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message 1: by Maggie, Gaea shall smite you all. (last edited May 31, 2012 07:16PM) (new)

Maggie (maggie-swift) | 1674 comments Mod
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message 2: by *~Silvypoo~* (Chaser of Artemis) (last edited Mar 20, 2011 12:21PM) (new)

*~Silvypoo~* (Chaser of Artemis) (Silverfur) | 14363 comments Name: Vanessa Angelina Newman
gender: f
looks: Vanessa has dark black hair that just touches her shoulders in layers. Her eyes are a bright hazel that are surrounded by dark and lush eyelashes that need no mascara, but they are covered with it anyway. Her face is slim with sunken in cheeks, but she doesn't starve herself like a lot if people do, that's just how they look. Her lips are full, and an attractive light pink. She slathers them in lipstick, chapstick, lipgloss, anything to keep them soft and healthy. She has a small, skinny buil that hides what small amounts of wiry muscle she has.
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personality: Vanessa is one of the least vain in her cabin, though she knows that her sister, Rosa takes that particular cake. Despite her mother being the goddess of love, she's shy with people sometimes. Especially males that she finds gorgeous. In guys, she doesn't look for hot or anything like that, she looks for what's inside if them, and yes she'll admit it, they at least have to be cute. She's quite mischievious, again despite herself being an Aphrodite. She enjoys sports such as soccer, volleyball, and cheerleading. She used to cheer before she came to camp half-blood.
age: 17
other: Vanessa lived the big life in New York City with her father. She didn't like staying in her house for long, because it only took a few hours before her gather would be home, some kind of hooker or prostitute on his shoulder. Instead of dealing with him and his gambling, drinking, and yes, drug use, Vanessa would go shopping, or find someone to hang out with. She was terrified when at her favorite store, aeropostale, the Chashier turned into a herya. She barely fought it off with her bags, when her satyr came, and rescued her. She was dropped off at camp half-blood, relieved that she was away from her father. Chiron sent her father word of her arrival, but there was no answer, and Vanessa knows that there never will be. The only thing that she got from her father was her childhood pet, Sassy. The only reason he sent her was because he coukd no longer afford the cat, and Vanessa knew it. She doesn't speak of her father, and tries her best to forget him.
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Relationsjip(s):
*Jayson- Was her best friend about a year ago, now they are official boyfriend/girlfriend
*Delwyn- Vanessa's favorite half-sibling. They trust each other more than any other of their siblings and they confide in each other a lot. Ever since the curse, Vanessa has become a tad over-protective.


message 3: by Kat, Goddess of Dramatic Exits and Strawberry Yogurt (last edited Dec 22, 2010 09:11PM) (new)

Kat (sugaraddict) | 11750 comments Mod
Name: Carter Smith
Looks: with choclate eyes that compliment the shady blonde-brown of his hair. Full pink lips and soft features, with high muscle tone. Quick to a charming smile, Carter is definetly a 'prince charming'
Personality: Fun sweet, sarcastic, jokey, definetly an AIRHEAD. More often then not a giant flirt, though hates the concept of pretty-un-smart-Aphrodites. Yes, they might be a little dull be he hates the way people judge front up without giving a chance. Determined, though somewhat of a slacker. Though the quest had changed him. But that air-head Aphrodite will always live on.
Age: 19
Other: Is a Counselor
Bday: February 20
Weapon: A red-silver cap lighter with turns into a long blade.


message 4: by Lightfeather ☼☺♥ (last edited Jul 18, 2011 04:40PM) (new)

Lightfeather ☼☺♥ (lightfeatherbethany) Name: Henry Adams

Age: 15

Looks: Henry is tall and lithe. He doesn't have muscles like the Ares or Zeus kids, but can keep his own in a fight. He has a slight tan His face is very angular, with sharp cheek bones and a defined jaw. His dirty blonde hair is a bit shaggy and swept to the side. Henry keeps saying he'll get it cut, but never seems to have the time. He has warm brown eyes that are usually sparkling with laughter. Thin, rose lips end Henry's "surfer" looks.
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Personality: Henry is a charmer. Despite being an "Aphro", he is incredibly naive and sweet. He loves engaging people in conversation and finding out who they really are. He loves to laugh and pull pranks, but he would never hurt anyone. Having a good time is the top of his priority list.
Henry is not one to be wrapped up in his looks, but he will often go to the Battle Arena for a workout. You never know when someone might want to pick on a "weak Aphrodite kid".

