Tom walked in the forest.Suddenly,a few wild boars appeared a front of Tom then the wild boars was approaching to Tom,so He was very afraid.And Bonbon appeared a front of them when Tom shouted " Help me! ".BonBon was threat to the wild boars. The wild boars was afraid,so they were escaped.Tom was helped by Bonbon. Tom was very happy. He said “ Thank you for helped me! “ and Bonbon said kindly “ You are welcome “.

After that,Tom and Bonbon became a best friends.And Bonbon became liked by everyone.


message 10: by Joseph (new)

Joseph (jcurrannz) | 29 comments Mod
Wow, these are really great stories! I am very impressed by your stories :D


message 11: by Ploy (new)

Ploy | 19 comments Mary's a little girl
One day, Mary and her friends went go shopping.They're beautiful girls and famous in facebook.And They have dinner at the shopping mall. The mobile calling!!! her friend pick up the phone and talking with her boyfriend.And then she said she have to go meet her boyfriend.So Mary's alone,she must to go back her home by herself. She's walking at the parking car on the fifth floor. There're quiet no one there!!! She heard some sound like someone want to help.But she didn't see anyone.No one there!!!! she feel fear and walk quickly.And then she's seeing some woman on the ground and a lot of blood but she didn't see clearly so she's running to that woman!!! But instantly that women gone!!!!! she's shocking and run away that place!!!. At that time she stoped and her face normal.she walks to porch and climb!!!! she stays on the porch for while and jump out!!!!!! she didn't scream or cry.She died!!!!! a lot of blood on the floor.No one know why she kills herself ??? and what's happened at the parking car on fifth floor. !!!!!!!!


message 12: by MOMOKAGA (new)

MOMOKAGA | 12 comments There were a man and a wife.The wife has a baby.One day,she became sick.She said,"I want to eat Rapunzel.I'll die if I cannot eat it."Neighbor has rapunzel garden,but the neighbor was a scary witch.The man was going to steal the rapunzel,but the witch found him.The man said,"Please forgive me.My wife will die.The witch said,"Ok.But instead give me your baby."The man and wife unwillingly give her the baby.The witch brought up the baby on a tower and named Rapunzel.The witch didn't let her cut her hair.Several years later,she grew up a beauty girl.The witch climbed the tower using Rapunzel's hair everyday.One day,a prince saw that.The prince crimbed the tower too.Rapunzel was surprised because the person who climbed was not the witch.But they fell in love.But the witch noticed that,and cut her hair long beauty hair.The witch hunged down her long hair.And when the prince climbed next time,she said him"Rapunzel died".He shocked and fell.He injured his eyes by a splinter of rose then.He became blindness.He thought that,"Rapunzel disappeared and I became blindness ,let's die...No,she surely alive!"He looked for her for many years.One day,he heard miss voice.Finaly,he found Rapunzel!They hugged each other.His eyes were cured by her tears!They went to the prince's country,and they married.
They lived happy ever after.


message 13: by Yamashita (new)

Yamashita Yuzuru | 11 comments One day there a man who was like a stupid and bad girl. He’ name is marry.
She was high school second student. She didn’t have his dream.
But she was third student when met a teacher. He’s name is John.
He is smart and passionately. John taught her how to study in English, history, Kanji and so on. And she thought I want to become teacher like John. She studied hard with John. At last she passed most smart in NZ and she became the teacher. END 


message 14: by Ploy (new)

Ploy | 19 comments i like your short story,momo. it's like love story.


message 15: by Kei (new)

Kei Horiguchi | 21 comments There was one cat. Once the cat became a king's cat,one a sailor's cat,and others a magician's cat of circus,a thief's cat,a lonely old woman's cat, a girl's cat and so on... The cat was reborn one million times and died. That time,one million owners of the cat was very sad but the cat hadn't been sad. The cat was hate owners. Once the cat became a stray cat. The cat who liked myself was proud of the thing that the cat lived one million times. And many she-cats came near to the cat. But only one cat wasn't interested in the cat. The cat fell in love with the white cat. Then the white cat was fell in love and the cat first loved someone. After the time, the white cat had many kittens and got old. finally the white cat died next to the cat. For the first time, the cat was sad. The cat was crying all day one million times. And then,finally the cat died next to the white cat and the cat hadn't been reborn since.


message 16: by Jose (new)

Jose | 16 comments Omg, it's really really really really really really amazing story right? I really really really really really really like Joseph's story. That's why I'm writting with this type now.


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