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Jul 29, 2010 10:41AM
Well i've finally gotten around to doing this. I'll add different stories as they come and updates to when i have added the next chapters and/or questions for advice from you guys.
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http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
Title: Chosen
Description:
Lilianna Has always thought of herself as a freak. The people around her have convinved her that she is. Only her mother has been supportive, but now she's gone.
Lily, now 16, doesn't know how to handle seeing spirits and being tortured by them and other unknown beings by herself. She suffers through endless nightmares, bruises and cuts that hardly anyone, sometimes even her stepfather, won't believe how she got them. Only Liam, her stepbrotehr knows the pain she goes through every day of her life, somehow worse after her mother has passed.
Now they have moved to New Haven, Vermont, and she's hoping for a brand new start...
...But somehow, she believes everything has gotten a hell of a lot worse than it ever has been.
Title: Chosen
Description:
Lilianna Has always thought of herself as a freak. The people around her have convinved her that she is. Only her mother has been supportive, but now she's gone.
Lily, now 16, doesn't know how to handle seeing spirits and being tortured by them and other unknown beings by herself. She suffers through endless nightmares, bruises and cuts that hardly anyone, sometimes even her stepfather, won't believe how she got them. Only Liam, her stepbrotehr knows the pain she goes through every day of her life, somehow worse after her mother has passed.
Now they have moved to New Haven, Vermont, and she's hoping for a brand new start...
...But somehow, she believes everything has gotten a hell of a lot worse than it ever has been.
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
Title: Dance With A Demon
Description:
Evangeline is the oldest creature to walk the earth. She's also the oldest wedding planner alive. Every few centeries, she has to change her company's name, fake her own death, move to another location and start over. Yeah its a a lot of work but she doesn't mind. To her, this is fun. Being a vampire, having fun every weekend, knowing every event in history, remembering old friends...Life's good for her, don't you think?
No its not. Out of the blue, people around Evangeline are dying like crazy. She fears for the bride she is working with, thinking she may be next. She can't decide if its her bad luck or she's cursed.
Well none of that matters when her old companion, Eric, is gruesomely murdered. Now she knows there is a murderer on the loose and they're out to get her. How will she handle this killer? One way only: Be the vampire she is.
Thanks to the helpful Words from Garrett and Lacey, I'll try to finish this story.
Title: Dance With A Demon
Description:
Evangeline is the oldest creature to walk the earth. She's also the oldest wedding planner alive. Every few centeries, she has to change her company's name, fake her own death, move to another location and start over. Yeah its a a lot of work but she doesn't mind. To her, this is fun. Being a vampire, having fun every weekend, knowing every event in history, remembering old friends...Life's good for her, don't you think?
No its not. Out of the blue, people around Evangeline are dying like crazy. She fears for the bride she is working with, thinking she may be next. She can't decide if its her bad luck or she's cursed.
Well none of that matters when her old companion, Eric, is gruesomely murdered. Now she knows there is a murderer on the loose and they're out to get her. How will she handle this killer? One way only: Be the vampire she is.
Thanks to the helpful Words from Garrett and Lacey, I'll try to finish this story.
ok so i have two book covers for 'Chosen'
which one do you like better guys??
http://www.goodreads.com/photo/user/3...
or
http://www.goodreads.com/photo/user/3...
which one do you like better guys??
http://www.goodreads.com/photo/user/3...
or
http://www.goodreads.com/photo/user/3...
I like the first one better! It seems to fit with the title better. :)
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
Title: If I Survive...
Description:
Brennan Coliver wishes for a lot of things. All she can do is wish now. There's nothing she knows she can do besides it.
She wishes for nicer clothes and shoes. She wishes for better friends that actually care about her. She wishes that the people who weren't her 'friends' would just leave her alone. She wished she had different parents.
But the one she will do anything to fullfil is that she can protect her brother, Max, from their parents.
Brennan knows her parents are deadly to them. Several times she and Max have nearly been killed by their stupidity or addictions. Brennan has nearly died twice from her father's horrible beatings. She fears about Max if they did kill her. Who will keep him alive from them? She knows its time to get out before it's too late...
...But how does she do that when no one will believe a thing she says?
Warning: This story contains drug, alcohol and sexual references. None of the teen and child characters are acting this out but it is in there.
Criticism is greatly apprieciated. guys!
Title: If I Survive...
Description:
Brennan Coliver wishes for a lot of things. All she can do is wish now. There's nothing she knows she can do besides it.
She wishes for nicer clothes and shoes. She wishes for better friends that actually care about her. She wishes that the people who weren't her 'friends' would just leave her alone. She wished she had different parents.
But the one she will do anything to fullfil is that she can protect her brother, Max, from their parents.
Brennan knows her parents are deadly to them. Several times she and Max have nearly been killed by their stupidity or addictions. Brennan has nearly died twice from her father's horrible beatings. She fears about Max if they did kill her. Who will keep him alive from them? She knows its time to get out before it's too late...
...But how does she do that when no one will believe a thing she says?
Warning: This story contains drug, alcohol and sexual references. None of the teen and child characters are acting this out but it is in there.
Criticism is greatly apprieciated. guys!
