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Mar 12, 2010 01:53AM
I like it! Though it seems a bit stereo-typical? Maybe if the main character is really something to remember? Mind you, i havent read it yet, but i will...
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I think its really awesome! I love Raine, love your prologue.My story: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/6... The Wind and the Water, one of my most popular ones…
vote skulduggery in the poll:) and ill happy dance and ill put in a good word with santa this year for you i know him i swear(laughs secretly, evil plan is working)
before you ask: no its not me secretly asking for help because "why am i still here" doesnt refer to "why am i still in the world" its "why am i still part of this group of people"why am i still here
written by yours truly
work, work, work.
the calls of my job come harsh and cruel.
but i work, work, work.
drown out the hurtful words i hear.
alas, i have finished now.
but what i have done is not good enough.
and before i can even blink.
my job has been stripped of me.
and given away by authority.
is it because im not good enough?
someone else, always better?
my hard work ignored.
but i dont give up.
i try to help.
but all that comes from this is.
ridicule, criticism, back stabbing.
as if i have intruded…
on something i myself created?
it makes me question.
why i am even a part of this world?
i am not needed.
and i certainly dont need this.
so why do i bother?
why am i still here…
Hi ppl this is a link to some of the stuff i have written:http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/3...
hope u read and enjoy it
;)
:)
I read chapter one of "Love and Self Love"by hannah
it is, to be honest great
although i only read the first chapter it shows that u have a great talent!!
keep on writing! :)
finally someone like me:)
:)
wat do they do in Easter either then looking for eggs and decorating them?
is there anything else?
Well I think that we can both sayThat I messed up pretty bad yesterday
I’m not sure what happened there
But I’ve been crying everywhere
And I’m sorry for what I’ve done...
Please don’t break my heart and leave me here
I’ll be picking up the pieces if I can see them through my tears
Please don’t walk away from me now
Before I get the chance to tell you how I feel
Before I get the chance to tell you that I love you
I had this awful dream last night
Woke up and I couldn’t stop crying
And I really hope my nightmare isn’t coming true
‘Cause without you I don’t know what I’ll do
And I’m sorry for what I’ve done...
Please don’t break my heart and leave me here
I’ll be picking up the pieces if I can see them through my tears
Please don’t walk away from me now
Before I get the chance to tell you how I feel
Before I get the chance to tell you that I love you
Soon I’ve gotta talk to you
Even though I don’t know what to say
And no matter what I try to do
I don’t know how to make this okay
Please don’t break my heart and leave me here
I would try to pick up all the pieces
But I can’t see them through my tears
Please stop walking away from me now
Before I got the chance to tell you how I feel
Before I got the chance to tell you that I love you
Well I think that we can both say
That I messed up pretty bad yesterday
Joel wrote: "http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2..."I read the description where it says "A bloody end," and I'm afraid of blood so... :(
Im trying to figure out what to write i started writing something but hated where it was going!
anyone have any ideas of what the main theme could be about??
anyone have any ideas of what the main theme could be about??
Ummm... I Love Fantasy Type Stuff Like Vampires, Ghosts, Angels etc. But Also Mystery Type Stuff That Gets You Thinking... I Just Cant Figure Out A Storyline..
AWESOME!! I Totally Just Had An Idea!! Thankyou!! :D
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5... and in return, can you read MY story? Just asking, you don't have to if you don't want to XD
Im almost finished my first chapter so when im done would you review it aswell?
It's Quite Short Its More Of An Introduction Than A Chapter
Regan ♥ wrote: "Meagan. With an A. wrote: "Well I think that we can both sayThat I messed up pretty bad yesterday
I’m not sure what happened there
But I’ve been crying everywhere
And I’m sorry for what I’ve done...."
Thank you :)) I'm mainly into poetry 'cause I can never focus enough to finish a story =___=





