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May 27, 2010 10:12AM
If you have peotry that u think might help u,or others,about how anyone is feeling plea post them in here.
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NumbWhat the hell is going on???
My pain and feelings are all gone
I just rolled the dice
Now there is no price
My pain is through
Now its all up to you
My body has been sore
But I can’t feel it anymore
In a way, I love not feeling all the pain
And now it’s making me go insane
My tears won’t even fall
No humans or demons can hear my call
My life is already gone
Because I’m trying to survive in this world
Alone and on my own
By: Misty White
good sis,but i never read that one
i just wrote that one about two days ago cuz i was bored and my feelings were going crazy so i wrote whatever came to mind ya know???
ya i know that feeling :D
Broken Hearted
I wish I could get another token
I want to change what has been broken
I hear the words that have been spoken
But all I want is that one last token
I fell in love,
Like it was sent from above
Like a dove from heaven
The way I felt was from the Lord above
I was cheated by it
I was mistreated by it
I was defeated by it
I don’t know if I ever want to fall in love again
My heart was broken by someone I trusted more then anything
I wasn’t meant for love at all
Love is so important and I will never have it
I wish I knew love the way others do
I wish I could have what I had before
I God would show me my one and only
What is love, if it’s not a phony?
Not Trusting
Not trusting anyone who says they love me
Not trusting myself anymore
Not ever wanting love again
Hating myself for trusting him
Hating myself for letting him in
Hating my life because of this sin
Hating wanting to leave and never come back
I wish all my pain would go away
I wish my life could have been better
I wish I could go back in time,
And never have met him
I wish my wishes would come true
The Dark
i sit in the dark wondering what to do.
i can't seem to find the light.
i can't seem to think.
my darkness is my light,
and my light in my darkness.
no one understands it.
i feel like someones watching me in the dark.
i look around but can't see.
i feel like i'm shattered into a million little pieces.
i'm a loner, a watcher from afar.
people say i'm wierd, angry, not at peace, and not normal.
tell what does normal really mean?
Accept me or Forsake me
People look at me as if I'm different.
People do not understand me, or take the time to.
Sometimes being alone is seems the best way to be.
If you don't takes chances you never really live.
Risks are some of the best ways to live by.
Everyone is different.
Nobody understands everything or everyone.
They pretend they care, when truth be told they could care less.
I'm treated different by my people because of how I am.
I like loud music, I like the dark,
I like vampires and demons.
I read, write, and like to be alone.
I don't like being crowded.
When you judge be prepared to get judged.
Pain, sorrow, death, happy, sad, and angry keep the world balanced around us.
I feel this way when I was told I shouldn't.
I feel like a fake when I tried to be like others.
I feel as if I am an outcast.
I am me, this is who I am.
Accept me or forsake me.
Love
Love is something we all need.
Love is something we can not live without.
Love is a price we all must pay.
Love leaves you soaring in the air,
But also leaves you shattered to pieces.
Love can break you or it can make you.
Love would not exist without heartache.
When you find true love you’ll know.
Your soul mate will always be there through thick and thin.
They will always do what they believe is best for you.
They will not lie even if it hurts.
They will tell you all their secrets and you theirs.
Love will support you in everything.
Love is a part of us, a part that is meant to be shared.
We all deserved to be loved, and will be when the time is right.
When I think of you
When I think of you, tears come to my eyes.
When I think of you, my heart shatters more.
When I think of you, I can’t forget what use to be.
All the love we use to share with each other.
All the good compared to the bad.
When I picture you, I wonder where it all went wrong.
I cry for you, for me, and for our son who will never know you.
When I think of you, I just want you back.
I want our love to always last to be shared with the world.
When I think of you I’m happy to have my good memories.
When I think of you, I cry for the love lost, shattered hearts, the pain,
And the sorrow of losing you.
Difficult
Everything seems so difficult to me
People think you have to be perfect
Be able to do anything in the world
To be the very best
So scared to disappoint them all
Can never be perfect
An attitude that won’t go away, scars that can’t be seen
Want to be who I am, live life how I want
Having scars that can’t be seen cause they are emotional, not physical ones
Loved lost, disappointment, hateful, fighting everyone, sorrow, being afraid
Every time I try to do well, be better, I mess it all up
I mess up and feel like a bigger disappointment
Scared to get real close to my son or anyone at all
Scared no one loves me, cares about me
It’s all so difficult to me
Difficult to deal with family and friends not caring, not wanting me
I argue because it seems to be the only thing I’m good at
I fight because it feels like the best way to connect, without getting to close
Difficult to change me, change how I feel, change what I want
Difficult to keep up the wall around me
To not let people in, but also letting them in
Will I always be difficult?
I wish I could get another token
I want to change what has been broken
I hear the words that have been spoken
But all I want is that one last token
I fell in love,
Like it was sent from above
Like a dove from heaven
The way I felt was from the Lord above
I was cheated by it
I was mistreated by it
I was defeated by it
I don’t know if I ever want to fall in love again
My heart was broken by someone I trusted more then anything
I wasn’t meant for love at all
Love is so important and I will never have it
I wish I knew love the way others do
I wish I could have what I had before
I God would show me my one and only
What is love, if it’s not a phony?
