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message 1: by LaNaria (last edited Jan 08, 2010 07:20AM) (new)

LaNaria (laenae) Okay, I'll try 500 hundred words a week, one paragraph for each of the short stories I am writing.
A poem every three days (about 121 in a year), I'll try to date them.
A song every two months. I like that. Hope I can Live up to it...

+ Life resolutions
to stop throwing things
to stop sleeping in class (that might take awhile)
to stop wishing what could of been
and to not let my brother get to me


message 2: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 814 comments Great goals! Good luck :)


message 3: by Callie (new)

Callie (neverlandcallie) Awesome! Good luck!


message 4: by LaNaria (new)

LaNaria (laenae) Thanks, though I already made my weekly word count partly because of winter break. The poems and songs should be the most difficult. I don't have the best rhythm...


message 5: by LaNaria (last edited Jan 01, 2010 10:40PM) (new)

LaNaria (laenae) Just wrote a poem, that leaves the next two days free.


message 6: by Maggie (new)

Maggie Needham (prettydamnnaive) Good job! These are awesome goals -- I've never been one to write poetry, and I can only dream of writing music. Make sure to record some of your songs for us, I want to hear!


message 7: by Kyle (new)

Kyle T (kyletee) | 210 comments Good goal and good luck!


message 8: by LaNaria (new)

LaNaria (laenae) Been sort of sick working on a new voice. Havn't written any new anything right now. Just waiting I guess...


message 9: by Callie (new)

Callie (neverlandcallie) aaww I'm sorry! Get better soon!


message 10: by LaNaria (last edited Jan 04, 2010 09:39PM) (new)

LaNaria (laenae) This is meant to be the legend in my Novel, it works like a riddle... (Hoping for suggestions to make the concept darker and realer, I’m a pretty fluffy writer)

“Upon a day of blackened sun, an unjust war has begun.
To brush kin against kin, until the day this is to end.
As on that day a boy is born, to raise the moon and end our scorn.
He will be lifted by the sun to end the war kings have begun.
Come Midyear will bring the morn this Landless man-child will be born”

Simply said... there is an awful war between three nations. A boy will be born exactly in the middle of the year at sun set, between the morning and the night, to end this war. The boy will be "raised" or trained by the embodiment of the sun, the phoenix. He will "raise" an embodiment of the moon, a dragon. The Landless part is a race I’ve created. Entire races made criminals, and hunted down, forced to wander nomadically(gypsies were the 1st).

The whole plot of the Novel is to justify if the this boy will be a tyrant (like everyone expects) or if he will be the awaited savior of these war burdened lands (this is a thin hope).


message 11: by LaNaria (new)

LaNaria (laenae) So far I suck (at everything), Mcfly rocks, and I'm not a skater girl. Life is ruff.

Right now I'm trying to write some short stories while I meditate on my novel.
I started a fairy tale that's been rolling around in my head (sort of like the 12 princesses)
There's also my SiFi story about a boy raised by androdes (he didn't know)
Then there's my story on perspective, manly about Deaf culture (so is a culture)


message 12: by LaNaria (new)

LaNaria (laenae) Yeah I'm pretty out there...


message 13: by Angie (new)

Angie (askangie) Interesting plot, LaNaria. Sought you out to leave a message in your "Cubby." (A.M.'s Creation Cubby)


message 14: by LaNaria (last edited Jan 08, 2010 11:58PM) (new)

LaNaria (laenae) I have my weekly word count (601 in one story and still not done). I just needed to consentrate and think from a different angle.


message 15: by LaNaria (new)

LaNaria (laenae) 2 Poems... an Untitled and Child's Pride. I wrote both today the Untitled was for my blog the second, Child's Pride was just to ease my hurt.


message 16: by LaNaria (new)

LaNaria (laenae) Quite my blog. Met my word count for the past week. Still working on my voice.


message 17: by LaNaria (new)

LaNaria (laenae) Quite my blog. Met my word count for the past week. Still working on my voice.


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