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message 1: by Kate , SURPRISE!!! (new)

Kate  | 537 comments Mod
I wrote this poem in secind grade when I was eight! Yes, it is kinda silly but I like it. I actually was published in the 2005 Young American Poets book. Here it is!

Fun In The Sun-
When you go to the beach
you take out a peach
and step into the hot, hot sand.
You feel like you want to have fun
an easy way to do it is to
run, run, run.
You go to the water
and dive in as much as you can.
When it's time to go home
you pack up your peaches
and leave all the beaches.



message 2: by Ayunda (new)

Ayunda (ayundabs) aw, cute!! I'm not really a poem writer..


message 3: by Kate , SURPRISE!!! (new)

Kate  | 537 comments Mod
haha, that's ok. glad you liked it!


message 4: by Ruby~am I a part of the cure?, Good things fall apart so better things can fall together <3 (new)

Ruby~am I a part of the cure? (openupyoureyes) | 912 comments Mod
Awwww it makes me smile!


message 5: by Kate , SURPRISE!!! (last edited Jan 17, 2010 10:00AM) (new)

Kate  | 537 comments Mod
aww shucks you people are too nice...


message 6: by Ruby~am I a part of the cure?, Good things fall apart so better things can fall together <3 (new)

Ruby~am I a part of the cure? (openupyoureyes) | 912 comments Mod
LOL :)
thats what we're for i guess....!!


message 7: by Kate , SURPRISE!!! (new)

Kate  | 537 comments Mod
haha yeppers!


message 8: by Ruby~am I a part of the cure?, Good things fall apart so better things can fall together <3 (new)

Ruby~am I a part of the cure? (openupyoureyes) | 912 comments Mod
:DD


message 9: by Kate , SURPRISE!!! (new)

Kate  | 537 comments Mod
hehe, it looks like your smilee has a double chin, haha.


message 10: by Ruby~am I a part of the cure?, Good things fall apart so better things can fall together <3 (new)

Ruby~am I a part of the cure? (openupyoureyes) | 912 comments Mod
Hahaa lmao!!!
U crack me up!
:P


message 11: by Kate , SURPRISE!!! (new)

Kate  | 537 comments Mod
thx, it's my hobby. no seriously it is! oohh, wait I'm thinking of something else. haha, wanna be buddies?


message 12: by Ruby~am I a part of the cure?, Good things fall apart so better things can fall together <3 (new)

Ruby~am I a part of the cure? (openupyoureyes) | 912 comments Mod
Oh sure :)
Lol its not my hobby but i alway tend to crack my mates up!


message 13: by Kate , SURPRISE!!! (new)

Kate  | 537 comments Mod
mates? haha! you Austrailian?


message 14: by Kate , SURPRISE!!! (new)

Kate  | 537 comments Mod
he he he.


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