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Ruth
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May 15, 2026 05:05PM
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Of the poems you've posted, Ruth, this is one of my favorites. I like how you cycled back to the beginning lines of the poem so the cycle (and the poem) begins anew. Beautifully done.
Love it! Though that American (Lifeguard's) Dream is becoming tougher and tougher to fulfill (he says after he and his wife made an emergency trip 2 hours south to watch the grandchild because her parents cannot afford daycare and they lost their sitter).






