Let's All Write STORIES!!! discussion

she was one small red headed girl walking through the croud of people just like her, but she was different, she stopped in the croud and looked up at the always dark sky and then to the lamps everywhere that gave them actual light.

then suddenly all went black, the red head was not surprised this had been happening a lot lately. she waited for it to end, but this was the longest they had yet, would it ever end....

(crowd, spelled with a W, :D)

((what's this about?))

(IDK, what do you have in mind Taleoflostink?)

((wow.......major mistake sorry.....i was thinking that the whole world was lit by these lights and that they begin to go out and evil creatures? begin to invade, i built it off of the idea in the brainstorms, also like it said in there at first the main characters would not be the heroes....what do u think))

((interesting . . . the lights thing sounds like Ember. So, the characters would be the bad guys?))

((characters are still good but at first they are watching somone else try to save the day but then they step up to the job look in the brainstorm))

((okidoki!)

((makes a bit more sense, but where to go from where you have it, i don't have a clue.)

but......it did time for her to get her next assignment in the sewers....a repulsive job for most but for her a perfect time to see what was really going wrong in trastopa, she knew there was a group of people trying to fix it all. she just stood by and watched but she always thought it was good check up on things everywhere in trastopa.....just in case

Sparks flashed, and the lights dimly came back on. Stars were seen in the distance, but they just weren't bright enough to light an entire city.

not even bright enough to walk clearly, she headed off to her sewer station