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message 1: by [deleted user] (last edited Jan 23, 2010 10:12PM) (new)

Hey guyz! If you have any "writings" on Goodreads, post the link so we can read them!!


message 2: by [deleted user] (last edited May 04, 2010 02:21PM) (new)

I have a lot of stories. Just be warned, they're all love stories or have romantic elements in them. If you don't like romance, I'm probably not your type of writer. Haha. I'll post the links to individual stories so you can decide which one you want to read.

Vigil
I'm only on chapter two, counting the prologue, but I'll be making a lot of progress on this soon. It will be a shorter novel, and it's from the perspective of Fate. I don't believe in Fate, actually, but I thought it would be a neat storyline. Essentially, Fate falls in love with a human girl and everything just goes in a downward spiral from there. Contains sarcasm and whining!
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...

Sons of the Morning
Funny story: I got the title from a name for Satan in Isaiah. Hehe. That makes my story sound questionable... but it's not. =D This is a fantasy I'm working on. I'm trying to fix up the beginning so it makes more sense, but... yeah. I'm getting to the more interesting part now, and I'm on chapter four counting the prologue. This is different from my usual style of writing, but in a good way. The perspective alternates between two characters and is in third person (like Fablehaven). The plot is hard to explain, so...
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

I'm also going to be starting a new story soon, but I need to figure out some serious plot holes before I begin writing. The other stuff on my writing page is random and probably wouldn't interest you.

There. Enough from me for now.


message 3: by [deleted user] (last edited Jan 23, 2010 11:27PM) (new)

Ok. Here is Chapter two AND THREE. I don't know how far ill get into this book, but it is worth a try................

It doesnt make much sense, but I will fix that cuz i have the next chapter coming sooooooonnnnnn.......

p.s. Her name is Koari (sounds like Cory i guess) hahah i was desprate for a name so i looked it up on a baby name website. :)


message 4: by ~♥Alyssa♥~ (new)

~♥Alyssa♥~ (lyssie123) | 234 comments Wow, cool stories everyone! Hmm, maybe I will post some stuff.

A few of my poems: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

My fanfiction, based off the Warriors series and written at a friend's request: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...

And a random weird sarcastic horror story I wrote: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...


message 5: by Jayda (new)

Jayda Heartbreak Warfare
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Just a quick short story I came up with.


message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

If I post some writing, do you guys promise to read it and tell me what you think?


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

I promise! I usually keep up-to-date on your writing, but still.

*stage-whispers* Cassie's writing is amazing, and so is Mitchell. And Shay. And pretty much all her characters.


message 8: by [deleted user] (new)

Except Tony. He's a jerk. And a sociopath.


message 9: by [deleted user] (new)

Yeah. And Tamra is a... bad word.


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

Yes. Andrew is just stupid.


message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

Oh, and Harry is an abusive drunk.


message 12: by Jayda (new)

Jayda Broken Heart and Stab Wounds
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

I've decided to just add short stories together into a "Heartbreak Warfare" short story 'book' type thing. I'm too organized to put them all in separate story files now, I guess, haha.

Please read and review!


message 13: by Jayda (new)

Jayda Drowning
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Another chapter/short story of my little Heartbreak Warfare story. Please rate and/or review! Thanks!


message 14: by Jayda (new)

Jayda Fall
The next chapter in the Heartbreak Warfare short story book thing.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


message 15: by Kayti (new)

Kayti (kaytigrace22) Joshua Chamberlain:

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

I wrote this 2 semesters ago for a Civil War class I took, (aka Sword of Freemdom).


message 16: by Kasidee (new)

Kasidee | 180 comments i dont know how to post those things that you can just click on to get there but i just barely posted a poem about my 2 year old puppy that died last year


message 17: by Kayti (new)

Kayti (kaytigrace22) Kasidee wrote, " dont know how to post those things that you can just click...".

You just go on the page and copy and paste the web address.


message 18: by [deleted user] (new)

This is a short rant I wrote. I had a lot of fun with it, and it needed to be said. Those of you who are high-schoolers will understand it more. Anyway, I give you... THE MUCH-NEEDED RANT AGAINST SAGGING!

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


message 19: by [deleted user] (new)

Read above writing. It is epic.


message 20: by [deleted user] (new)

Why thank you, Cassie! Ehehehe.


message 21: by [deleted user] (new)

You is welcome.


message 22: by [deleted user] (new)

I wrote the majority of this past one in the morning, so I have no idea if it's any good. This is the prologue for Sheltered:

Sheltered


message 23: by [deleted user] (new)

Hello everyone. I would love it if some of you could read this and help me! I need it!

