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Jan 22, 2010 09:48PM
Hey guyz! If you have any "writings" on Goodreads, post the link so we can read them!!
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I have a lot of stories. Just be warned, they're all love stories or have romantic elements in them. If you don't like romance, I'm probably not your type of writer. Haha. I'll post the links to individual stories so you can decide which one you want to read.
Vigil
I'm only on chapter two, counting the prologue, but I'll be making a lot of progress on this soon. It will be a shorter novel, and it's from the perspective of Fate. I don't believe in Fate, actually, but I thought it would be a neat storyline. Essentially, Fate falls in love with a human girl and everything just goes in a downward spiral from there. Contains sarcasm and whining!
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...
Sons of the Morning
Funny story: I got the title from a name for Satan in Isaiah. Hehe. That makes my story sound questionable... but it's not. =D This is a fantasy I'm working on. I'm trying to fix up the beginning so it makes more sense, but... yeah. I'm getting to the more interesting part now, and I'm on chapter four counting the prologue. This is different from my usual style of writing, but in a good way. The perspective alternates between two characters and is in third person (like Fablehaven). The plot is hard to explain, so...
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...
I'm also going to be starting a new story soon, but I need to figure out some serious plot holes before I begin writing. The other stuff on my writing page is random and probably wouldn't interest you.
There. Enough from me for now.
Vigil
I'm only on chapter two, counting the prologue, but I'll be making a lot of progress on this soon. It will be a shorter novel, and it's from the perspective of Fate. I don't believe in Fate, actually, but I thought it would be a neat storyline. Essentially, Fate falls in love with a human girl and everything just goes in a downward spiral from there. Contains sarcasm and whining!
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...
Sons of the Morning
Funny story: I got the title from a name for Satan in Isaiah. Hehe. That makes my story sound questionable... but it's not. =D This is a fantasy I'm working on. I'm trying to fix up the beginning so it makes more sense, but... yeah. I'm getting to the more interesting part now, and I'm on chapter four counting the prologue. This is different from my usual style of writing, but in a good way. The perspective alternates between two characters and is in third person (like Fablehaven). The plot is hard to explain, so...
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...
I'm also going to be starting a new story soon, but I need to figure out some serious plot holes before I begin writing. The other stuff on my writing page is random and probably wouldn't interest you.
There. Enough from me for now.
Ok. Here is Chapter two AND THREE. I don't know how far ill get into this book, but it is worth a try................
It doesnt make much sense, but I will fix that cuz i have the next chapter coming sooooooonnnnnn.......
p.s. Her name is Koari (sounds like Cory i guess) hahah i was desprate for a name so i looked it up on a baby name website. :)
It doesnt make much sense, but I will fix that cuz i have the next chapter coming sooooooonnnnnn.......
p.s. Her name is Koari (sounds like Cory i guess) hahah i was desprate for a name so i looked it up on a baby name website. :)
Wow, cool stories everyone! Hmm, maybe I will post some stuff.A few of my poems: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...
My fanfiction, based off the Warriors series and written at a friend's request: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...
And a random weird sarcastic horror story I wrote: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...
If I post some writing, do you guys promise to read it and tell me what you think?
I promise! I usually keep up-to-date on your writing, but still.
*stage-whispers* Cassie's writing is amazing, and so is Mitchell. And Shay. And pretty much all her characters.
*stage-whispers* Cassie's writing is amazing, and so is Mitchell. And Shay. And pretty much all her characters.
Except Tony. He's a jerk. And a sociopath.
Yeah. And Tamra is a... bad word.
Oh, and Harry is an abusive drunk.
Broken Heart and Stab Woundshttp://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
I've decided to just add short stories together into a "Heartbreak Warfare" short story 'book' type thing. I'm too organized to put them all in separate story files now, I guess, haha.
Please read and review!
Drowninghttp://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
Another chapter/short story of my little Heartbreak Warfare story. Please rate and/or review! Thanks!
FallThe next chapter in the Heartbreak Warfare short story book thing.
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
Joshua Chamberlain:http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
I wrote this 2 semesters ago for a Civil War class I took, (aka Sword of Freemdom).
i dont know how to post those things that you can just click on to get there but i just barely posted a poem about my 2 year old puppy that died last year
Kasidee wrote, " dont know how to post those things that you can just click...".You just go on the page and copy and paste the web address.
