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Dec 28, 2009 05:03PM
Just post your poetry here.
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http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...This is one of my earlier poems, so it's kind of embarrassing...
i love that! it really describes a best friend in a way that everyone can relate to.
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Ruby~am I a part of the cure?, Good things fall apart so better things can fall together <3
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Pet Peeves-
I hate it,
I despise it,
I need it to leave,
Please just get rid of it,
Oh please, oh please!
It makes me shudder,
it makes me cringe,
I want it to stop,
before I'm unhinged.
It irks me,
It bothers me,
I can stand it no more,
it's just gotta go,
Go straight out the door.
What is this horrid thing?
What could possibly be so bad?
You see it's my pet peeve,
It just makes me so mad.
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Ruby~am I a part of the cure?, Good things fall apart so better things can fall together <3
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Ruby~am I a part of the cure?, Good things fall apart so better things can fall together <3
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Your too kind
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We all have made it through, Everything thrown at us,
We all live.
This is a common experience,
Something we could use to come together,
But instead we use it to tear ourselves away,
From each other,
From our homes,
From our friends,
Our biggest gift,
Used in a way it was never intended.
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Really good! I love it! I know there's a topic for praising, but this is GREAT! :D
Sonna **FLUTES ROCK** wrote: "YEAH! My poetry really sucks...thank God I didn't post it on goodreads"You should SO post it!!! We could give you some suggestions and help you with it! Please?!
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Thanks. I like free-form, but i don't like rhyming, unless it's really good, and inspiring. Mostly because i can never think up of rhymes good enough.
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Ruby~am I a part of the cure?, Good things fall apart so better things can fall together <3
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You'll get it, I'm sure of it. :)
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The Lion Roams FREE!
With jaws of steel
and a heart of gold
its a loving creature
you might have been told
It Has a lot of power
truly guile
Always fearless
thats its lifestyle
Even if its
Icy stare burns
its part of nature
it has its concerns
At times of hunger
It is invincible
and then if you are near
you'd have to be careful
Its a lonely creature
as everyone is afraid
so it catches its feast
in a woodland glade
The king of beasts
you might agree
with its mighty kingship
The lion roams FREE!
(So i know it doesnt make much sense.... help?)
That's really good! In the 2nd stanza, maybe you could mess around a little with the last part. The rest makes perfect sense, though. Great job!!! :)
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Ruby~am I a part of the cure?, Good things fall apart so better things can fall together <3
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Thanksssss
Oh and how..?
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It Has a lot of power
truely guile
Always fearless
that's it's lifestyle.
I belive the word is beguile not just guile. I could be wrong but I wrote a poem last year with that word in it, so ya. Everything is good, just look out for syllable collaboration. Oh, and like I said in my writing poetry discussion, re-read your work! It's only as good as you think it is. Re-reading poetry helps so much!
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