Other: Unlike most of the Aphrodite kids, he enjoys fighting. He has a celestial bronze dagger about three feet long. It was made by one of his Hepheatus friends. You'll never see him without his weapon.


message 5: by Devyn Kelly! (last edited Sep 23, 2010 04:47PM) (new)

Devyn Kelly! | 133 comments Name: Anna Marie (she's from down south so it's all her first name)
Gender: Female
Looks:
Brown hair, a kinda pale complexion, beautiful green/hazel eyes, definitely a daughter of Aphrodite.
http://img468.imageshack.us/i/monfm4....
Personality: She's very timid, but get to know her and she'll shine like a star. Very talkative, she cares about her beauty, but a whole lot. She's a big flirt so watch out! (:
Other: Has a German Shepherd puppy named Sadie. ( a leaving gift from her mother)
http://www.dogbreedinfo.com/images17/...


Age:17


message 6: by Isobel *The Goddess of Annoyance* (last edited Dec 30, 2010 12:20AM) (new)

Isobel *The Goddess of Annoyance* (goddess_of_annoyance) | 13860 comments Name: Chaumelle Valerie Alvar

Gender: Female

Age: 14

Appearance: Chaumelle
She has gentle, long waves of a dark cherry color and warm chocolate brown eyes. Her full, naturally wine-colored lips and flawless pale skin make her beautiful. She has a lithe form and a sweet smile, though it's not always true. She has small hands that seem out of place on her, but somehow they work. It seems as though she has a permanent smirk on her face, and her features can be called pixie-ish.

Personality: Chaumelle, most of the time, is a skanky b*tch (pardon my language). She knows she is beautiful and loves toying around with that fact. She has a heavy sense of sarcasm that layers nearly every word she speaks, and it's rather obvious. She is very vain, thinking she can get everything and anything she wants.

Other: Chaumelle has a sword. Nothing special about it, but it's pink. Of course. She's your typical California Blonde.


message 7: by Isobel *The Goddess of Annoyance* (last edited Dec 30, 2010 12:22AM) (new)

Isobel *The Goddess of Annoyance* (goddess_of_annoyance) | 13860 comments Name: Rosa Kimberly Alvar

Appearance: Rosa
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Rosa has long, flowing reddish-brown hair (tied into braids) and green-blue eyes. She has pale skin and naturally wine-colored lips. Her cheeks are lightly blushed and she has a soft, willowy form.

Age: 14

Personality: She is carefree and worryless (is that a word?). She refuses to let anything get to her and is not afraid to voice her opinion. If you get her angry she will scream at you relentlessly and she likes most things to go her way. She hates being proved wrong.

History: She arrived at Camp Half-Blood at age 10, running from something she has never revealed. She lived in the Aphrodite cabin for four whole years before returning home, being thrown back here and being recruited. She joined the Hunt in the year 2000. She has only been here for 10 years.

Other: All the people she thought loved her only liked her for her looks. She realized this and left, joining the Hunt. Just recently, she fell in love and was banished from the Hunt by Lady Artemis herself. Her immortality was taken away and she was forced to come to the only other Cabin she could call home.


message 8: by Moon (last edited Jul 07, 2011 04:50PM) (new)

Moon (moonstonesandbooks) | 3694 comments Name: Delwyn
Looks: He has stringy black hair that is oily to the roots. His peculiar haircut does nothing for him, except draw attention to his ubiquitous, lumpy pimples. He does, however, have beautiful and deep honey colored eyes and full lips. Yet, you can't really see his eyes that well because he wears glasses with a thick frame.


