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message 1: by [deleted user] (new)

The name of my story right now is Vampire love I am going to change it here is a part to it...

In front of me was a man. He had a heavy-looking jacket on over his stained shirt and cut off jeans.
He had a baseball cap on so I couldn't see his face.
He smiled at me and placed a finger over mouth, He started walking slowly over to me saying "It will be a shame you will never meet my lord, he was so anxious to meet you".
"Wh--who are you?" I whispered.
He smiled and I saw something red on his mouth "My name is no concern to you".
He took a step closer to me and I took a step back,

"Come now" he crooned "Do you really want to make this hard for me".
I was at the edge of the hill before the creek so I couldn't move if I wanted to.
He took a step closer, I wanted to scream, there was something about him that made me scared.
"What do you want" I asked him.
He smiled again and said "Why you and your brother of course...I have already taken care of the rest of your family....your the last".
"Lilly and Elise" I whispered mortified "What did you do to them".
"Oh nothing that bad" He clapped his hands and said with sarcastic cheerfulness "It was easy, I knocked on the door and the oldest opened it, I knocked her out and sucked her blood nothing hard".
I looked at him when he said "Sucked her blood" my copy of Twilight popped into my head, "Yo--your a vampire" I squeaked frightenly the first thing that popped out of my mouth "I thought you were a myth".
"Well nobodys supposed to know but since your about to die I guess it doesn't really matter".
"Besides" he added casually "Even if you were to live nobody would believe you... well its been nice knowing you for two minutes".
He crouched and sprung!
Everything went in a blur, someone pushed me back and I tumbled into the creek, I heard some shots, a loud growling, then all was quiet.
I sat up and winced with pain, I looked at me arm, I had a long cut on it.
I tried to look up at the person who saved me, but my head started spinning and the last thing I remembered seeing was the man running torwards me and catching me before my head hit the rocks....................


message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

you can on my page


message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

do you have any


message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

*smiles* too bad


message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

alright gtg later


message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

what happens tell me


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

meany *scowl*
lol


message 8: by [deleted user] (new)

The story I like the most that I wrote is sleep and dream.


message 9: by [deleted user] (last edited Nov 23, 2009 02:34PM) (new)

Why thank-eth you-eth Jamie-eth.


message 10: by Reed, Fill-in (new)

Reed | 390 comments Mod
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...
heres a link to my writing. hope u like it


message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

Thats a long story


message 12: by Reed, Fill-in (new)

Reed | 390 comments Mod
lol yep long but worth reading my teacher said. u dont have to read it all at once or at all. just read bit by bit


message 13: by Dylan, Discussion Observer (new)

Dylan (greendragon06) | 178 comments Mod
If anyone wants some more exposure for their stories before they try to publish/turn in for classes/whatever, you can open an account on fictionpress.net


message 14: by Reed, Fill-in (new)

Reed | 390 comments Mod
thanks if i need to ill try it. is it free?


message 15: by Maura (new)

Maura I need to work on my story, but if I don't sit down and finish it fast, I get bored and never come back to it.


message 16: by Allison (new)

Allison | 48 comments Jeremy wrote: ""Mommy I'm scared..." Jeremy said.
The mother looked down. "Don't worry Honey, we're almost there."
Jeremy looked ahead of them. The street was empty and there were pools of red stuff on the floor...."


You are really good at writing. You should really consider some of your stuff to a publisher, or at the very least post it on nanowrimo.com


message 17: by Dylan, Discussion Observer (new)

Dylan (greendragon06) | 178 comments Mod
I'm very glad that at least some people on here know of nanowrimo!


message 18: by Reed, Fill-in (new)

Reed | 390 comments Mod
wooooo~t!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


message 19: by Allison (new)

Allison | 48 comments Dylan.kearney wrote: "I'm very glad that at least some people on here know of nanowrimo!"

yeah my brothers class had an assignment in which they had to write a 15,000+ word story. he was obssessed with it for a while.


message 20: by Reed, Fill-in (new)

Reed | 390 comments Mod
hehe i was to but i lost my mojo


message 21: by Allison (new)

Allison | 48 comments So did he. Now all he does is go onto goodreads


message 22: by Reed, Fill-in (new)

Reed | 390 comments Mod
yep, thats adam. and thats wat i do to but im trying t write without any success


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