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New Chapter
Thanx SO SO SO much for reading it! I love feedback! I read you're new chapter!!! LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!
I just posted a new chapter of Runaway, book 2. I haven't posted more in a while, and the new chapter goes off in a different direction, so don't be too disappointed. Let me know if you don't like it.
hyper doesnt even begin to cover it...
i'm shaking my head at youright now, so used to the first person thing.
i'm shaking my head at youright now, so used to the first person thing.
'i'm not saying thats a bad thing.' i assured clare. 'it's just it gets me confused a lot. it makes me feel like i'm writing b.c a lot of my stories are in first person. its fun, though.'
'haha' i thought to myself. 'more people to join in on the craziness.' i chuckled quietly to myself, earning curious stares from the people around me.
'because we can' i said. 'actually, it was on a dare that i talk in first person for the rest of the day, and i told clare and she joined me too. why, you ask? i don't know. Clare? elaborate for us, please.'
I have just started writing Chapter 4 in Between Dimensions.
***YEAH ME**** AHEM sorry about that. I am just following Michelle's advice to go...go...go CRAZY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOOOOOOHOOOOOOOOOO
***YEAH ME**** AHEM sorry about that. I am just following Michelle's advice to go...go...go CRAZY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOOOOOOHOOOOOOOOOO
Whoops. I meant.
"I have just started writing Chapter 4 in Between Dimensions." Ben said.
" ***YEAH ME**** AHEM sorry about that. I am just following Michelle's advice to go...go...go CRAZY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOOOOOOHOOOOOOOOOO" Ben also said.
"I have just started writing Chapter 4 in Between Dimensions." Ben said.
" ***YEAH ME**** AHEM sorry about that. I am just following Michelle's advice to go...go...go CRAZY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOOOOOOHOOOOOOOOOO" Ben also said.
"thanks, i think." i said uncertainly. "but good for you." i tried to sound encouraging but i am still confused b.c i don't remember saying anything about crazy. am i imagining things? i ask myself.
"well, what's wrong with you?! making things up in a sentence. Are you delusional?" i say, purpoesfully giving him a hard time and internally laughing about it.
'but i shouldn't do that,' i thought. 'but what am i to this person but a complete stranger? this should bother him none.' i concluded.
'but i shouldn't do that,' i thought. 'but what am i to this person but a complete stranger? this should bother him none.' i concluded.
"Isn't that what authors are supposed to do? Make things up?" I say, giving her a hard time back and pretending to be angry.
"GRRRRRR" I say to wrap things up.
"GRRRRRR" I say to wrap things up.
"i understand poetic license, but putting words into my mouth is a completely other story!" i exclaimed, still in mock anger.
"well," i said, at a loss for words for the moment. this never happened. this guy was good, whoever he was.
"FIne then." i said, as that was all i could say.
"FIne then." i said, as that was all i could say.
I have often thought to write to people just as if I were right in front of them so that they could really understand the depth to my feelings. Jackie "sighs" dramatically and is thrilled others feel the same!
i sighed. "And now i have a song stuck in my head, and i don't even know the words to it. Isn't that sad?" I shook my head at the saddness. I was a lost cause, and everyone knew it.
"WOW!!! You guys are to fast for your own good!" I exclaimed. "I'm gone for dinner, and I come back and theres 21 posts! AHHHHH" I thought for a moment. "Oh, Ben, welcome to the sort of group that are all now talking like this. Isn't it fun??"
"It is." i said, though she wasn't talking to me. I wanted to add convincing effect. "We should start talking like this more often." i mused.
'and again, everyone is quiet.' i think. why is this? i wonder. but then i can't stand the silence. WHERE IS EVERYBODY?
hello... wow i haven't been on goodreads in like two days. SO MUCH STRESS SO MUCH HOMEWORK SO MANY FINALS!!! AAAH!!!
"she's not talking right." i whisper to clare. But i forgive Brigid. She just got here, after all. "Glad you liked the email," i tell her.
"oh, my bad," said brigid, smacking herself in the forehead. "i'm so stupid. sorry... so stressed..."
"It's okay," i say, giving her a helpful pat on the shoulder. "Though, i must say, that most people are quiet now. It's starting to scare me." i admit.
Hey Brigid you shouldn't be stressed I think you are a very smart girl and should not have school issues!
"Jackie isn't talking right either." Ben says to Brigid and Michelle. Ben doesn't notice that Jackie happens to be right there listening to him.
"Brigid!" I cried out joyfully. "You have joined us on goodreads again! Congrats!" I did a little dance. "And don't worry. I forgive you also, for writing that first comment wrong. But Jackie isn't talking right either!" I tried to whisper that last part so as not to hurt Jaskie's feelings. "Oh well..."
"Opps!" I exclaim, relizing that she took so long in writing that last post that Ben got to writing that fact about (shhh) Jakie, first...






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-Ben