Del without curse:





Personality: He isn't genius smart, contrary to his stereotypical nerd appearance. He loves creating perfumes and playing and watching Pokemon and Yu-gi-Oh!, along with watching the Young and the Restless. When he has the time, he starts designing clothing, but he has never really been serious about it.
Age: 16
Other: Ths is his sixth year at camp. He is also hated by a lot of the Aphrodite campers for having a nerdy appearance and playing with Yu-Gi-Oh, but he gained respect becuase he creates amazing perfume scents for his half sibs. He is also respected because he tried to be nice to them and give them a lot of stuff that you use on your body (eg perfume or body lotion). He used to be physically appealing, but he was cursed by his mom after he got into a really bad argument with Aphrodite, his mom. He now stays year round.
Relationship(s):
* Keelyn: Del is currently friends with Keelyn, ever since she helped him when he got hurt by Drake.
*Vanessa: Vanessa is his closest half sib. They tell each other nearly everything, and confide in each other a lot.


message 9: by [deleted user] (new)

Name:Finn

Looks: http://www.emohaircutstyles.com/wp-co...
Finn has short,dirty blonde hair and a clear face.He has large,ice blue eyes.Finn tends to usually wear jeans and a old tee shirt.And he has a tatto on his right arm cause he's cool like that. :3
AND I DREW HIM.HE'S IN MY PICTURE.GO LOOKSEE. :3

Personality: Finn tends to be a bit idiotic, but is genreally a nice guy.He hates it when people mess with his close friends.
Oh, and he's a player but dosen't realize it :3

Age: 17

Other:


message 10: by [deleted user] (last edited Jan 03, 2012 03:04PM) (new)

Name: Alexa Jasmine Spencer
Looks:
pretty little liars
She has long brunette hair and brown eyes. She is 5'5, has pale skin and pink lips.

Age: 15

Personality: Alexa is a diva! She has to get everything she wants. She will though tantrums otherwise. Loves to flirt with boys and is always the popular one. She is smarter than you would expect an Aphrodite to be. She is a good student. Very snobby and maybe a little evil at times when she gets angry. She is also very emotional. If someone insults her she will take it WAY to seriously and break down and cry. Also she is very dramatic and has to be the center of attention.

Other: She can't go without makeup. She, like most Aphrodite Demigods, wants a boyfriend. She is filthy rich and her human father is an heiress. She loves sparkles and the color teal. Has been at camp since she was 9 when her dad died of cancer. Loves Hollister and Abercrombie clothes and is compassainate but sometimes thinks it is all about her.


message 11: by Maddie (last edited Jan 26, 2011 05:47PM) (new)

Maddie Jones | 1 comments Name: Jenavieve White
Looks: She has blond hair in loose curls, eyes like a clear Caribbean ocean, naturally perfect pink lips, straight white teeth, medium height, thin, and all around drop dead gorgeous.
Personality: Jena loves to cheer, design clothes, do make overs, is slightly stuck up, very spoiled, loves to shop,is super sweet,likes to tease boys, great with a bow and arrow, loves loves loves the color pink. She can get pretty nasty though if you're mean to her or her friends.
Age: 15
Other: She has been at Camp Half-Blood 7 years and contrary to popular belief about Aphrodite demigods, she doesn't want a boyfriend.


message 12: by Iviana (The Sign Painter), The Goddess of indecisiveness (new)

Iviana (The Sign Painter) Mʘ‿ʘP (thesignpainter) | 34142 comments Mod
Characters deleted.
Reasons: No longer a member, godmodding, lack of grammar.



message 13: by Nicole (last edited Jul 18, 2011 03:13PM) (new)

Nicole Giamporcaro (NikkiChicka) | 27 comments Name: Herieth Lin Paul(Heri Lin)
Looks: Image and video hosting by TinyPic
Personality: Sweet as honey. Quiet do to being mute ever since she was 2. Hates to show off do to sticking out enough already. Not often liked or fits in well because of constantly being thought of as dumb when she is just a mute. Sticks out which she hates about being extremely attractive. Is strong minded and confident when she wants to achieve at something. Will follow her goals until the are completed with an extreme determination.
Age: 16
Other: She is usually silent do to a child tragedy situation that she only reveals to those who stick around long enough to listen
Crush: None:(
Relationship: single...


message 14: by Adrianna McGill (Lyssa) (last edited Jun 15, 2011 02:50PM) (new)

Adrianna McGill (Lyssa) | 2 comments Name: Beezus (Bee)
Looks: http://images.dressale.com/images/mid...
Personality: Bee loves to read and write. She is very shy, until you get to know her, then she talks for a while. She is pretty smart. She always has a small dager hanging off her side. She's very flirtatious, and bubbly. She loves fashion. Her Father was a English/Literature teacher. Bee share's her Father's interest in these things also.
Age: 14
Other:


message 15: by Sami_rocks (new)

