Writing Haven discussion

Post your poems here! (unless they are short, link only please)

http://warriorsfansworldwide.webs.com...
They are there as you go through the pages, and those are just for Warriors. I do others, too.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/6...

Careful, there are 28 poems, and the last 4 or 5 poems all go together.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

One of them is published so I kinda took it off. But I'll put it back later.

Oh, and I didn't know where to put this so...

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Well, here's my poem called Brainless, just let me know what you think!

Have no mind,
No clue to who,
No road map
to follow,
or key to you.
So cheers to who,
For following through,
Goodbye to you
and all you knew.

:) that's really cute

Thanks, it was just a quick write.

Wow. That's so cool.

That's really good. I could tell you what's a little bit off, if you like.

Go ahead, I know there's something off about it but couldn't put my finger on it! LoL!

all of the words, but map, follow, and mind rhyme, plus you finish more with you and who more than once.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

I'm sure it would have work to just give us the genral link.

http://www.sodahead.com/entertainment... plz take a look :)