Not Trusting
Not trusting anyone who says they love me
Not trusting myself anymore
Not ever wanting love again
Hating myself for trusting him
Hating myself for letting him in
Hating my life because of this sin
Hating wanting to leave and never come back
I wish all my pain would go away
I wish my life could have been better
I wish I could go back in time,
And never have met him
I wish my wishes would come true
The Dark
i sit in the dark wondering what to do.
i can't seem to find the light.
i can't seem to think.
my darkness is my light,
and my light in my darkness.
no one understands it.
i feel like someones watching me in the dark.
i look around but can't see.
i feel like i'm shattered into a million little pieces.
i'm a loner, a watcher from afar.
people say i'm wierd, angry, not at peace, and not normal.
tell what does normal really mean?
Accept me or Forsake me
People look at me as if I'm different.
People do not understand me, or take the time to.
Sometimes being alone is seems the best way to be.
If you don't takes chances you never really live.
Risks are some of the best ways to live by.
Everyone is different.
Nobody understands everything or everyone.
They pretend they care, when truth be told they could care less.
I'm treated different by my people because of how I am.
I like loud music, I like the dark,
I like vampires and demons.
I read, write, and like to be alone.
I don't like being crowded.
When you judge be prepared to get judged.
Pain, sorrow, death, happy, sad, and angry keep the world balanced around us.
I feel this way when I was told I shouldn't.
I feel like a fake when I tried to be like others.
I feel as if I am an outcast.
I am me, this is who I am.
Accept me or forsake me.
Love
Love is something we all need.
Love is something we can not live without.
Love is a price we all must pay.
Love leaves you soaring in the air,
But also leaves you shattered to pieces.
Love can break you or it can make you.
Love would not exist without heartache.
When you find true love you’ll know.
Your soul mate will always be there through thick and thin.
They will always do what they believe is best for you.
They will not lie even if it hurts.
They will tell you all their secrets and you theirs.
Love will support you in everything.
Love is a part of us, a part that is meant to be shared.
We all deserved to be loved, and will be when the time is right.
When I think of you
When I think of you, tears come to my eyes.
When I think of you, my heart shatters more.
When I think of you, I can’t forget what use to be.
All the love we use to share with each other.
All the good compared to the bad.
When I picture you, I wonder where it all went wrong.
I cry for you, for me, and for our son who will never know you.
When I think of you, I just want you back.
I want our love to always last to be shared with the world.
When I think of you I’m happy to have my good memories.
When I think of you, I cry for the love lost, shattered hearts, the pain,
And the sorrow of losing you.
Difficult
Everything seems so difficult to me
People think you have to be perfect
Be able to do anything in the world
To be the very best
So scared to disappoint them all
Can never be perfect
An attitude that won’t go away, scars that can’t be seen
Want to be who I am, live life how I want
Having scars that can’t be seen cause they are emotional, not physical ones
Loved lost, disappointment, hateful, fighting everyone, sorrow, being afraid
Every time I try to do well, be better, I mess it all up
I mess up and feel like a bigger disappointment
Scared to get real close to my son or anyone at all
Scared no one loves me, cares about me
It’s all so difficult to me
Difficult to deal with family and friends not caring, not wanting me
I argue because it seems to be the only thing I’m good at
I fight because it feels like the best way to connect, without getting to close
Difficult to change me, change how I feel, change what I want
Difficult to keep up the wall around me
To not let people in, but also letting them in
Will I always be difficult?
wow that's a lot to read, they're really good, i like them
thank u very much Raven and Goddess.i just want to find someone who will love me for me.its hard to find that person and writing helps get some of the pain out but its still pretty deep.
i know the feeling.... i'm still looking for someone to replace my soulmate that was taken from me
Mod
Blood on the ground, slashes cut into flesh, ripping souls from their person, haunting me in my mind, replaying over and over,driving me insane. My body covered in scars, some new some old, fear grips at me, sending me into a world of paranoia. Faces leer at me snickering at evil thoughts, hurting me mentally. Wishing at night that death would overtake. Fearing deathg because the dead would extract years worth of vengence. Walking on this planet, people give me looks that anger me, wishing me to be non-existant. Night. Surrounded by darkness, gun in hand, years and years of torment could be ended in one shot. Bullet tears skin, muscles, brain, and skull, releases me of pain held in for years. Pull trigger, empty clip, due to fighting my enemies all day & most of the night in my imagination and in real life. Blood and the bodies of innoncent men and women litter these sandy streets, with no end in sight. Knife at my side saying to me : use me, will never pick it up for it serves no purpose. Alchol, drinking shot after shot, not numbing the pain that i feel. Grabs gun and fires into th night sky, yelling at the vengeful spirits. Gunfire erupts from various positions, gutting me, riddling my body with holes, I fall to the ground face first while smiling. Blood pools around me, someone turns me over, my soul ebbs from my body. i see the stars for the last time. Death creeps over me, I accept the cold embrace, taking its hand, it leads me down a road i know all too well.......
kinda free verse but has plenty of meaning.