Sami_rocks | 1 comments Name: Serena Heights

Looks: Is 5’6”. She is very petite with rock-hard thighs, and would be underweight if her muscles were removed. Long, slender neck. Average length arms. Orange-Red, layered, hair that came halfway to her elbow with bangs that were pulled to the right. She’s a ginger. Oval shaped face. She had large, pencil-lead gray colored eyes. She had thin and straight eyebrows and long, luscious eyelashes. She had a long, thin nose. She has round, plump, light pink lips. When she smiles everyone can’t help but smiling as well. She mainly wears camisoles, a shirt she made, or a cute V-neck for a top, a mini skirt or shorts for bottoms and a pair of Vans for shoes.

Personality: She is your typical Aphrodite girl. She is a beautiful, vain girl who loves boys. She will often be caught cheating or playing mind games on many of the campers at Camp Half-Blood. She is never truely faithful in a relationship and is known for jumping from one boy to the next, leaving a trail of broken hearts behind her. She loves playing volleyball and doing her make-up. She likes to be in charge and jumps at any chance she gets to be the alpha. She loves to mess with other people's emotions because she has problems dealing with her own. She is your typical brat.

Age: 16

Other: Doesn't own a single weapon and skips most of her classes to do her make-up.

History: Serena lived with her dad in a stood-up nieghborhood in California. When she was 8 she was sent to an all-girl boarding school for the mentally challenged with a bunch of brats who rubbed off on her. At age 13 she was withdrawn from the boarding school to go to Camp Half-Blood.

Relationships:
Charlie Heren- Her boyfriend she has been with since age 7 (she was even boy crazy then!). They have been writing each other ever since she started going to the boarding school, but has not stayed loyal. You can usually see her surronded by boys. They are still together but Serena doubts it will last.


message 16: by Rudy (last edited Sep 09, 2011 06:49AM) (new)

Rudy | 1179 comments Name: Rayne Tiberius

Looks: Rayne is a sweet looking boy with red hair and freckles. He is well built and has cold blue eyes. His smile and dimples have caused many girls sorrow, considering his curse (See other). He isn't obsessed with his looks, but does put effort into them. He wears tank-tops and shorts mostly, even in the winter.

Personality: Rayne seems like a typical air-headed Aphrodite until you get to know him. He is actually a contemplative guy, and spends a lot of time thinking. However, he isn't very book smart. Rayne belongs in the dating scheme however. He usually has a new girl every week, because of a curse making long term relationships near impossible for him. As of now he is between girlfriends and has just promised (For the 8th time or so) that he is done with dating. Rayne isn't very athletic, but is a hell of a dancer. He rivals Muse kids in fact. Rayne is overly dramatic however, and has issues with love, usually asking his half-sisters for advice.

Age: 17, has been at camp for 7 years.

History: Rayne came to the camp when he was 10, after running away from a father who didn't care and a step-mom who wanted to exploit his good looks. He didn't like the other Aphrodite kids for a while, until they stood up for him in an incident with some Ares children. Since then, he has relied on his cabin-mates more than anyone else at camp.

Other: A particularly bad breakup with an Eros camper caused a curse to be put on Rayne. The curse is complex but basically boils down to this: After a first date, if the girl loves Rayne, he will feel a magic compulsion to break up with her, and break her heart. If Rayne falls for a girl, something bad will happen to cause her to either hate Rayne, or be in a position not to love him. The camper hinted that there was a way to break it, but hasn't revealed any other information. The assumption was that this would make Rayne hurt for his love, but instead it has caused Rayne to no longer look for long-term relationships but instead cheap and easy thrills.

Weapons: Rayne has a magic earring, that turns into a shield when pulled on. He is handy with the xiphos and the dory. Rayne usually ignores training however, and instead spends his time looking for girls at either the lake, grotto or gazebo.

Relationships:
Rayne has gone out with many girls at CHB. However, considering how all their relationships ended, most of them either hate Rayne or have reasons not to hang out with him.

Rayne still mourns the loss of one girl by the name of Sarah who was killed by a hellhound in the forest after their first few dates. He blames her death on himself and the curse.

