Vampire Lovers☻ discussion

NO OFF TOPIC!!!
come here to say that you have writen something and would like people to read it! and also when you have update your piece and would like an opinion!

so far on my page I have ch 1, 2 and later 2night ch 3 and the prologue of Witch Wars ;)

Umm I have a prologue on my page called 'Sleepless Beauty' I'll post the 2nd chapter when you guys check it out if you want more lol

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...

lmfao, k

lol at least u have a chapter i have an incomplete chapter! I've just fixed it up a bit lol i need to go study for now though lol

Okay I have a couple of pieces up on my page. Um warning, they are just drafts and beginnings but any input would be greatly appreciated if u have the time to check them out :)

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/6...

I think I've read all of your stories before, lol so they're all awesome! you guys should carry on! I like reading other peoples work and their writing stylez ;)

♥☆♥☆_Tiny_☆♥☆♥ wrote: "I think I've read all of your stories before, lol so they're all awesome! you guys should carry on! I like reading other peoples work and their writing stylez ;)"

no i put a new piece up last night lol

ohhhh yay! kay I'll read that then lol

lol dont be afraid to say it sucks if it does lmao

lmao...i wont haha! nah lol

please read my things... Just go to my profile, then my writing....please.

oh yeah thats right Mari, I was like half way through your story lol I didn't finish it...paper cut right? I'll finish it and comment lmao

yup. +;) There's more of it on www.wickedlovely.com/forum1

i'll read urs too just waiting for my damn glasses lol

...sad smile

lol i can enjoy reading it, if i read it now i'll skim read lol the comp make me quint

ah...I feel strangely drained of energy

I WANT MY GLASSES

and once again vi is starting to go off topic!!

LMAO o sorry

I just posted the first two chapters of my novel on my profile and I'd love some feedback. Anything you don't like or think doesn't make sense. Please point it out. YOu won't hurt my feelings at all.

i don't have a tittle yet for my sribbles but read it anyway. it's not the best...
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Charmed Wolf vampire hunter wrote: "i don't have a tittle yet for my sribbles but read it anyway. it's not the best...
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2..."

Hey Charmed,

I checked out your writing. And first thing I have to say is: DON"T PUT YOURSELF DOWN. LOL, never tell someone "it's not the best"

Your writing is actually quite good and you have some very creative ideas that work well together. Your very good with descriptions and the way you started your story was great. Sometimes when I read the beginning of a story I get a little annoyed at the chunk of writing dedicated to the story's background, yet nothing much is happening. I like how you dove straight into an action/suspenseful scene with the main character.

So yeah, all in all you should keep going with your story, it seems to be heading in a great direction. Just be careful of over describing things =D

Well, as personal writing goes, I have written two blog entries in my co-author's and my blog about our cats Ophelia and Lucius (who have had cameos in our professional writing), and I should be writing another story on that blog about our cat Clyde, who will show up in a subsequent novel.

This blog entry is about Lucius, and this one is about Ophelia. The blog, called Morrigan's Blog in reference to the series title Morrigan's Brood, also has information about our writing, events, and whatnot.

Cheers!

Christopher

☆♥Starzee♥☆ wrote: "Charmed Wolf vampire hunter wrote: "i don't have a tittle yet for my sribbles but read it anyway. it's not the best...
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2..."

Hey Char..."

haha thanks

I've been stuck on writing hiku (however you spell it) on sailing for the past two days :) haha

Oh those japanese poems? With the 5 syllable, 7 syllable, 5 syllable?

Yup haha they are boggling my mind :) I've never liked them, and then suddenly I'm writing them everywhere :)

I love you but I only see you at night i can feel kisses and your embrace so tight . All my friends and family thinks im going crazy . They say its all a DREAM thats the only reason i see you at night . If it is a dream i wish not to be waken from it fore when I am with i feel so alive someone new . I never knew it was possible to feel this way.But they will never understand the love i have for you its ok if they meet you cause they never met me the real me. I know what you are and you know I know but neither of us say a word ... I rather be as we are now then as never......

Wow that really is something :)

good or bad something lol

Hello everyone,
I am Amanda J. Greene, author of Caressed by Moonlight.
I have received a ton of emails from people asking when I will be hosting another giveaway. Therefore, I've decided to post my book, Caressed by Moonlight, for free again on my site. Use the link below to be redirected to the Reader's Realm page of my author website.
Caressed by Moonlight will be available for free download until May 26th.

http://www.amandajgreene.com/apps/docume...

Description:

Dorian Vlakhos is no ordinary aristocrat. He is a vampire king, who will do anything to save his clan from complete annihilation, before an ancient curse can claim his immortal life.

Penniless and orphaned, Victoria Kingston has nothing to bring to a marriage, yet she must shackle an unsuspecting gentleman into marriage by the end of the month or forfeit her rights as guardian of her younger sister. With the help of her dearest friend, Victoria begins her hunt, and vows to stay far away from the dark, mysterious, Prince Vlakhos.

After meeting the beautifully innocent Miss Kingston, Dorian had to have her.He would do absolutely anything to make Victoria his. One sweet stolen kiss would bring them together while a force, more powerful than any vampire would bind them for all eternity. But treachery, war, and death rule Dorian’s dark world and Victoria would be fortunate to survive.

Thank you and happy reading,
Amanda J. Greene

Hey guys, um I just put up a story I started working on a few weeks ago, not entirely sure if I like it or not, and I'm kinda stuck as to where to go next with it. You can find it here: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Any feedback would be appreciated :)
Thanks guys :)

The prologue was a good start I would read this book I really mean it...You should finish writing this story and have it published...I could really feel her heart pounding while trying to escape her Ex-boyfriend the vampire...This is the kind of story I like to read...Something that will make me feel like I was the one being chased...

My first novel about love, vampires and Jack the Ripper is now up on Amazon. For this week the kindle version of it is on sale for $0.99. I would love you all to take a look at it and post some feedback :) Here is the link to where you can get it http://www.amazon.com/dp/1475296975

I made my publishing debut with Vamplit Publishing a few years ago with a gritty little novella called Swan Song.

I'm really proud of it. It's self contained, passionate, emotional and goes out of its way to be different.

I'd love to know people's thoughts, especially awesome vampire lovers like your good selves!

If you are interested in reviewing either or both of these, message me for a FREE review copy. The Blood of Cowards is currently FREE in the Kindle store (July 7th & 8th).

Ghost Drums is short story about a vampire, Lazarus Kalon, intent upon stealing the power of a shape shifter, a shaman of the Kwakiutl people. Yet, there is another supernatural being, one that haunts the Kwakiutl and who has become very aware of Lazarus presence. The story seamlessly blends traditional vampire lore with native mythology.
http://www.amazon.com/Ghost-Drums-ebo...

The Blood of Cowards is a short story about the vampire, Lazarus Kalon, who, on his way back to Atlanta to liberate his treasure before the city falls to Sherman's army, encounters three rebel deserters in the Appalachians. One of which, may be worthy of the immortal gift.
http://www.amazon.com/The-Blood-of-Co...