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message 1: by Ashley (new)

Ashley | 102 comments Mod
Basically, the country was split into two kingdoms. In one kingdom, the princess's father rules as king, and in the other kingdom, the pirate's father rules as king and the kingdoms are like opposites. Anyways, for reasons that I don't know yet, the princess (I'm thinking her name is gonna be Wynter) and then the pirate (still haven't decided on a name) get arranged to be married to unite the kingdoms and prevent a war. That's all I have right now, but yeah...


message 2: by MTK (new)

MTK | 77 comments I love an arranged marriage (in fiction!) ⭐️🤩


message 3: by Ashley (new)

Ashley | 102 comments Mod
MTK wrote: "I love an arranged marriage (in fiction!) ⭐️🤩"

sameeee even tho i've only read one book with it lolll


✨ayla✨ {ive drawn out in sharpie} | 4 comments bro that sounds so cool!!


message 5: by MTK (new)

MTK | 77 comments I’ve read NONE. just like, imagination scenario series (cuz I’m just like that lol) and making them up


message 6: by Ashley (new)

Ashley | 102 comments Mod
✨ayla✨ {shes imperfect but she tries} wrote: "bro that sounds so cool!!"

tysmmm


message 7: by Ashley (new)

Ashley | 102 comments Mod
MTK wrote: "I’ve read NONE. just like, imagination scenario series (cuz I’m just like that lol) and making them up"

lollll i read a lot on poly buzz ai but i read king of wrath by ana huang and thats an arranged marriage and i loved it


message 8: by MTK (new)

MTK | 77 comments What’s poly buzz ai?


message 9: by Kaylee (new)

Kaylee Garrett | 50 comments Mod
That is soooo good Ashley!!!! If you haven’t read the Betrothed series it’s 2 books and sounds somewhat similar!! It may help with inspo maybe??


message 10: by Ashley (new)

Ashley | 102 comments Mod
MTK wrote: "What’s poly buzz ai?"

its like character ai where you can basically talk with ai characters (im cringing at myself rn)


message 11: by Ashley (new)

Ashley | 102 comments Mod
Kaylee wrote: "That is soooo good Ashley!!!! If you haven’t read the Betrothed series it’s 2 books and sounds somewhat similar!! It may help with inspo maybe??"

ouuuu i haven't read those i'll check it out tysm!!!


message 12: by MTK (new)

MTK | 77 comments Ohhh yeah. Don’t need to cringe I don’t judge! I used to sneak on my phone with my friends in science and just try to annoy the ai characters on a different ai thingy. We don’t talk about that lol


message 13: by Ashley (new)

Ashley | 102 comments Mod
MTK wrote: "Ohhh yeah. Don’t need to cringe I don’t judge! I used to sneak on my phone with my friends in science and just try to annoy the ai characters on a different ai thingy. We don’t talk about that lol"

lolll thats so real


message 14: by ~K~ (new)

~K~ | 2 comments that’s such a good storyline!! I hope to see a lot of back story since I have alot of questions hehe!!


message 15: by Ashley (new)

Ashley | 102 comments Mod
~K~ wrote: "that’s such a good storyline!! I hope to see a lot of back story since I have alot of questions hehe!!"

tyyy! If you have any questions please ask them so I can add the answers to the backstory lolll I suck at creating backstories


message 16: by Ashley (new)

Ashley | 102 comments Mod
FMC: Wynter is the princess of (whatever i name her kingdom). Her father and mother are still alive though her mother is sick and rarely comes out of her room. Her parents are kind though very strict ever since her younger sister died. Wynter has a strong personality but keeps quiet most of the time.

MMC: (Haven't decided on a name yet) is the prince of pirates or (pirates kingdom name) he's a mix of black cat and golden retriever. Think of a Kai Azer personality or Jacks from OUABH


message 17: by Ashley (new)

Ashley | 102 comments Mod
Pirate Kingdom: Roam
Royalty Kingdom: Rien


message 18: by Kaylee (new)

Kaylee Garrett | 50 comments Mod
I love that Ashley!!! I think for background, their rivals right? So how did they become rival kingdoms and why do they need to prevent a war with the marriage?


message 19: by Ashley (new)

Ashley | 102 comments Mod
Kaylee wrote: "I love that Ashley!!! I think for background, their rivals right? So how did they become rival kingdoms and why do they need to prevent a war with the marriage?"

ohhh okkk tyy i'll make sure to add that to my backstory i think i'm doing the backstory in the prolouge


message 20: by Kaylee (new)