Airlia-The girl that laid the curse on him. SInce Sarah's death, he is no longer on speaking terms with her. Unfortunately, this also means that he dosen't know how to undo the curse.


message 17: by Milan~The Gummy Bear Princess!!!!~ (last edited Sep 09, 2011 12:45PM) (new)

Milan~The Gummy Bear Princess!!!!~ (NeverBeenKissed09) | 22 comments Name: Sirena Angeles

Age: 17

Appearance:
http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_PuaiyrgFMwU...
She is 5'8" with long legs and a nice figure. She is Italian but doesn't have an accent. She usually wears semi-revealing clothes without as much sparkle as you would expect.

Personality: Sirena is the popular girl that is used to getting her way. If you get to know her she will soften but can still be snappy. She is usually cold to people and isn't afraid to tell people what she thinks (or says). she is really athletic and likes to cheerlead and dance. She gets okay grades, A's to C's, but she is really bad at Math and Science. She loves to read corny romance novels and romaction books.

Relationships: She is a heartbreaker but got stuck on one guy named jake in highschool. When she thought she could trust him, she told him that she was the daughter of Aphrodite. He instantly assumed she had been using him the whole time and broke up with her, swearing to never talk to, or see, her again. Because of this, she is not that trustworthy with guys. She still hops from boy to boy careful not to get in too deep. Currently, she is single.

Other: She models and hopes to become one when she's older. She found out about her powers when she was in 6th grade and she told a mortal boy that kept following her around to go jump off a cliff. That afternoon, she heard on the news that he had and ended up in the hospital in critical condition. She was devistated but fasinated by her power. She uses it all the time not worrying about the consiquences.

Power: Charm-speaking


message 18: by Jessica (last edited May 31, 2012 07:57PM) (new)

Jessica | 7 comments Name: Veronica van Stralen

Age: 14 1/2

Appearance: She always dresses effortless and breezy but still put-together, neat, and stylish. She has thick, luxurious honey blonde hair with cafe brown and light blonde highlights. It is wavy and cascades down to the middle of her back. Her eyebrows look as if they are perfectly plucked. Her big almond eyes are hybrid of saphire and ocean blue. She has a small, ski-slope nose and plump, full lips to follow underneath. She is a dancer and participate in MANY sports. She is naturally slender and with the addition of sports, skinny but not underweight. She's also got curves, in the right places.

Personality: She is effortless and breezy. Life is too short, why waste it? Not a bad girl, but doesn't exactly play by the rules. ;) She just wants to have fun while she can! She does care about people and doesnt want them to be too stressed. She tends to runaway when things get too serious though. Sure she can commit to relationship, but if a serious issue comes up, she doesn't know how to deal. She definitely relies on her many loyal friends to support her.

Relationships: She is currently single. She usually gets along with all guys she meets. She is friends with them, JUST friends (although they tend to think more). She just hasn't met a guy on her own wavelength. Someone who she can REALLY trust and talk with, casual and serious. Also, she has friends both inside and outside of camp. Although she doesn't usually like mean people, she gets along with them and looks for the positive in them.

Power: She has the usual: beauty and charm talking. There's is STILL something that hasn't beenn unlocked inside of her though. She has no idea if it's big or small, powerful or useless. That is to be determined ...

History: She has known about being Aphrodite's daughter ever since she was 9 and learned about Greek Mythology. Every summer she would visit CHB but her father thought it was time to have her there full time. Veronica had no problem with this decision as she has friends in CHB as well (she still texts all her old school friends). Her father is a very honest, powerful man who is the supervisor of a large company (no wonder Aphrodite was attracted to him ;). He loves his daughter but tends to work a lot, another reason she is at the camp. They skype every Sunday night.

