The Personal Journal discussion

June 4th to June 26th. The topic is poetry about life. Rules listed below.
Rules
1. Free verse
2. can be as long as you want it but must fit within one post.
3. try to format it like a poem.
4. only post entries
5. as many poems may be submitted as long as they fit ON ONE POST. NO EXCEPTIONS.
6. bad language is allowed
7. any questions please ask them in the questions section.

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I suck at poetry. XD

Oh no...I can't win at poetry

You have already won, you can't win again for this one! PLEASE JUST TRY!!!

Fine...*Grumble*

:)

Where's the entry topic?

here.

Ooh, we just put them here? Okay! *Marches off to write*

Naught but Half

People see life
as a glass.
Half full
or
Half empty.
But I see the glass as
naught but half.
Naught but half because
life is not so simple as to be
half full
or
half empty.
Life is somewhere in the
middle
of everything.

just something random i came up with. O.o

... I really really really really really really rrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaallllllllllllllllllllllllyyyyyyyyyyy like that! It sums up what i think about life PERFECTLY!

Same here. took me about five minutes and that's probably the deepest piece of lit i've ever written.

O.o.... This is a poem I already wrote. Compleatly random, though I think it fits...

Nothingness.

Ghost lips, Papery tips,
Making nothing,
Creatures of fire and air,
Darkness, Nothing to
Lost my Air and Wings.
Imperfectionists
And we are there again.
Underground,
a thousand,
million,
ten,
lonely empty rooms filled
with artificial love and
light the water
falls in the distance.
A plume, gored from air
A superficial wound,
on the heart.
Our world, no one else
expects to undersatand
Where trouble is your best friend
Keep quick on your toes,
Beware

Because their out to get you,
Beware of capabilitly
Wouldn't put it past you,
Why trust. Why love.
When the image will shatter
punches thrown at a pretty picture
Floods, and Death lie behind the

Lies.

Nice poem, Domuyrr. ;) Also i is sorry to hear you has bronchitis. Hope you get better soon.

Hack-cough. I am having a very hard time breathing....Thanies tho.

Helllo? Anyone there?