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message 1: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 11154 comments Off Course Literary Journal has published 3 of my poems and illustrated them with my own artwork. The art is rather old, but the poems are new.

https://offcourse.org/issue105/bavett...


message 2: by Lyn (new)

Lyn Dahlstrom | 1412 comments I love the artwork of the woman holding the girl.


message 3: by Ann D (new)

Ann D | 3926 comments Beautiful poems and artwork, Ruth. I especially like "Nightfall" and the image of the crane lifting the piano.

The following lines are really lovely:
"The moon, pale
as winter turned to stone,
remains alone and far away."


message 4: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 11154 comments Thanks, Ann.


message 5: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 11154 comments Lyn wrote: "I love the artwork of the woman holding the girl."

Thank you


message 6: by Gina (new)

Gina Whitlock (ginawhitlock) | 2352 comments I love your three poems and the artwork. You're multi-talented and I do enjoy your work.


message 7: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 11154 comments Thank you, Gina!


message 8: by Scout (new)

Scout (goodreadscomscout) | 883 comments The final lines of
"Nightfall" remind me of this poem:

A Man Said to the Universe

By Stephen Crane

A man said to the universe:
“Sir, I exist!”
“However,” replied the universe,
“The fact has not created in me
A sense of obligation.”


message 9: by Scout (new)

Scout (goodreadscomscout) | 883 comments I feel the truth in this simile from "In Slant Light":

The past persists
like a phantom limb.


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