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message 1: by Paul (new)

Paul | 2 comments Help! I want to write a story for a competion about teenage romance. I would like to do uptodate story like romeo and juliet changing the story and featuring two gays or lesbians as the lovers and being topical featuring a stabbing as the tragic end of their love. Would this be too bold a story for a competiton and does anybody have any thoughts about the plot as I'm struggling with just this idea in my head?


message 2: by Veronica, What the neck!? (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 2889 comments Mod
That sounds like a really interesting plot! I wouldn't know about it being too bold or not though...but the worst that can happen is you don't get in the top whatever of the competition, so I would write it if I were you. Even if you don't send it, you can post it on goodreads and have people enjoy reading it here.


message 3: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (ophelia17) | 67 comments too bold? never!!! awesome idea!!! like romeo's parents could be super conservative homophobes and juliet's could be hippy-ish...
i like it and if it was a novel, i'd read it


message 4: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
I love that idea, too!!


message 5: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
i say go for it!!! some people might see it as a bold statement, but i think it's a great idea. i think it would be a really cool interpretation of romeo and juliet. it's better to take the risk and write an amazing story than to hold back and write something really lame. i wish you luck! :D


message 6: by Rosemary (new)

Rosemary Yes! I hope you pursue your idea and find a market for it. The classic legend that inspired Shakespeare is just as applicable to your tale of "forbidden love" in the modern world.

And for all R&J fans, I recommend LETTERS TO JULIET by Lise and Ceil Friedman--a beautiful celebration of R&J and the letters sent to Verona by troubled lovers asking for Juliet's advice (and answered by the Secretaries of Juliet).


message 7: by Rainy (last edited Jun 03, 2008 06:56AM) (new)

Rainy I'm a big Romeo and Juliet fan, I really like shakespear in general. Great Idea. I love it.


message 8: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller i love the idea! If you do write it, I bet you could get it published.


message 9: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 1770 comments i like the idea too!! very interesting!


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

this is oooolllddd . . .


message 11: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 1770 comments i know!


message 12: by Riley (new)

Riley (booksarecool) yEAH, BUT DO IT, IF YOU'RE STILL LOOKING ON HERE.

Oops, caps lock. XD


message 13: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 1770 comments lol


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