This is a short rant I wrote. I had a lot of fun with it, and it needed to be said. Those of you who are high-schoolers will understand it more. Anyway, I give you... THE MUCH-NEEDED RANT AGAINST SAGGING!
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
Read above writing. It is epic.
Why thank you, Cassie! Ehehehe.
I wrote the majority of this past one in the morning, so I have no idea if it's any good. This is the prologue for Sheltered:
Sheltered
Sheltered
Hello everyone. I would love it if some of you could read this and help me! I need it!
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...
Hey everyone, check out a paper I wrote for a US History class I took a year ago.http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
Please comment.
This is my paper that I wrote for the same Class Kayti took except I did Dolley Madison not Abigail Adams. Kayti's is WAY better though! :)
Oh woops, I forgot to put the link up HAHA! http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
I do that a lot!
That is totally not true! You did a great job on your Hero Report! I think your paper is great!If you wrote about if we wrote about the smae person you could judge. But, I am sure your paper would probably be the best.
But, Thanks anyway.
Mt sister Caylpso has a teen writing group if you guys like to write.
Through the Crackshttp://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
There's a new chapter that I added to my Heartbreak Warfare collection of short stories! Please like and/or comment. Thanks!
I just finished a rant against Facebook norms. I'm not quite sure what to title it yet, but I would greatly appreciate it if you'd read it and review!
SARCASM AND DARK HUMOR FOUND AT THIS LOCATION
SARCASM AND DARK HUMOR FOUND AT THIS LOCATION
Maxy wrote: "I just finished a rant against Facebook norms. I'm not quite sure what to title it yet, but I would greatly appreciate it if you'd read it and review!
SARCASM AND DARK HUMOR FOUND AT THIS LOCATION"
*snorting uncontrollably with laughter*
SARCASM AND DARK HUMOR FOUND AT THIS LOCATION"
*snorting uncontrollably with laughter*
I wrote this short thing for the Musical Emotion Exercise on WWAC. It's based on the song "Morning Lights", by Jon Schmidt. I think I like it, but please give some criticism!
Sadfulness found at this location
Sadfulness found at this location
Maxy wrote: "I wrote this short thing for the Musical Emotion Exercise on WWAC. It's based on the song "Morning Lights", by Jon Schmidt. I think I like it, but please give some criticism!
Sadfulness found at..."
Stop making me sad.
Sadfulness found at..."
Stop making me sad.
Letters to HimLetter #1 - http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
That's the new book I'm writing :) Letters to Him! It's pretty much non-fiction... But I'll probably add in some stuff that didn't really happen, just to make it more interesting. Trust me, the letters won't be too long unless they're important. I hope it isn't boring!
Please rate and review! :)
Hey, I actually wrote something! This is from the Musical Emotion Exercise. It's a little freaky and clichéd, but you should read it anyway.
Lost
Lost
Kasidee wrote: "im starting a book about a dream i had last night =)"heres the link
http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/3...
Kasidee wrote: "i dont know how to post those things that you can just click on to get there but i just barely posted a poem about my 2 year old puppy that died last year"http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
I just wrote a poem. It's taking the emotion I felt earlier to a darker, more dramatic level. Read it please. Thank you.
Blind
Blind
Hey! You! Maxy wrote something! You should read it!
This is my first try at a piece in second person. It doesn't really have a title yet. Please read and review. *smiles*
Ocean Writing
This is my first try at a piece in second person. It doesn't really have a title yet. Please read and review. *smiles*
Ocean Writing
This was my entry for this week's short story contest in WWAC. The prompt was "A Rose", so that's the title unless I come up with something better. I would love your feedback, and I would love you even more if you gave me feedback. So read!
A Rose
...
Hey, are you still reading this?
Bad! *slaps* Now go to the above link and read that instead!
A Rose
...
Hey, are you still reading this?
Bad! *slaps* Now go to the above link and read that instead!
Are you reading my comment? Go to the link, you silly! *slap*
Falling Leaveshttp://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
There's a new chapter in my Heartbreak Warfare short story collection. Please rate and/or review!