Well, that's about it.


message 19: by Maggie, Gaea shall smite you all. (new)

Maggie (maggie-swift) | 1674 comments Mod
If you could just put the 'other' info under a 'history' heading, then you're all set (though I'd recommend expounding on her history. It'd make for a character with more depth).


message 20: by Jessica (new)

Jessica | 7 comments Magdalena (Maggie) wrote: "If you could just put the 'other' info under a 'history' heading, then you're all set (though I'd recommend expounding on her history. It'd make for a character with more depth)."
Ok thanks. im kinda new at this


message 21: by Maggie, Gaea shall smite you all. (last edited Jun 01, 2012 10:42AM) (new)

Maggie (maggie-swift) | 1674 comments Mod
You're new? Well, that was a great character for a newbie, Jessica. Don't worry--the 'edit' button is always just a click away. :)


message 22: by Jessica (new)

Jessica | 7 comments Ok, thanks again:) How long does it take for people to answer back usually?


message 23: by Maggie, Gaea shall smite you all. (new)

Maggie (maggie-swift) | 1674 comments Mod
It depends. Sometimes the group's really active, but sometimes it goes stale (like now).


message 24: by Zoe (new)

Zoe (PriestessofLove) | 2 comments Callista
Personality: Callista is shy, pretty,and intelligent. She loves to read, sing, dance, play piano, sketch, and travel. She is funny, flirtatious, and loves fine jewelry--especially necklaces. She loves perfume...She is loyal and loving to her friends--and LOVES making them laugh. She's there to lend a shoulder to cry on...She is however passionate, and extremely stubborn when she doesn't get her way...She is rather devious and knows how to use her charm to get her way--like many Aphrodite children. She's one of the few who mastered the gift of Charmspeaking. However she is internally beautiful and she hates ugly people--in all forms--not just physical ugliness--mostly inner ugliness--in other words, shallow, selfish, arrogant, cruel people...She hates yelling and fighting and will try to avoid pissing anyone off, but if provoked, she has a temper that can erupt like a volcano.

Appearance: Tall, slender, graceful with waist-length black hair, brown eyes, wearing knee-length skirts--she loves black stilletos from designer shoe stores..She loves Calvin Klein, Ralph Lauren, Nordstrom, Sephora, as her favorite places to shop..When it's winter/autumn she wears Burberry, preferably black.


Hobbies: Reading, traveling, laughing, art, playing piano, singing, dancing, watching ballet/opera, being with friends.
Age: 17
History: Callista was born to a famous composer Grieg Katz from Vienna--and Aphrodite..Grieg was also a famous and handsome pianist, where he attracted the attention of Aphrodite. She decided to get close to him by accompanying him with her voice--she turned into a mortal lady Gretchen with long dark hair, brown eyes, and graceful build---she was a soprano. She met Grieg before the annual Vienna concert and told him she was new, and singing as a soprano..Grieg agreed and told her he must hear her first, alone--so Gretchen (Aphrodite) agreed. Gretchen sang for just Grieg alone. He was soo entranced by her voice and beauty that he he decided to allow her to sing with him at his concert..Gretchen accepted the proposal happily..At the night of the concert, much of Viennese showed up to listen to the Philharmonic Orchestra and the new Prima Donna, Gretchen..After the concert, Grieg and Gretchen spent more time together and fell deeply in love. Yet four years after they were married, and Gretchen conceived Grieg's daughter, she mysteriously disappeared--the distraught Grieg only saw a golden cradle with a beautiful baby girl in it on his doorstep with a note in which Gretchen revealed her true identity to the heartbroken Grieg-explaining she was the love goddess herself and she could not bring her daughter to Olympus nor could she stay on earth to raise her. She promised to guide their daughter to Camp Halfblood when the girl turned thirteen, and only then will she learn of her true parentage. Grieg reluctantly agreed--although he was still heartbroken and never took another wife after Gretchen (Aphrodite) left him. He could not stop thinking about her. Grieg raised the girl-who he named Callista meaning "most beautiful"-in honor of her mother. When Callista grew up, she became as gifted at the piano and in singing as both of her parents. On her thirteenth birthday, she was hurried away from her school by a mysterious satyr..Until she arrived at Camp Halfblood and later claimed by Aphrodite. Callista was confused but Chiron explained to her that her father had to keep her safe.


message 25: by Rudy (new)

Rudy | 1179 comments If you don't mind, please rearrange it according to format. I'll read it when I get home.


message 26: by *~Silvypoo~* (Chaser of Artemis) (last edited Jun 20, 2012 06:43PM) (new)

*~Silvypoo~* (Chaser of Artemis) (Silverfur) | 14363 comments A few minor mistakes is all that I can see, but the mods will have to approve it.

