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Here is where u post what you've written

I have one of mine on the my profile... well in my writing. It's not my best but it's all i've put on here so far.

...Okay...so I'm working on this song for my mom.

I pretty much got the lyrics down. Just tweaking the melody.

I'm gonna sing my song
It's written from the heart
So many good memories
I don't know where to start
How 'bout that time we laughed so hard that we started crying?
How 'bout that time I gave up and you told me "keep on trying"?
It took me forever to find a melody
But all that matters are the words
And how much you mean to me

I
I'll always remember
And I
I'll always cherish time with you
And when
You need my help
When that day comes
I will be there
I will be there
For you


I'm starting on the second verse
Whatever should I say?
Maybe when I strayed off the path
And you told me "Come this way"!
How about the time we went and spent some time together?
I hope you get the message I'll love you always and forever~
I'm a person with many flaws that is plain to see
But I know I'll become my best
With you there right beside me

I
I'll always remember
And I
I'll always cherish time with you
And when
You need my help
When that day comes
I will be there
I will be there
For you

Sometimes
When I need rainbows
In my life
I know you'll be there for me

Sometimes
When I feel alone
In my life

I know you'll be there for me.....

I
I'll always remember
And I
I'll always cherish time with you
And when
You need my help
When that day comes
I will be there
I will be there
For you

I
I'll always remember
And I
I'll always cherish time with you
And when
You need my help
When that day comes
I will be there
I will be there
I will be there
For you

Looooove it!

Thanks!

Wow that's good.
:)

that is so good