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message 2: by Lynn (new)

Lynn | 2498 comments Congrats, Ruth. I like how you captured the cycle of life.


message 3: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 11172 comments Thanks, Lynn! That poem surprised me with how it just rolled out as I wrote it.


message 4: by Tamara (new)

Tamara Agha-Jaffar | 600 comments Of the poems you've posted, Ruth, this is one of my favorites. I like how you cycled back to the beginning lines of the poem so the cycle (and the poem) begins anew. Beautifully done.


message 5: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 11172 comments Thanks, Tamara. It kind of surprised me as I wrote it.


message 6: by Ann D (new)

Ann D | 3941 comments I love that poem, Ruth.


message 7: by Gina (new)

Gina Whitlock (ginawhitlock) | 2369 comments I really enjoyed it too.


message 8: by Lyn (new)

Lyn Dahlstrom | 1429 comments Beautiful!


message 9: by Ken (new)

Ken | 455 comments Love it! Though that American (Lifeguard's) Dream is becoming tougher and tougher to fulfill (he says after he and his wife made an emergency trip 2 hours south to watch the grandchild because her parents cannot afford daycare and they lost their sitter).


message 10: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 11172 comments Thanks everyone!


message 11: by Scout (new)

Scout (goodreadscomscout) | 886 comments Many years ago, the lifeguard's dreams had a chance of coming true.
Let's hope there's a time when that will be true again. For everyone.


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