Good VS Evil RP discussion

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Dawn sat in what used to be her room, she heard noises from down stairs and went down to see the man she now had to live with slapping himself and holding a knife. "what the hell?" she thought

((ok, i died here before you, your family moved in and you died but i still dont know about you. kk?))

((just meet when you want to.))

Dawn stared at this man and thought.

"oh please...i dont live at all." she said with a smirk

"im not intrested in Alex...try me...i dare you, you just might find yourself changed."

Jenny stared out the attic window and a tear fell down her cheek. The boy down there looks just like Harrison, she thought to herself. she got up from her position on the floor and went to the door of the attic, she opened it and walked down the stairs.

Mira slid down the banister and stared at Max while he listened to his ipod and sat on the couch.
she went and sat down nextto him,but hewould never see her.she ceresed his cheek.he flinched but he didnt know it was her.she stared into his big brown eyes and a tear went down her cheek.

she got up and left,blowing him a kiss as she wiped her tear away.
she went ou the door and took a walk, aa walk through the neighboorhood homes and stumbled upon to ghosts arguing or something.her eyes grew big as she stared at a ghost around her age, and a ghost around 10.

Dawn sighed and left.

"Who are you??? I thought I was the only ghost in town."

Dawn turned to see the two, she hid and watched.

"well, answer me...who's are you?why are you hiding...i CAN see you." she said, turning toward Dawn.

perfect looked at them in her long old nightgown her big bright blue eyes examining them she looked so small and helpless compared to the older people,or at least she thought they were people

((Well, this died a while ago. Anyone interested in starting over? I gotta good beginning story...))