*Aphrodite is a goddess, not a god. And goddess doesn't have to be capitalized

*CHB is not a school, but a summer camp. Hence the name, Camp Half-Blood

*Why would adults telling her she wasn't normal have anything to do with who her mother is? Regular mortals can't just look at a demigod and say, "yep, that's a daughter of Aphrodite right there."

Other than that I'd say great start.


*~Silvypoo~* (Chaser of Artemis) (Silverfur) | 14363 comments You'll have to ask a mod. Character-Self Chat, perhaps? That's usually how you can contact them.


message 28: by Vanessa, Goddess of Chulutions (new)

Vanessa | 478 comments Mod
Just one thing: Gods/goddesses are required to claim their children at age thirteen, so Lucy'd have to get to Camp Half-Blood at that age. Change that and you're approved.


message 29: by Iviana (The Sign Painter), The Goddess of indecisiveness (new)

Iviana (The Sign Painter) Mʘ‿ʘP (thesignpainter) | 34142 comments Mod
How and why did her father die?

Also, there are a few typos that need to be worked out. Therefore has an e at the end. Most browsers come with a spellcheck feature and you could always run it through a word processor.


message 30: by Iviana (The Sign Painter), The Goddess of indecisiveness (new)

Iviana (The Sign Painter) Mʘ‿ʘP (thesignpainter) | 34142 comments Mod
What caused the fire?


message 31: by *~Silvypoo~* (Chaser of Artemis) (last edited Jun 26, 2012 10:18AM) (new)

*~Silvypoo~* (Chaser of Artemis) (Silverfur) | 14363 comments Had to re-do Mallory. She was drving me crazy :3

Name: Mallory Louise Hotchkins

Age: Twelve
DOB*April 30th

Gender: Female
Orientation* Straight

Appearance: Mallory is still a small girl that's flat as a pancake and skinny as a bean pole. Though agile and quick on her feet, the daughter of Aphrodite lacks in brute strength due to her body being a bag of bones. In combat, Mallory tries to keep her speed as an upperhand rather than the very thing that kills her.

A soft caramel brown, Mallory's hair is so long that it ends loosely at the small of her back, which isn't such a surprise because the young girl hasn't ever gotten a haircut in her life, unless it's one of her siblings insisting that her bangs be trimmed. Usually she has her hair pulled back away from her face in a ponytail or bun to save herself from a neverending hour of excrutiating pain with three seperate kinds of brushes and other foreign beauty products. Her bangs, which are the onlt parts of her hair that can stay straight for most of the day are constantly covering the tops of her warm, dark brown eyes. The resemble a doe's eyes by a lot, both being large and looking innocent. Across her alabaster skin are light brown freckles dotting all around her cheeks and her nose.
bella
Long day in the battle arena?

bella
Just hanging out...

bella
Hello.

Personality: Like nost girls are at their young age, Mallory is innocent and naive and sweet as a bucket of honey. She does not take pride in being the daughter of Aphrodite because she's heard the reputations most of them carry for being shallow. All in all, she's down right embarrassed about her heritage and spends as much time out of the cabin as possible, hoping that being away from them will limit how much her siblings will rub off on her.

Outside the cabin, Mallory usually doesn't like to do many things that are aggressive. She's more peaceful than some, and likes to go to quiet, cool places where she can just relax or talk to friends. Though social with the group of friends she has now, Mallory is shy when it comes to strangers and big crowds.

History: Mallory used to live with her father and three older sisters, who were all very open and knowledgable about who her mother was. Her father, John Hotchkins had known about the camp for a long time and decided to send his daughter there at an early age to get her used to the camp as well as ensure her security. Since she was three, Mallory would be driven from their home in the city of Maine to Camp Half-Blood every summer and then driven back home at the beginning of every school year. But Mallory enjoyed her summer camp so much that one summer, she decided to stay for good and is now a full year-rounder. Her family writes often, but has since then moved out of the city of Maine and purchased a small house in Bangor, Maine.

Other: Mallory usually doesn't like to challenge and fight, but would rather prefer to antoagonize them and then run, creating a wild goose chase. A long vaulting pole helps her with that and when it does come time to fight, it comes in handy with leaving bruises and making her opponent sore. If it doesn't create open wounds, that's okay too because Mallory isn't one to stomach the sight of blood.
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Relationship(s)-
*Ivan- A close friend of Mallory's whom she usually likes to spend her time with outside of her cabin. Ivan is a son of Poseidon and the two are usually seen holding hands.

