Poets + Writers discussion

Here ya go! :)

Thank you! 🤩

Just going to start this off with a bit about myself. Hi I’m Charlotte (a.k.a Spud 🥔), just a teenage writer and reader who’s working on her own book! I joined in hopes of some constructive feedback, ideas, and suggestions from other writers. Looking forward to sharing my work bit by bit :)

P.S. It’s a fantasy book 📕✨

ooh i love fantasy!! :)

Character Profile: (still in the works)

Name: Estel
Age: 537 (24 years)
Gender: Female
Race: Fae
Position: High Priestess for the Goddess of Love

Appearance:
- 5’11”
- Kylie Jenner style figure (idk the right words to explain it 😭)
- Chocolate brown hair in the style of a half up rose bun
- Almond shaped molten gold eyes
- Light dusting of freckles across her nose
- Pale ivory skin
- Low set eyebrows

Clothing:
- Red priestess style dresses that show skin
- Bold goddess-like headpieces (crowns)
- Face veils (sometimes/fantasy of course)
- Elegant gold jewellery

Update: Estel’s personality will be coming soon (currently in the works)

Alrighty, I desperately need suggestions. If the female was the powerful one (role wise), what role would you like to see the male have?

This is related to Estel and her role as High Priestess.

The personal hype for the female character 😁 like he isn’t jealous of her power and cheers her on and doesn’t compare himself with her :)

Ooh I love this! What a brilliant idea, thank you 🤩🙏🏻

Spud wrote: "Alrighty, I desperately need suggestions. If the female was the powerful one (role wise), what role would you like to see the male have?

This is related to Estel and her role as High Priestess."

hmm, maybe someone who works with her, but is slightly lower in the heirarchy or whatever?? or maybe someone who she has to see several times a day for stuff related to what she does?

Potatoe queen has arrived to observe potato subject write MASTERPIECE

I love this idea Sai! Thank you for your input :)

⚘ Alina the potatoe (kill me) ⚘ wrote: "Potatoe queen has arrived to observe potato subject write MASTERPIECE"

Potato subject shall write MASTERPIECE!

Thank you so much everyone for your input, it's been very much appreciated! I'm happy to say I have an update.

The male protagonists role would be as the general of the army for the enemy kingdom. Not only that he'll later become her hype man and general. For your information the enemy kingdom is a non religious kingdom with a ruling monarchy, the complete opposite to main land where my female protagonist lives.

The female protagonist, to refresh some people's memory is a high priestess for the goddess of love. This is the same system around the continent, a place ruled by religion and faith.

Before I finish the update I will be revealing the male protagonist's name, his brother's name, and a name change for the female protagonist who was once named Estel (I was not satisfied with the name).

I introduce to you...
Leuka (female protagonist)
Vaughn (male protagonist)
Silas (Vaughn's brother)

Please let me know if you have any feedback, thoughts, suggestions, otherwise thank you all so much. I'm looking forward to releasing the next update!

The names sound so good! And the whole idea of the characters also. Looking forward for an update! Good luck:)

Thank you so much Stella. I’m looking forward to releasing it soon :)

Hey everyone!

Sorry for the late update, I've been busy with school and everyday life.

I'm proud to announce that I have a small update of the names of the lands in the religious continent. To refresh some people's memories this continent in the home to my main protagonist/high priestess, Leuka. The continent/realm is split into 6 lands each with their own high priestess and ruling god. Below are the names of the lands and their domain.

Land of Soul (Life)
Land of Insight (Wisdom)
Land of Fury (War)
Land of Lust (Love)
Land of Demise (Death)
Land of Law (Justice)

Due to my currently busy schedule, update releases may take longer than hoped for. I'm working fast to release the names of the gods domains and some other minor characters.

Thank you for all your support, and once again any feedback, thoughts, or suggestions will be greatly appreciated!

Ooh I like the names, Land of Demise and Land of Insight sound especially interesting :)

wowww the world building sounds so great already!

So I might have done it again... I changed everything. Does anyone else have this problem? As soon as I start liking something, something else takes my fancy and I soon change it all to my preferred option. Anyways, before I spill any details on my new idea, I'll let you have a view of the main concept.

"A sacred order of fae born huntresses, sworn to a divine goddess of the hunt, are raised to hunt the very fae they were created to protect. Elyssa Ever, the lieutenant and most loyal blade of the order, is destined to lead… until betrayal shatters everything she believes in."

Also any suggestions how to clearly plan a book? I'm struggling 😭

Hi everyone! In honour of Easter, I’ve written a poem.

Soft bells ring on Easter morning,
A world of hope is newly dawning.
The sky is brushed with gentle light,
As darkness fades from longest night.

Through fields of green and blossoms fair,
A quiet joy is everywhere.
For love has risen, bright and true,
And life begins again anew.

Spud wrote: "Hi everyone! In honour of Easter, I’ve written a poem.

Soft bells ring on Easter morning,
A world of hope is newly dawning.
The sky is brushed with gentle light,
As darkness fades from longest nig..."

lovely <3

Spud wrote: "So I might have done it again... I changed everything. Does anyone else have this problem? As soon as I start liking something, something else takes my fancy and I soon change it all to my preferre..."

you're not alone with that problem 😭😭 i feel called out lmao

Spud wrote: "Thank you so much Stella. I’m looking forward to releasing it soon :)"

Reading through this thread now and with all the anticipation and world building I'm really intrigued to read the story!
Are you still busy with this?

H.V. wrote: "Spud wrote: "Thank you so much Stella. I’m looking forward to releasing it soon :)"

Reading through this thread now and with all the anticipation and world building I'm really intrigued to read the story! Are you still busy with this?

Hey H.V.
So happy to hear you're interested in my story. I have unfortunately been held up with school exams and facing writers block. The story is still in the planning stage and I'm slowly making progress.

I'll update my page once a new piece of exciting planning has been made!