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...


message 24: by Kayti (new)

Kayti (kaytigrace22) Hey everyone, check out a paper I wrote for a US History class I took a year ago.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Please comment.


message 25: by Olivia (new)

Olivia | 39 comments This is my paper that I wrote for the same Class Kayti took except I did Dolley Madison not Abigail Adams. Kayti's is WAY better though! :)


message 26: by Olivia (new)

Olivia | 39 comments Oh woops, I forgot to put the link up HAHA!

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

I do that a lot!


message 27: by Kayti (last edited Jul 03, 2010 11:51AM) (new)

Kayti (kaytigrace22) That is totally not true! You did a great job on your Hero Report! I think your paper is great!

If you wrote about if we wrote about the smae person you could judge. But, I am sure your paper would probably be the best.

But, Thanks anyway.


message 28: by [deleted user] (new)

Mt sister Caylpso has a teen writing group if you guys like to write.


message 29: by Jayda (new)

Jayda Through the Cracks
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

There's a new chapter that I added to my Heartbreak Warfare collection of short stories! Please like and/or comment. Thanks!


message 30: by [deleted user] (new)

I just finished a rant against Facebook norms. I'm not quite sure what to title it yet, but I would greatly appreciate it if you'd read it and review!

SARCASM AND DARK HUMOR FOUND AT THIS LOCATION


message 31: by [deleted user] (new)

Maxy wrote: "I just finished a rant against Facebook norms. I'm not quite sure what to title it yet, but I would greatly appreciate it if you'd read it and review!

SARCASM AND DARK HUMOR FOUND AT THIS LOCATION"


*snorting uncontrollably with laughter*


message 32: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 10, 2010 03:51PM) (new)

This story is pretty awesomesauce, even if I do say so myself.

The Black Diamond


message 33: by [deleted user] (new)

I wrote this short thing for the Musical Emotion Exercise on WWAC. It's based on the song "Morning Lights", by Jon Schmidt. I think I like it, but please give some criticism!

Sadfulness found at this location


message 34: by [deleted user] (new)

Maxy wrote: "I wrote this short thing for the Musical Emotion Exercise on WWAC. It's based on the song "Morning Lights", by Jon Schmidt. I think I like it, but please give some criticism!

Sadfulness found at..."


Stop making me sad.


message 35: by Jayda (new)

Jayda Letters to Him
Letter #1 - http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

That's the new book I'm writing :) Letters to Him! It's pretty much non-fiction... But I'll probably add in some stuff that didn't really happen, just to make it more interesting. Trust me, the letters won't be too long unless they're important. I hope it isn't boring!

Please rate and review! :)


message 36: by Jayda (new)

Jayda Letters to Him, letter #2
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Please rate and review! :)


message 37: by Jayda (new)

Jayda Letters to Him, letter #3
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Please rate and review!


message 38: by [deleted user] (new)

Hey, I actually wrote something! This is from the Musical Emotion Exercise. It's a little freaky and clichéd, but you should read it anyway.

Lost


message 39: by Kasidee (new)

Kasidee | 180 comments im starting a book about a dream i had last night =)


message 40: by Kasidee (last edited Sep 06, 2010 12:13PM) (new)

Kasidee | 180 comments Kasidee wrote: "im starting a book about a dream i had last night =)"

heres the link
http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/3...


message 41: by Kasidee (new)

Kasidee | 180 comments Kasidee wrote: "i dont know how to post those things that you can just click on to get there but i just barely posted a poem about my 2 year old puppy that died last year"

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


message 42: by Kasidee (new)


message 43: by Jayda (new)

Jayda Letters to Him, letter #4
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Please rate and/or review!


message 44: by [deleted user] (new)

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Poem inspired by Tegan & Sara's "The Con".


message 45: by [deleted user] (new)

I just wrote a poem. It's taking the emotion I felt earlier to a darker, more dramatic level. Read it please. Thank you.

Blind


message 46: by [deleted user] (new)

Hey! You! Maxy wrote something! You should read it!

This is my first try at a piece in second person. It doesn't really have a title yet. Please read and review. *smiles*

Ocean Writing


message 47: by [deleted user] (new)

Yes, read it, it's spiffy.


message 48: by [deleted user] (new)

This was my entry for this week's short story contest in WWAC. The prompt was "A Rose", so that's the title unless I come up with something better. I would love your feedback, and I would love you even more if you gave me feedback. So read!

A Rose

...

Hey, are you still reading this?

Bad! *slaps* Now go to the above link and read that instead!


message 49: by [deleted user] (new)

Are you reading my comment? Go to the link, you silly! *slap*


message 50: by Jayda (new)

Jayda Falling Leaves
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

There's a new chapter in my Heartbreak Warfare short story collection. Please rate and/or review!


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