Writing Haven discussion

Ummm...This is for my writing(duh). I'd love any feedback, good or bad. I just want to know how I'm doing so far. Thanks.

This is my novel called Daydreamer. I'd really appreciate any type of feedback. I hope you enjoy.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

This is a spin-off of Daydreamer. I wouldn't recomend reading this unless you have finished at least chapter 3.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

And finally, this is a fan-fiction I am writing of The Hunger Games. I'm still working on the title, so if you have any suggestions please let me know.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Again, I'd love any type of critiques. Thanks.

I just re-wrote Chapter 7 of Daydreamer, so if you have already read it, I'd like you to check it out. I think it's a lot better than my original and I hope you guys do too. Thanks.