Vampire Academy Lovers discussion

o.O!!

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
omg- one vote!!!!
yikes, thats close o.O
thanks for the nice comp. horrorchick :D

i came in third =) CONGRATS DAYNA

Dimitrilover/TeamDimka/Mrs.Belikov wrote: "i came in third =) CONGRATS DAYNA"

THANKS!!!! XD and thirds awesome to!!! :D

totally!!!

HorrorChick wrote: "Congrats DAYNA! Loved your writing. PLZ WRITE MORE!"

ahahaha- but about what?
... hmmmm... maybe he didn't kill her...
maybe.... ;)

ahaha- i have no idea :P
i'm working on blood of angels at the mom. maybe i try later... :S

ahaha- totally!!!!
... when i actual finish a decent story though :P
lol.
i really like blood of angels but once i finish it i'll have to reformat it all because at the moment i have it paragraph by paragraph for 'goodreads' so i'll have to redo the links etc.
:D

but yeah- i'll love to get published...
you???

ahah- it's not just a good story line, it's also how you create the plot, the events etc. and how you write it.

like, you can get awesome ideas from ANYWHERE!!!!
oh oh oh:
like you never know- i really could be an police officer pretending to be a pedefile, getting all your information.
Then, before you now it- you have a knock at the door and you freak, but it's just the police going...
'don't give out your personal info. i could have been a very very bad person.'

lol.
thats actual a true story :D

omg- GO SWEEDNEY TOD!!!
muahahahhaa
i love tim burten

HorrorChick wrote: "I dont give personal info out! There are sick pervs out there. I hide all of my location, appearance and stuff from computers. GO TIM BURTON. I HEART SWEENEY TODD!"

ahahha- same :D
and i KNOW!!!
i acutally watched sweeney todd only a few weeks ago :)

:D

dang it D: i just checked my messages in my inbox. didnt know this thing was happening! i already made meh story and everything! Well, at least someone cud read meh story. even though it isnt as good as most, id like to see what everyone thinks of it


Title: The Pain

''It's over.'' I told her. The hardest words ive ever had to say to anyone. She looked stunned. As if she thought this was a terrible nightmare. But, realization hit her face as she took in the words. The look on my face must of matched hers.
''What are you saying?'' she cried. Tears threatning to flow from her eyes. ''You dont want this! Y-you havent thought about this. Please, d-dont do this!'' Tears poured from her eyes, making me feel worse about this. ''You dont want this!'' she screamed again.
''Ive thought about this alot. Im sorry...I dont want this, but i cant let it go.''She flung her arms around me, holding me tight. ''I'm sorry! I'm so, so sorry!'' Her tears sank into my shirt, creating small dark spots. Hot tears flowed down my cheeks, dripping into her soft, blonde hair. I pulled away, but she only tightened her grip around me.
''Please, lets talk about this. You dont want this!'' She cried into my shirt. I pulled away, using my arms to push her off me. I looked at her face, her eyes red, and her cheeks wet. This was wrong...I didnt want this. But i cant let this go...everyone ive ever known has walked on me, used me until they threw me away, like i was nothing.
I couldnt stand here anymore, or I would forgive her, and then we would hug and kiss, and everything would be the same. I took a step back, looking at her face one last time. She reached for me, trying to hold me again. She cried the entire time. I took another step back and started to run. I ran through the grass, dodging students, and finally running into the woods.
The branches clung to my shirt, scraping my arms, tugging at me, as if they wanted me to turn around and go back to her. To forgive her, and to be with her again. Each tree representing my life. Ugly, sharp, jagged, and without life, leafless. The story of my life.
And then the cabin came into view. The ugly, old cabin, with dead plants clinging to its old wood. My favorite place, my sanctuary. The only place that was safe for me. The place where I could be alone.
The old doors creaked as I slung it open, stumbling through the room, until finally collapsing into the old, hard bed. Lissa....the best thing in my life was now gone....what would help me live now?

awwweeee.....i liked that story.....but the contest is over:(

um, thanks :D just glad ppl cud see meh story :P
its fine :P winning contests isnt everything :D but congratulations Dayna! but id really like to see more of your writing, like continuing from your short story, and horrorchicks short story too. I really like both of them. Mine just totally sounded emo, lol. Not that i have anything aginst emo's. >.> but maybe the creator of this whole group (dont know who that is) can make a thingy for this

i mean, a topic thing to continue from the short story stuff >.>

but in you story why did christian, its christian right?, run away from lissa?

i think it is what happened in blood promise differently

oh, when she was getting control by that witchy girl:D

yep, kira gotz it right. christian ran because he knew if he stayed there, he wud forgive her, and he felt like by letting it go so easily that she wud do it again, because he didnt rlly make a deal out of it the first time. kinda complicated

yeah i get it. i was kinda sad in the book when he wanted a break. but lissa really loves him...and still don't think she's sl***y

umm....im not gonna say nuthin until u read SB! u need to read it. itl explain everything!

i know i have it in my closet but i have to read the host and its kinda ocd thing:D

WELL RIP OPEN THAT SUCKER AND START READING IT! (hmm...i sound red neck) D: (not that i have anything aginst red necks)

but i have to read the host first and now i wanna finish it and read SB cuz you told me bout rose, sex and stuffed animal!

Could we please have another contest... I really want to enter...

I asked in the mods section. I would LOVE to do another.

I'm not sure but I don't think so. I havent watched any tv at all for weeks but I'll remember to check it out.

Is there a topic where we can post our writing in this group? If not, I could make one. That way, we can all post our stories, poems, etc and all of the other members can give you pointers, or just comment as they wish.

Good idea! I'm writing so many stories right now...

so am i

I'm writing a VA fanfic DPOV
two stories about angels and a few that I started but then abandonded... Gah!

i dont post anymore cause its not copyrighted

It's not? Crap! Meh... It's fun and none of my stories are good enough to publish and none of my ideas are good enough either yet.

oh thats cool :)

i'll have to read it someday soon

yeah laura its not copyrighted sorry

Yeah. I only put up my short stories and poems. Right now I'm writing a novella that I think I'll publish on a self-publishing ebook site when I've finished. Hopefully. Have to stick with it long enough to finish it first.

lol well good luck :)

Rose wrote: "I could help out with some ideas for some stories to publish for you. I made my very own Warriors story that has different Clans and character cats."

Thanks!
I am writing a story now about angels and how they are like awesome and not all goody goody. Here's a link if you are interested.
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

im gonna read it :)

but not now cause its 10 at night where i live

I'll read it when I have time maybe. Like 15 of my friends have asked me to look at their writing. It's sometimes hard to remember who's I'm supposed to read.

Hahaha! LOL!

that reminds me! i was supposed to read my friends story about a month ago! i have it book marked and everything!

Congrats Rose! :D
I can't believe I got 2 votes though, I'm so happy :) I didn't even vote for myself :P

oh we voted???????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



CONGRATS ROSE

Congrats Rose! :)

Where do you see the results?

Click on the poll buton on the right hand side of the groups page. You came second :)

well i didnt even know we voted so..... yeah

Mairead wrote: "Click on the poll buton on the right hand side of the groups page. You came second :)"

Thank you. Wow! Coolies... Next! haha.