Red Queen
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Help I need feedback!
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Jan 30, 2026 09:17PM
Hi everyone! I'm a 13 year old trying to write my first ever dystopian book, and I would love some feedback from experienced readers and fellow authors. I will constaly bring updates about the story. So this is the start of my prologue.
FYI: I first used this for a school assigment, so I haven't finished it yet because I haven't received my paper back/ the teacher is still grading. Here it is;
Prologue
An alarm bursts from the speakers all around our gray town. The sky is charcoal gray covered by the ashes accumulated throughout centuries of war. I don’t flinch. Years of taking part in the daily Population drills really turned my pain into a catalyst.
EDIT: Ignore the book this topic is about because I can't just leave it blank, It's a famous book and I absolutely love Victoria Aveyard's work! <3
FYI: I first used this for a school assigment, so I haven't finished it yet because I haven't received my paper back/ the teacher is still grading. Here it is;
Prologue
An alarm bursts from the speakers all around our gray town. The sky is charcoal gray covered by the ashes accumulated throughout centuries of war. I don’t flinch. Years of taking part in the daily Population drills really turned my pain into a catalyst.
EDIT: Ignore the book this topic is about because I can't just leave it blank, It's a famous book and I absolutely love Victoria Aveyard's work! <3
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