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May 02, 2010 01:03PM

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Well today is my birthday-a day for many to rejoice,but right now I'm sitting here near the window of my room watching
the setting sun,I feel misreable about myself.Today I become15,I am supposed to celebrate this day with my friends and family but I don't want to,I've cancelled my party and I'm sitting and making my chubby checks wet with tears and my nose red.The reason for this is that all the people I trusted have lied to me,lied all my life.The story goes like this-
I wake up in the morning,the morning of my bithday,happy,anxious to know what is going to come up this day.I've already got a number of calls wishing me a Happy Birthday!
My mom and dad came with a big gift in their hand and even a larger smile on their face.I hug them ,saying Thank You and grab the gift to unwrap it.I hope its the black dress the I wanted but I know that they can't aford it as its too costly and tell myself to forget it!My mom tells me that I'm gonna love the gift!Yeppeee!!!Guess whatIt Is The Black Dress
"Omg!I can't believe it.How did you'll manage it?",I ask them.My mom suddenly becomes emotional as never before!
"Bella",they say"Someone's come to meet you."
"Who?",I question looking around.And then two unknown people come out of the guest room.
They wish me happy birthday and I question mum asking "Who r they"
There's a sort of silence in the room.The strangers r looking at me as though they wanted to see from years.My dad breaks the silience and sas
"They ..ah......Bella...they have given you this dress........
.....your real parents."
REAL PARENTS????MY foot!!!!
It was not a joke.They are really my parents.But they kept it a secret.A BIG DARK SECRET.And now.....ahh.....I fell like .....It all happen so quick!WHYYYYYYYYYYY?????????????
I am alone. I'm in my own world, my fantasy world. No one can find me here. So, I was obviously suprised when none other than YOU walked in. What were you thinking? This is MY place. MINE! No one, no matter how close (not to mention you are not close) is allowed. Or can get in for that matter. So how did you? When I saw you looking for me here, I ran out, back to that normal world. I closed the portal than thought better of it and opened back up so you could get out.
I pondered how this had happened for what seemed like ever. Sweat ran down my neck and my breathing was ragged from running out that fast. I couldn't think of anything, no reason.
Today is the day after that. Coming into my world I had been tentative because I didn't see you come out. I found no trouble and am now in my tree. The tree is special because it was the way I first got here. The tree talks to me. So do the animals. And the plants. I stay here at night sometimes and watch the planets. I don't know how I can see them, but the tree tells me time after time that I have special vision. Wait…was I seeing you in my room, not in my world then? I can certainly see you now, reading this, wondering what I am thinking.
I pondered how this had happened for what seemed like ever. Sweat ran down my neck and my breathing was ragged from running out that fast. I couldn't think of anything, no reason.
Today is the day after that. Coming into my world I had been tentative because I didn't see you come out. I found no trouble and am now in my tree. The tree is special because it was the way I first got here. The tree talks to me. So do the animals. And the plants. I stay here at night sometimes and watch the planets. I don't know how I can see them, but the tree tells me time after time that I have special vision. Wait…was I seeing you in my room, not in my world then? I can certainly see you now, reading this, wondering what I am thinking.
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