Kaylee Garrett | 50 comments Mod
Ohhh, you should do a map! Like on the ‘pages’ around the covers but the inside, sorry I don’t know what they’re called but you know


message 21: by Ashley (new)

Ashley | 102 comments Mod
Kaylee wrote: "Ohhh, you should do a map! Like on the ‘pages’ around the covers but the inside, sorry I don’t know what they’re called but you know"

yesss i really want to i js gotta figure out how first loll


message 22: by MTK (new)

MTK | 77 comments ooh I made a map for mine!


message 23: by Ashley (new)

Ashley | 102 comments Mod
MTK wrote: "ooh I made a map for mine!"

ouuu how'd you do it?


message 24: by MTK (new)

MTK | 77 comments I just used pen and paper, but I looked on Pinterest for inspo. some people just grab rice and an art pen, pour the rice on paper, then outline it carefully and then Bam! map.


message 25: by Ashley (new)

Ashley | 102 comments Mod
MTK wrote: "I just used pen and paper, but I looked on Pinterest for inspo. some people just grab rice and an art pen, pour the rice on paper, then outline it carefully and then Bam! map."

ohhhh smarttt lolll i didn't know if you used a website or not lolll


message 26: by MTK (new)

MTK | 77 comments no I did it in my sketchbook lol


message 27: by Ashley (new)

Ashley | 102 comments Mod
MTK wrote: "no I did it in my sketchbook lol"

ahhh okkkk


message 28: by Ashley (new)

Ashley | 102 comments Mod
I'm rewriting this because I've filled in some missing holes.


FMC: Wynter Thorne is the princess of Rien. Her father and mother are still alive, though her mother is sick and rarely comes out of her room. Her parents are kind, though very strict, ever since her younger sister died. Wynter has a strong personality but keeps quiet most of the time. She loves the gardens, especially the wishing well that is covered in white roses (white roses are her favorite flower). She is 5'7 with hazel eyes and brunette hair with a streak of white through it, though it is hidden well, and she's 19 years old.

MMC: Caspian Graves is the prince of pirates, or Roam, the kingdom's name. He's a mix of black cat and golden retriever energy. Likes to tease and flirt, but is also protective and will kill if necessary. He is 6'5 tan with a sleeve of tattoos on his right arm, with jet black hair with slight waves to it. His eyes are a mix of grey and blue, and he's 21 years old.

Backstory: Many years ago, two friends did everything together. One of the friends' names was Cassian, and he was a strong personality who didn't always do the right thing. He loved adventures and being in the water all the time. The other friend was Louis, he was a very moral man who loved to always do the right thing, but he wasn't brave like Cassian. They set out on a journey together and found an unknown land. They brought people from their old country to this new land to start a new nation. They ruled together side by side for many years until a fight occurred between them, ultimately splitting the country up and their friendship. Ever since then, the two countries have had wars and hated each other. Now, to save their countries from ruin, the two royal families must figure out how to ally before the citizens attack each other and destroy everything that was built.


message 29: by Kaylee (new)

Kaylee Garrett | 50 comments Mod
OH MY GOSH. ASHLEY I LOVE THAT!!!!!


message 30: by Kaylee (new)

Kaylee Garrett | 50 comments Mod
Also, Caspian sounds like Xaden and I love that


message 31: by Ashley (new)

Ashley | 102 comments Mod
Kaylee wrote: "OH MY GOSH. ASHLEY I LOVE THAT!!!!!"

TYSMMM! and yesss i was basing it off him and kai azer hehehe


message 32: by Ashley (new)

Ashley | 102 comments Mod
okay so i'm thinking that the way that Wynter got the hidden white streak in her hair is so the queen (or her mom) and then Wynter's younger sister (which i think im going to name Summer) were like on a walk in the gardens and that was the last time they were ever seen was in the gardens and the queen left a white rose next to the wishing well and when Wynter went out looking for them she touched the rose and it i guess maybe burned her and she liek quickly dropped it and then the white streak appeared but no one knew how or why. Wynter is going to be 10 when this happens and her little sister would of been 5


message 33: by Kaylee (new)

Kaylee Garrett | 50 comments Mod
YESSSS Ashley please do that, it’s sort of like an Anna Elsa moment but that is so cool! Maybe the dose could be cursed that’s why the mom is sick and the sister died?


message 34: by Ashley (new)

Ashley | 102 comments Mod
Kaylee wrote: "YESSSS Ashley please do that, it’s sort of like an Anna Elsa moment but that is so cool! Maybe the dose could be cursed that’s why the mom is sick and the sister died?"

yessss i love that!!!


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