*Siblings- Mallory isn't extremely close to many of her siblings, but she has been in the cabin for years and knows almost everyone of them. She is sort of viewed as the baby of the cabin.



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Megan Fitzgerald (nyancatluv) | 10 comments Name:Brielle Soaring

Age:15

Appearance: Brielle is a reasonably thin girl with slightly tanned skin, although she prefers being pale. Her long auburn hair falls nearly to her waist, with small curls near the ends. She loves leaving her hair down, but puts it up in a ponytail if she is swimming, because it can be a hassle when it's wet. Her oval shaped eyes are jade green and rimmed with semi-long eyelashes. She puts on lip gloss from time to time but she usually never wears makeup. Brielle's face is dotted with freckles on her cheeks and nose, and her cheeks are usually flushed, making them slightly pink. When she walks in a room she never goes unnoticed, which is exactly how she doesn't want it. She's never caught without her gold arm cuff. She usually wears her white sundress, but on occasion wears a t-shirt and jeans.

Personality: Brielle is extremely shy which can be a problem at camp, with so many people she just wants to crawl under a rock and hide. She most likely isn't thought of as brave. The only escape from everyone is art. She's rather paint an impossible landscape over talking to someone any day. But she knows she'll have to say something eventually. Brielle has some of the silliest fears too, like lightning, spiders and bees.... Definitley bees... But Brielle knows someday she might overcome her shyness (but don't count on it!)

History: Brielle's used to live with her father in Newfoundland Canada. She loved watching hockey games on television with him, and going to bowering park every weekend, life seemed perfect.... Until Brielle's father died in a car crash. After that her life seemed to fall apart. After her father was late for their annual hockey night, she knew something happened. Only minutes later she got the call. Brielle couldn't handle it, she lost it. She just ran. Every moment knowing her father was gone drove her a bit more insane. eventually she stopped running. She told herself she had to accept it, but she knew she wasn't going back. Running, for what felt like forever, she made it onto a hill. She ached all over, and had been attacked several times, but a feeling in her gut told her to keep moving forward, instead she collapsed. She woke up in what looked like an infirmary, she ended up getting some answers to all the questions that had been forming in her head. and the rest, is history.

Relationships: Brielle has always been too shy to talk to anyone. She never had any friends, and especially not a boyfriend. If she even tried to talk to anyone her cheeks would flush up to bright pink.

Other: Brielle has one item she can't without, her arm cuff. Her father said that before her mother disappeared, she left Brielle a gold arm cuff, with a ruby encrusted into it. Brielle never liked wearing it, but her father never let her leave home without it, now she couldn't live
without it


*~Silvypoo~* (Chaser of Artemis) (Silverfur) | 14363 comments *definitely

You might have to expand on her history a bit, like how she eventually got to Camp Half-Blood, where she started from (like where she was born and lived), and her relationship with her father, possibly how her parents met, and how she found out that she was a demigod.

Other than that, I like her. :)


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Megan Fitzgerald (nyancatluv) | 10 comments Ok, so can I redo her history?


*~Silvypoo~* (Chaser of Artemis) (Silverfur) | 14363 comments Yeah, so long as you just edit your post.


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Megan Fitzgerald (nyancatluv) | 10 comments This may be a really stupid question but, how to i edit my post xD


*~Silvypoo~* (Chaser of Artemis) (Silverfur) | 14363 comments Ummm well if you're on the mobile version, you can't. :3 If you go online to the regular version if GR, then there's an option underneath your posts that say:

Reply | edit | delete post

Click edit, and there you go!


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Megan Fitzgerald (nyancatluv) | 10 comments Oh... Well I'm using mobile and I can't use the pc version cause I'm on vacation... Guess ill have to wait until I get home...


*~Silvypoo~* (Chaser of Artemis) (Silverfur) | 14363 comments Okay, that's okay. Understandable. :)


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Megan Fitzgerald (nyancatluv) | 10 comments Ok fixed her history ( ^ω^ )


*~Silvypoo~* (Chaser of Artemis) (Silverfur) | 14363 comments Approved. :)


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