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Jordan's Journey > The Final Act

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message 1: by [deleted user] (new)

This is kind of a stupid story, so just tell me whatever you think about it. And don't worry about hurting my feelings, I'm NOT a good writer. I'm posting the link in my next post.


message 3: by Sephiroth, I BEG TO DREAM AND DIFFER FROM THE HOLLOW LIES...ON HOLIDAY!! (new)

Sephiroth (Cinderbolt) | 388 comments Mod
yoiur so mean to yourself...


message 4: by Dapplenose (last edited Dec 29, 2009 12:20PM) (new)

Dapplenose | 252 comments nooooooo u used Leafclan! and fireclan!


message 5: by Dapplenose (new)

Dapplenose | 252 comments And the story is good, and your writing is nice.


message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

yea. It's good!


message 7: by Miinnniiiiie(:, The Always On Mod (new)

Miinnniiiiie(: | 145 comments Mod
Its really good so far!!!


message 8: by Miinnniiiiie(:, The Always On Mod (new)

Miinnniiiiie(: | 145 comments Mod
ITS GREAT!!!


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message 10: by Dapplenose (new)

Dapplenose | 252 comments nice!


message 11: by Miinnniiiiie(:, The Always On Mod (new)

Miinnniiiiie(: | 145 comments Mod
keep going! i love this! great plot!!!!


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