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Ash {i need to lock in} wrote: "ouuu is it second chance romance"Do we give a second chance to cheaters?
NO WE DO NOT
Kaylee wrote: "I will definitely read that!"AWW OMG THANKS
ex name: Aryan Sharmammc name: Shreyansh Agarwal
fmc name: Alia Garg
fmc's bsf name: Prisha Chopra
Would you guys recommend giving the FMC's best friend a crush in the same book, and then make her fall in love in another book... maybe like an interconnected standalones type shit
fmc's last ex also cheated, so now she has trust issues
first 5-6 chapters: very rosie rosie7th chp: finds out he also cheated => breakup but nowhere to go
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Your ideas sound absolutely amazing 🫶🏻
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Do we give a second chance to cheaters?
NO WE DO NOT"
hehe you right i need to stop doing that irl
Kaylee wrote: "You should give her best friend a romance!!! Then you can also show off the first couples romance a little bit too! Your ideas sound absolutely amazing 🫶🏻"
So if I understand correctly, you want me to make an interconnected standalone and in the second book, I should give her best friend a partner and mention the first couple too. Correct?
Ash {i need to lock in} wrote: "Aayat wrote: "Ash {i need to lock in} wrote: "ouuu is it second chance romance"Do we give a second chance to cheaters?
NO WE DO NOT"
hehe you right i need to stop doing that irl"
“Irl”?? You gave an actual cheater a second chance even as a book girlie? I’m disappointed
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Do we give a second chance to cheaters?
NO WE DO NOT"
hehe you right i need to stop..."
srryyyy lollll i hate when others do it but whenever it comes to me i always js let it slide and give another chance...
Ash {i need to lock in} wrote: "Aayat wrote: "Ash {i need to lock in} wrote: "Aayat wrote: "Ash {i need to lock in} wrote: "ouuu is it second chance romance"Do we give a second chance to cheaters?
NO WE DO NOT"
hehe you right ..."
Grr 👺
what is the approximate number of words if I want my book to be around 300-400 pages long?
The couple is out on a date, and the fmc orders something healthy because she is going on a diet on account of her increasing weight. What do you think I should make the MMC say when he finds out?
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I know there are some guides on Pinterest (yes they actually help) but I think maybe 200,000+ words is standard?
Ohhh, maybe be like, don’t you want something a little more filling?? Because we don’t want him to be a jerk
when there ordering food make the mmc ask what she would recommend, he orders her recc and when the food arrives he could swap the plates(maybe) just an idea
Kaylee wrote: "Ex’s best friend sounds sooo good, like a whole he didn’t treat you good so now I will!!I know there are some guides on Pinterest (yes they actually help) but I think maybe 200,000+ words is stand..."
AND AND AND AND THE BEST FRIEND BREAKS HIS FRIENDSHIP AFTER HE FOUND OUT HOW SHITTY HE TREATED HER
CLOCK IT
Rylee wrote: "when there ordering food make the mmc ask what she would recommend, he orders her recc and when the food arrives he could swap the plates(maybe) just an idea"That's a good idea too, but is it something that will send the readers SWOOOOONING? like OMG THIS GUY IS THEEE STANDARD swooning
Is it cheating or copyright if I'm asking GPT to give me opinions and edit what I wrote?
no as long as you write It own words
Is it okay if I use em dashes and Oxford commas? They are often signs of Chat GPT but IT IS IS THE CORRECT ENGLISH. WHY SHOULD I HAVE TO REPLACE EM DASHES WITH COMMAS??
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Kaylee wrote: "I would think your fine, I mean who’s really going to be paying attention to chat GPT references when reading a book? Also I really don’t care about em dashes and have read books with them"really? That's such a relief!!
Kaylee wrote: "Is the writing flowing??"you bet it is ;p
My mom loved what I've written so far
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Kaylee wrote: "Aaaahhh that’s so exciting!!! How far are you??"3 chapters... I know it's bad.. but only now do I have the time to actually write.. I was also on a writer's block.. I also keep editing so much I can barely make progress
I let the water from the shower wash away my tears. I try to figure out exactly when our relationship began to end, what could have been the turning point? Did he lose interest in me or did he lose interest in me ? There are so many questions I want – no, need – the answers to. Suddenly, Sunday feels a month away. I can’t. I need to go on a mental health walk for a breather. Have I been breathing? I’m spiralling. I don’t know how long I’ve been in the shower but it sure helped mask my hurt. I walk down into the living room in a hoodie and a pair of shorts.
“I’m hungry. What’s for dinner?” he asks.
Is he playing dumb or does he really not realise how the way he has been treating me could make me feel?
I put my hands in the hoodie pockets and go out without dignifying him with a response.
Ugh, men.
Xaden Riorson would never.
GUYSGUYS
GUYS
GUYS
GUYS
Should I have her be kidnapped/missing when she's out for a walk??
Then the bf's bsf will be more worried about her than the actual bf!!
“You’re crazy. The romance novels you keep reading have sent you into a virtual and perfect world. Let me do the honours of bursting your bubble this time, men like that don’t exist in real life.” “Funny. The men in my books manage basic respect without needing a woman to explain it to them. That honestly seems like a very realistic standard to me. And you know what, and before you start another argument just to avoid admitting you're wrong, there is a lot that needs getting done before Ajaibhav gets here. So will you be a darling and make sure there are no dirty spots on any of the plates and cutlery? The table too.”
Aayat wrote: "“You’re crazy. The romance novels you keep reading have sent you into a virtual and perfect world. Let me do the honours of bursting your bubble this time, men like that don’t exist in real life.” ..."this jerk only gets one chapter of pov to himself
ew he doesn't even deserve one, I already rlly hate him!anyway it's so good, pls continue sharing with us!!!
La Ale wrote: "ew he doesn't even deserve one, I already rlly hate him!anyway it's so good, pls continue sharing with us!!!"
haha ikr
The FMC has given up on the relationship. She is about to break up with him and not give him a second chance.
Aayat Bansal wrote: "haha ikrThe FMC has given up on the relationship. She is about to break up with him and not give him a second chance."
oh okay thank goodness! he really sucks
and to use "wanna" and "gonna" I'd like to help you but English is not my first language, so I don't know..
This guys sounds like a jerk like a jerk that deserves to be throw in lava kind of jerk!
Sorry, I just randomly popped in her lol.
Rosie wrote: "Sorry, I just randomly popped in her lol."no worries, mate!
Happy to have you here
Rosie wrote: "This guys sounds like a jerk like a jerk that deserves to be throw in lava kind of jerk!"as I said, this jerk gets broken up with and doesn't even get a second chance.
Close enough? I only wrote one chapter in his pov
“You’re forgetting I had a job before you made me quit.” “You’re forgetting you had parents to back you up if you failed. We met long after they died. Who do you have now? Who do you think will support you if you fail? Give you a place to live while you struggle to find a job?”
Mentioning my parents’ death was a low blow and he knew that is what would hurt me the most.
Which is why he said it.
Not because he was scared of losing me.
Not because he loved me.
Because he wanted me to be scared.
Scared enough to stay.
Scared enough to believe that a miserable life with him was better than a happy life without him.
For years, that fear might have worked.
Today, it only made me tired.
“You know what’s funny?” I say quietly. “When you saw me about to leave you for good, instead of trying to make me stay, you tried to make me afraid to leave. I know I no longer have parents, but I still have friends that would love to hear I finally left you and support me on my parents’ behalf.”
For the first time, he doesn't have a response.
a little treat for you guys!!Told you he's getting broken up with ;)
Two love stories in one book..?